The West, 1899: Exorcist of the Wild Frontier

It's okay, although the combat power rating system doesn't satisfy me, but overall it's still above food and grass. In addition, the author is so short, I feel like I will feed him to death. If I don't recommend it, I will be killed by the Qidian mechanism.

The writing is very good and the characterization is good, but the plot is too confusing. The protagonist is completely pushed around and very passive. I haven't released my instincts for half of the time. I am still describing the hours before the explosion. You have barely beaten the monsters and you have no ammunition. You are so poor that you don't take the initiative to do something. The initiative of the time traveler is not shown at all. It is very uncomfortable to watch.

I'm just curious that you don't like America. Then why did you set the background to the United States?

Currently there are two updates per day, before 9 a. M. And before 5 p. M. The manuscripts are sufficient and the updates are stable. Welcome to join us! 🌹 The motivation for writing this book was a game called Hunt Showdown, which this year was linked to Let the Bullets Fly. The bandit wearing a fortune mask traveled through the west, hunting all kinds of monsters. Before this, I have always wanted to write about the West + Cthulhu. I like both themes very much, but there are too many gems in the front. Whether it's the movie Red Dead Redemption, the Rockstar game of the same name, or Quentin's The Hateful Eight, Django, or even domestic movies like Two Flags, they are all excellent. At sunset in the wilderness, a wanderer rides a skinny horse in the wind and sand. The road ahead is full of monsters and monsters, but he lights up a cigarette without caring, and the revolver around his waist is stained with rust. If I could write about this awesomely handsome tough guy feeling, it would really be a worthwhile endeavor for me to do this job! As for Cthulhu Xiang, he is even more like a senior. Lord of Mysteries, Whispering Psalms, Mysterious Earth Sea, Demon Hunt in the Fog City... It's almost like a great master is ahead of you! So, I have never dared to touch on this subject, for fear that I might not write it well and make people laugh. Before I started writing, I talked with the editor about the outline, the plot structure, the characters, and I played Cousin 2 again as a way of collecting stories (actually I am a game addict) 🤭 I was well prepared and wrote a lot along the outline. At least for now, I don't feel like I'm writing too much. As for how it is, it depends on whether you like it or not.

The bullets were all used up, the special weapons were scrapped, and it was just like nothing happened. There is also memory, it seems that the memory has been completely absorbed, and the memory seems to have not been absorbed at all, it is very fragmented. Reality does not need logic, and the novel has no logic, is completely mechanical, and has no sense of substitution.

I have been interested in the Western Shadow theme for a long time. Basically, I have to give it a try as long as I have some exposure to it. For authors with certain potential (@北海 Mujing), I will even ask if it is a Western Shadow theme every time I open a new book. However, the quality of the books I have found so far is very few, and the remaining ones basically cannot grasp the scale of reality and extraordinary. Either they are overly realistic and become historical novels, such as "New Gods of North America" ​​(this book is actually quite good); Although this book is just the beginning, the overall look and feel is interesting, and the reading experience is interesting. The arrangement of the protagonist's predecessor can be seen that the plot is also planned, and the subsequent development is worth looking forward to, such as gangs, duels, aborigines, canyons, train robberies, bank robberies, gold rushes, hurricanes, voodoo... Will these elements appear in the future? Let me talk about some personal expectations: 1. I hope that the characteristics of the subject can be fully utilized. Many works with similar themes are pure gimmicks, that is, the place names are changed, and even the monsters are still the same as the bad streets; 2. The author's original intention of writing about the atmosphere of the Wild West is good, but the readers are not from North America after all. While showing the characteristics of the former, the latter must also be considered. The degree of acceptance, the scale of which needs to be carefully determined by the author; 3. I hope the author can reasonably control the compatibility between the protagonist's ability and the intensity of the plot. In order to attract attention at the beginning, the protagonist is involved in a major event that is far beyond his ability. Later, there are big problems with rationality and the story collapses. I have seen too many works. In this book, the author left a hidden line of the protagonist's original undecrypted memory, which is a softer approach. I hope the author can continue to be patient. Finally, I sincerely wish this book will get better and better!

In the early stage, the protagonist's high status and the intervention of high-level forces that are difficult to control were shown, which gave me the feeling that no matter what the protagonist does in the future, he will be led by the nose. This kind of writing method breaks down very easily. One difficulty is how the protagonist can reasonably develop until he is evenly matched when facing an enemy that far exceeds his own strength. As long as the high-level power is written stupidly, the plot will collapse, which is very difficult to balance.

I was so tired from reading it that I wrote more than 200 chapters in the protagonist's novel in a few days. The psychological changes of the characters and the changes in the plot are quite rapid. There is no foreshadowing for the drastic changes in the protagonist's abilities. Adding a system is more like an amplifier. It would be better not to have a system.

Isn't this author the legendary bad guy?

Advantages of this book: 1. The Western Phantom theme is undoubtedly a more innovative background. Most of the Western fantasy works currently written on the Internet are at the core of European mysterious culture. Your book belongs to a very small number of American mysterious cultures, so it is naturally more fresh. For decades, it has been the elves, dwarves, giant dragons, and I am tired of aesthetics no matter what. The first section of the book that impressed me was when Tesla carried an amplification device full of knobs and instruments and used special gloves to release an electromagnetic storm. It was completely different from the tired robed mage holding a staff and firing fireballs. It was very impactful and allowed readers to feel the core of two cultures at once. The difference; 2. It can be seen that the author has a lot of plans for subsequent content, such as Color of the Star, Dark Side of the Moon, Polar Cross, Gate of Allen, Roots... It is conceivable that this book will not be boring even in the later stages of writing, and it will fall into the endless repetition of changing the map without changing the content. The strange circle of literature, an author with sufficient knowledge reserve, imagination and planning ability can keep readers fresh and curious; 3. The author's design of various organizations conforms to the general impression and is well differentiated. For example, the government fully reflects the scale, size and resources. With source advantages, if you have more money, you can naturally make long bets. The quantitative advantage of directly managing ordinary people also makes it pay more attention to projects with batch, scale, controllability, and repeatability; Pinkerton Office is a purer extraordinary organization, and its core Allen Gate and founder are very mysterious. Disadvantages of this book: 1. The content of riddles is too high, and new clues appear from time to time, making it difficult to clarify the clues. All kinds of information are complicated and often only half of them are explained; 2. The background of the protagonist is too big and complicated, and it is not even possible to see what the protagonist's true power is. Just like everyone else, they all belong to the traditional upgrade style, only the protagonist seems to have wandered in from the mysterious world of resurrection, busy balancing multiple evil bosses in his body... 3. The world background is too desperate, even asking a question or taking a second look at your own base camp may cause big troubles, and frequently get involved in troubles that are far beyond the scope of your abilities. Based on the above summary of advantages and disadvantages, I personally hope that the author's new work can continue the advantages while improving the shortcomings. For example, continuing the western ghost theme, train robbery, cowboys, duels, voodoo, tornadoes, deserts, canyons, gold rush, and gangs are all interesting elements that can create a sense of picture. If used properly, they should be very attractive; On the other hand, it is recommended that the author can improve the plot and reveal settings. It is a safer way to go step by step and focus on the protagonist to steadily fight monsters and upgrade and gradually unlock higher-level content. Many readers have a stereotype of western stories as simple and crude, and they will just pull out a gun if they disagree. However, too many high-level influences are introduced too early in this book. Another point is that the character design of the protagonist can reflect some American characteristics, but after all, it is a web novel in a Chinese environment. It may be more appropriate for the protagonist to conform to the general situation of web novels. This is also one of the meanings of time travel. Finally, congratulations to the author for becoming a father during the serialization of this book. Personally, I had a daughter in 23 years. I admire the author for having the courage to make bold statements and keep updated while taking care of a newborn🐶 In short, I hope the author's next book will be more exciting and successful!