Tianlong: Hibernating Gongyeqian

This is so embarrassing. This writing style, this writing style, screw it🍅

A piece of shit to answer the question, a piece of shit to quickly go to work in the factory

What the hell is Jiangnan Love Qingluo? ! If you want to fall in love with Li Qingluo, you should travel at least twenty years earlier to intercept Hu Duan Zhengchun! It is better to fall in love with Li Qingluo than to raise Wang Yuyan...

Pretentious and far-fetched. I have done my homework, but the answer sheet is completely off topic. The author should find a class.

. . Seriously, why don't you just pay for traveling through Miyano earlier? . . . Wait until Lao Wang dies and come out to take over. . . Wouldn't it be a waste of time to do this five years in advance?

At the beginning, he said that he was going to follow Gou Dao, but in the end, there were all kinds of behaviors that were inexplicably deviating from the original work The Murong family had so many people that they followed this big master all the way to kill an old man who was staying overnight Sometimes I think it is an AI text, but there are a few typos from time to time. It is indeed typed by hand I just want to ask the author what he was thinking when he wrote it

It's purely self-indulgent, it looks very tiring, and the segments are distributed ten years ago. The rhythm and content of the plot are very classical, and one sentence seems very tiring. It needs to be completely in line with the author's brainwaves to watch it. It's not fun at all. The IQ logic emphasized by the author only sees a self-righteous person with rigid thinking and one-sided cognition. I can't stand my feelings about the characters. It all depends on the author's setting.

It's boring. Murong Bo is written as a voyeur who stares at his retainers all the time. How boring is he?

At the beginning, the author wanted to write a novel to comment on all the characters and martial arts in The Eight Tribes of the Dragon. The result was that he felt that Gong Yeqian and Shenzu Jing were the best, so he was about to start writing the novel, and then he traveled through time. It was really exciting! ! Who would choose him if he could travel with memories? It's really weird that you start in the mid-30s. If you are unlucky, you will die at any time. Nowadays, if the writing is not good, everyone will classify it as being written by Ai. This book is really embarrassing and poisonous, and it doesn't look like it was written by Ai... What kind of little genius?

This is really a novice. The eight-part essay on the Internet is hard to swallow.

Does anyone really doubt that this is AI? The smell seems too strong. Is it my imagination?

The male protagonist is sick after being kicked in the head by a donkey

Is the author very young? Are you a high school student?

The Battle of Shaoshi Mountain is already in the later stages of the novel. From Duan Yu's appearance to the end of the novel, it took nearly 4 years, and he was reborn for decades. The introduction you wrote is not good enough. He is one of the most useless reborns.

Isn't paragraph 5 of Chapter 1 of this book the same as the AI ​​copywriting on Douyin? The only thing missing is the BGM. Was this book so AI-heavy from the beginning?

After looking at the settings, it looks pretty good. Looking at the first chapter again, it is difficult. The writing is not like a novel. There are too many explanations and the setting is thrown out of my head. I suggest you read more about other people's writing.

① The Xiaoyao Sect is the sect with the highest martial arts among the entire Tianlongbabu. It is impossible for its leader to practice a martial arts that is full of hidden dangers. At least the original novel didn't say that Xiaoyaozi and Wuyazi died from the hidden danger of Beiming's magical skill ② There is even Beiming's rebirth method in "Tianlongbabu: Tianshan Tonglao", which can even cultivate the soul. The soul can directly regenerate the physical body, which is more powerful than rebirth by blood ③You took advantage of Murong Bo's casual visit to Shaolin Temple to learn secrets, went to Langhuan Paradise to learn Beiming's magical skill and ran away, he can How can I find you? The world is so big. How can a stranger be found in a vast sea of people in a feudal society? Why should he have to act for five years? ④ Even if Murong Bo is sick, he will not follow the protagonist at any time. He should not go to the rivers and lakes to cause trouble and rebel, and go to the Shaolin Temple to secretly learn martial arts secrets. How can he have the time to keep an eye on a subordinate whose martial arts and strategies are mediocre?

The lack of updates is a big pain point! Don't open it both ways

The author stopped updating? Although there are many people scolding it, this is a good thing and it is better than coding on a single machine.

In my thirties, I still like eighteen. It would be better if I could live forever.