
Panlong, I Have an Equipment Slot
盘龙,我有一个装备栏
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- Ongoing
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- 271k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 7d ago
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- Qidian
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Although I don't want to offend you, you have too many poisonous points. Modifying the original settings at will is the biggest problem. The consciousness of any high-level god is more than 10,000 meters, and there are 1080 cities certified by the Lord God in Hell. The rest are illegal. As long as you are not strong enough, demon castles can attack you at will. You actually have big cities, middle cities, small cities and other Lord God-certified city leaders, and you can even have a five-star devil as the city owner. There is basically no inkstone itself, and one treasure is sold for 17.3 Million. You can actually buy more than 100,000 lower-level godheads and more than 1,000 mid-level godheads. Then you yourself explained that a lower godhead costs 100 and a mid-level godhead costs 10,000. How did you buy it? I didn't leave the city in the meantime. I rented a house in the city and lived there for 100,000 years. Didn't I need any money? In the end, as long as a high-level god went to test the devil, he didn't even need to take the test. He was directly issued a three-star devil certificate and he was convinced.
Why is there always a Panlong fan setting where you can buy and sell soul defense artifacts at will? This thing is extremely difficult to refine, and Shura, who is good at souls, has to customize it for the god to use it.
Too many private settings
The number of cities, the strength of the city lord, the scope of the superior god's consciousness, the soul defense artifact, divine power, the price of metal life...
There are a lot of bugs, and there are so many settings that conflict with the original work that I wrote without having read the original work. It's uncomfortable to read.
Come on, there are a lot of mistakes in this writing. First of all, in terms of numbers, I feel like I haven't even graduated from elementary school. I sold treasures for more than 15 million inkstones. I also wrote 100 lower godheads and 10,000 mid-level godheads. I was able to buy more than 100,000 lower godheads and 1,000 mid-level godheads on the spot and put them into the space ring. Not long after, it became even more outrageous. I also wrote that more than 15 million inkstones can be exchanged for more than 1 million lower godheads, which is enough to strengthen the body. I must be nervous. Multi-thousand × 100 is more than 100 million, your math is so wrong Then, the protagonist has just become a god from the holy realm, and after training, he actually wants to do a 5-star demon mission. There is no one in the city who can directly get started with a 3-star demon mission. ? Why do others still do star-raising missions? Unless there is a strength exceeding 7 stars, the city lord will directly issue a 7-star demon medal In the end, the lowest strength of the hell city lord is a seven-star demon, unless it is a city built by himself, but the city built by himself is not the main god, there is no main god guard and no demon castle. You actually have a 5-star demon city lord, and the demon castle is all connected, and you can see the high-star demon missions in other places. You actually said that there are no demon missions above 5 stars. Isn't it funny?
It's a pull within a pull. I read some of the original work and then started writing. The whole process is a minefield and I'm not good at math. Just go ahead and write. It's not for you.
In other words, you are looking for reasons not to let the protagonist cut off the four main gods, and just want to give Beirut to the protagonist, without considering the original character at all. You must know that the protagonist's identity is completely incapable of convincing Beirut to the point of entrusting the main god. First of all, if he is not a native of Magnolia, he will lose most of his trust. Secondly, Lin Lei and Qing Huo can be said to have grown up in Beirut. They have a good understanding of their characters and personalities so that they can be trusted by Beirut. The protagonist cannot gain Beirut's trust at all. Even if the protagonist you said absorbs the three godheads and has the master-level strength to help Beirut, the question is why Beirut should trust the protagonist. This is the main godhead, and it is not as easy to gain trust as you think.
I just read the first chapter. I will briefly explain the reasons why I can't stand it. The first one is what kind of knowledge karma is there. To be honest, in my personal opinion, modern people go to Panlong to understand the law and their talent is definitely higher than that of the natives. To understand the law itself requires talent and inspiration. Do the souls baptized by the information explosion of modern people have no advantage over the native people? Not to mention anything else, you know more about the mysteries of various departments than those lower gods in the holy realm, right? All this knowledge must be bought with money. The second point is that the power of elements condenses divine power? What is the elemental ocean for? The difference between refining the godhead and becoming a god independently is that the world helps you condense the god body, and the other is that you absorb the divine power in the ocean of elements to transform the god body.
Said he didn't want to be noticed by the Lord God!
As a result, I went crazy to gain a sense of presence, and my left and right brains interacted with each other.
A Shura will never lack Godhead, almost as much as he wants. Where did you say it came from? It's very simple to kill with one word! There are so many tribes and ethnic groups in hell. If you kill for 10,000 years, your godhead can be counted in tons. Hell is full of killing and no one cares about you at all. I don't think it's enough, but there is also a divine plane!
The materialism part above is quite poisonous.
You have too many secondary settings, and you have also changed the original settings.
A peak Shura makes you too poor to write. Get this godhead thing, get it worth millions or billions. Isn't it very simple? If I remember correctly, the seven-star peak demon in Panlong's original work is comparable to Shura. The purple-blooded demon slaughtered an elf tribe with a population of one million!
The protagonist is only physically strong, has ordinary five fusions, and does not have the power of the Lord God. If he encounters Shura who is good at souls and has the power of the Lord God, he will be killed instantly with one move.
What is the current level of lv5 at the starting point🤡🤡🤡🤡
There are so many secondary settings that I can't stand it anymore.
It's okay in the early stage, but it's a mess in the later stage💩
There are many toxic dramas, I suggest you watch them again before writing.
I went to read "The Coiling Dragon: Lord of the Ice Flame" and I thought it was pretty good.
The protagonist is getting weirder and weirder in these chapters. He was quite rational at first, but after he started to get involved in the plot related to Beirut, the original filter began to reflect the protagonist.
In Panlongli, Hongmeng Chuangshi's craftsmanship is very rough. The world and creatures created are of inferior quality.
Referring to Linley's godhead weapon, if pig's feet are refined into the four main godheads of earth, water, water, and fire, can it be refined into the body of Hongmeng.
It's so good that I finished reading it in one sitting, but it wasn't enough. Crush all previous Panlong fans.
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Chapter 49: Persuading to Resign😁
It looks really good! Worth recommending!
It's been almost a month, has it been cut yet?
The idea is good, but the details are useless... The idea is in vain, Another: The author is undoubtedly a scumbag... There are calculation errors everywhere 😅
Why is the text copied twice in one chapter?
Introduction to the novel I wrote: I escaped from death, but was imprisoned in the forest by the woman who rescued me. She is the only survivor of the rumored brave team that has been wiped out long ago. She is a brave warrior who has killed countless monsters. She saved my life, but she didn't allow me to leave the hut even half a step; she took care of me tenderly, but when I tried to escape, her eyes were as cold as ice. "This time, don't think about escaping again." I thought she was being imprisoned, but as we got along day after day, I saw clearly her fragility and tenderness hidden under her paranoia. The follow-up high-energy plot and famous yandere scenes will be arranged soon!