Starcraft: the First Equipment Slot at the Beginning

Not very good, there are too few introductions to the use of plug-ins, and the economic allocation of the protagonist is too rubbish. First of all, the protagonist is a killing system, so the first thing must be to think about the possibility of working part-time in the slaughterhouse, or the possibility of part-time job in executing criminals. The protagonist has never thought about this from the beginning to the end. Son, if you know that crystals can be exchanged for development points, prepare to exchange all development points. Gene development potions can only be bought with money, which is also crystals, and development points only need to complete the first slaughterhouse part-time job, etc., For example, if a hero Alliance gold coins can be used to buy skill points. The protagonist is going to buy all the skill points, and then the 11th level minor skills are fully loaded. Dema with the Dolan Sword will fight the opposite Dema with the 11th level endless blood-drinking attack speed shoes. If it is true, you can donate your brain The author of the equipment is probably too lazy to think too much. He changed factions and maps, and was actually not curious about whether there were new equipment. My first impression was that it was such a huge empire, with prisoners, police, soldiers, and special forces all using the same equipment. Mainly speaking, the protagonist written by the author does not look like a human being, like a chess piece

Chapters 9, 10 and 11. I don't know what the author's motivation was in writing these three chapters, but they were either deleted or completely changed. Too outrageous

For example, when mechas can use ten thousand meters as the unit, people who read the introduction will think that it is a fantasy novel about the interstellar world at first glance. Those who read fantasy will not read interstellar works. Those who read science fiction will subconsciously not want to click on the first picture when they see the completely unreliable concept of ten thousand meters.

It describes too much suffering at the bottom, and the protagonist needs to be the savior! Not interesting.

In this hellish place where people cannibalize people, an innocent little girl appears. You might as well believe that I am Qin Shihuang.

I don't even understand why you want to write this kind of children's plot. What do you want to express? ? Life is already hard enough, so why not write this kind of plot? I can't stand it every time I see this.

To be honest, if you see the fourth prince actually not kidnapping, but following the rhythm of others, your IQ will be lowered. Why don't you just kidnap him and ask his subordinates to replace him? Don't be smart for the sake of plot

The plot is very confusing, and the most outrageous thing is that he is about to leave, and the protagonist is left alone to be hunted. Isn't this a complete attempt to silence him? The key protagonist is willing to leave points to farm equipment. The number and strength of the enemies are unknown. Is it necessary to take such a risk?

Judging from the use of words, he is a novice

In that kind of environment, the protagonist wouldn't strip the enemy naked? The main reason is that the protagonist kills the wolf and doesn't drink the blood. He doesn't even want the prey. It's really a bit too much.

I gave up after reading more than 70 chapters... This protagonist is not very good... I didn't see the upper limit, and the lower limit weakness was too obvious. Plug-ins linked to equipment can suppress the protagonist's combat power at any time. Reality is already very tiring. I don't want to read novels and have to be substituted as a tool.

Goldfinger is boring, and so is the plot.

At present, the restriction is still to fully equip it. Once the equipment is gone, it will be useless.

No, the previous golden entries and golden equipment, so many chapters have passed, and the effects have not been explained. Have you forgotten it?

After reading the first 10 chapters, the biggest problem is that there is not enough description before the conflict in the story. I feel that even though I saw this small conflict and small climax, I do feel that the cause of this conflict is too abrupt. One reason for this is that the author's outline is not detailed enough. There is a framework, but the small framework inside is not supported. However, the author's writing is still good, and the minor flaws above do not affect reading.

Has the author read Tuan Youyuan's book? I feel like you can learn some techniques later on, instead of just being a thug.

The corners of the mouth are raised too much, which affects reading.

This is Han Laomo's vest, right? The style and routine are too similar.

What the hell? Want to enter the palace? Further study is not a good thing. Only by starting and ending can you have a great future.

I gave you so many monthly tickets and said I was just a eunuch? Money back in Geneva

Hurry up, I'm already hungry for coins 🙂

How do I feel that I have seen it? The ones at the back don't look much like each other, but I've definitely seen the ones in the front.

Update soon, give me two months of tickets

Kuaijia and you

If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitor will retreat in fear, and the moral gentleman will rejoice This is a feat worthy of praise by both Yao and Shun! I have heard that calves born in sheep pens do not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? The reason why Qidian is strong is that it has inherited the etiquette and skills of its ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, and you become tired instead. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen ! The reason why Bai Jin can have tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say. However, Poujie cannot get royalties and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference There is one thing that makes you cry for the author, and there are six things that makes you sigh for the author. Since ancient times, people have often used very passionate words to express their opinions. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to touch the heart of the actor. Exciting words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or not Those authors who rarely update, delay updates, or are late to update, have no time to feel sad about themselves, so they are drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them;

5 monthly passes, understand? 😎

This writing style is not that of a novice writer, it looks like a veteran at first glance. At least above average.