
Tokyo: Starting from the Magical Girl Entry
东京:从魔法少女词条开始
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 772k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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There were a lot of inexplicable tweaks in the early stage, and I even went to become an idol.
A little bit of reflection
1. The protagonist is a semi-comical character. 2. The protagonist is a half-magical girl who takes the entry and puts it on herself to transform into a magical girl. 3. The protagonist transforms into a magical girl halfway through to train the neighbor's little sister to become an idol. If you can't accept it, quit. The above is my feeling about quitting after seeing my neighbor making idols. Second revision
Personal review: Kamen Rider-like magical girl
This book is about the male protagonist transforming into a magical girl, at least until the male protagonist returns his transformation ability. But in my opinion, the special thing that makes this book different from other transformation stories is that the male protagonist actually transforms into a magical girl to solve problems just like transforming into a Kamen Rider - the male protagonist's behavior, whether before or after the transformation, is basically like that of a Kamen Rider. (And for now, the male protagonist's transformation into a magical girl is more like Princess PreCure, the sister of Toei Kamen Rider) In my personal opinion, the difference between the transformation into a magical girl in this book and the transformation into a Kamen Rider, except that the form upgrade of Hatsuka uses the "original intention" of a magical girl, basically only the fact that the leather sheath worn during the transformation action is not in the shape of a Kamen Rider, but in the style of a magical girl.
The plot of finding the neighbor kid is a bit difficult. They all hit people with wine bottles and entered the battle, but somehow compromised again. If you want to be funny, you can't make the protagonist look stupid.
What the hell is Mahou soju?
Mahou Soju who wants to be the light but also the light!
I lost a bit of favorability in the early stage, and I felt that there was no need to write it. If I did, I would just feel that the male protagonist is very classic Asasi...
Uh-huh, the title and introduction didn't make it clear that she was going to become a magical girl.
Although the protagonist has killed many gangsters and seems to be very decisive in killing, he still feels like a slovenly good-for-nothing uncle who just waits for death. He lives a useless life. Is it to suit his age? Does anyone like this tune now?
Later, the female goose said to her mother: Mom, you are old, so please leave it to me, Brother Kitahara.
Classic magical girl theme, the writing is not that novice, you can check it out
It's okay, but I don't know how the author intends to treat the relationship. I don't know whether it will be a traditional male protagonist's harem, or a transformed harem. Looking at the long-term idol mission with the red entry, there should be many transformation plots in the future, or maybe you can speed through the mission to get the entry and then change the system? Magical girls are just for land reclamation? After all, the entry level of this magical girl is a bit low) It is recommended to strengthen a wave of Cang Yue-chan quickly)
It turned out that the hero turned into a magical girl and slipped away
A good book, worth reading!
The protagonist has two forms: male and magical girl. The male form opens a harem, and the magical girl form comes to the world with great power! It was indeed a bit toxic at the beginning, but the author's poor writing style and logic made up for it 🙂. As soon as I saw the author's explanation in the comment area, I knew that the protagonist would definitely come to the world with great power and destroy everything. The plot is cliche but it's okay👌🏻. I think the shortcomings in the logic and writing style of this book can be ignored! Because once a cool article talks about logic and shows off the writing skills, the author will most likely become a literary and pretentious person. If it is a new author, it will probably be even more serious. As a newcomer, the author writes really well, the story is interesting enough, and the setting is very novel. It is a book worth reading.
Breaking news! Please read it!
It's not very good to follow the data. I will update on Monday and Tuesday! The new book issue is almost over, and there is no last round of recommendations yet. I beg you all book friends, please read more!
Please read it!
Dear gentlemen, reading the readings is the first difficulty in the new book! As long as someone keeps reading, the author's bacteria will be invincible!
Starting from more than 100 chapters, the telekinesis dungeon made me want to vomit. I had been invincible until now, and suddenly I started to crush the protagonist. There were dozens of pictures at a time. The more I read, the redder and warmer I became, and the more I read, the more disgusting I felt. The previous ones were all fixed. I couldn't stand it until half way through this dungeon. I have to wait until this dungeon is finished before I come back.
Will it be fun to fight
Things to know before reading~
1. The protagonist is a semi-funny character 2. The protagonist is a magical girl 3. The protagonist becomes a producer and idol halfway through 4. In the early stage, there are some poisonous points where the protagonist is frustrated and stupid 5. In the early stage, daily life accounts for a large proportion, and the system and ability are not strong. Thank you for reading. The poisonous points in the early stage have been improved later. If you have any suggestions for the plot, please feel free to leave a message~
Book friends, the last few chapters have been poorly written! I'm so sorry! Let's jump and watch! The manuscript has been written, so I will update it tomorrow and the day after tomorrow. I will try my best to get through this plot as quickly as possible!
Good news!
Got a round of recommendations! Thanks to my friends who have supported me along the way! I will update on Monday and Tuesday! There are still some minor flaws in this book in the early stages. Thank you all for your tolerance. I will work hard to create better stories!
Laughed angrily
Really caught. The words "Tiger and Wolf" can only be deleted. It doesn't matter if the kiss is marked red, what does it mean for Heart Racing, JoJo Standing, and Killer Queen to be marked red as well?
If you have the ability to act alone, you won't make trouble and always do daily things.
The protagonist has been too weakened in recent chapters. I think you want to write a battle of wits like Jiojio, but I think it all depends on the protagonist's numerical value. You don't know how to write a battle. The protagonist doesn't use a substitute, so I won't mention it. The telekinesis ability is weaker than Xiaogang before Greed Island. He can use coagulation. What about Jian and Matou. There are no trait abilities at all. How about writing an adult version of Sky and Tyrant. There is also the ability to exchange space. Why can't people be directly transferred to a high altitude? Ordinary people can fall to death within 3 meters.
Looks good, keep up the good work
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He already has telekinesis ability, and he can use condensation at first hand. This talent is even more exaggerated than Xiaogang's.
Chapter 196 is blocked
…I suspect I'm being targeted. It's obviously just a kiss with a few words of tiger and wolf, isn't this okay...
Chapter 199 is blocked
Due to force majeure, the marginal content, the sister's emotional monologue and the brother's thoughts have been deleted.
Chapter 249 has been deleted
The marginal content was deleted by Shen He
Chapter 288, Shen He made random corrections for me
Shen He deleted some hints. But I don't know why I changed one sentence to another repeated sentence, so I can only change it again.
The order of chapters is out of order and has been modified.
I'm impressed by Writer's Assistant... The scheduled release actually doesn't depend on chapters, but on the order you click...
Chapter 185 is blocked
There are major deletions and major changes, and it may take some time to see them.