Starting from Being a Coolie at the Dock, the Liver Became a Martial Arts Saint in the World.

This should be the author's first book, and it can be seen that he put a lot of thought into it. But the pacing is very poor, and the story is blocked on the eighth floor. The author calmed down and put it on the shelves as soon as possible. He was very diligent and did everything he needed to do.

Template articles, content is king. If the author does not write your own content, it is still the same as the dock martial arts school blocking the road. Without new things, it will be difficult to sign a contract.

Nowadays, it seems that if the main character's beginning is not difficult or difficult, he would not be able to write it. Each one is tied to a template opening.

I came across a video of Qinghu's review at Station B. My personal opinion is that your mood at the beginning was not lifted. The first chapter of Gou Sheng's book is about the contempt of friends for the protagonist, and the second chapter is about the contempt of relatives for the protagonist. This covers almost all of a person's social circles, giving people a sense of expectation that the whole world does not think highly of you, but you are the most successful. In the first few chapters, it is more difficult to make readers like a character than to make readers dislike a character. Hate is easier than love. Readers will read if they want to see when the protagonist tramples on these villains. Therefore, there will be several villains at the beginning of the martial arts novel, and people obviously hate the latter more than a pure bad guy and a villain who is unwilling to backstab. Also, the sense of crisis is not strong. In Gou Sheng's book, it is clearly written that the villain is eyeing the protagonist's ship, which is equivalent to affecting the protagonist's core interests. The protagonist will not survive if he does not resist, but your villain does not give the protagonist such a sense of crisis Previous issues of Sanjiang The core of the first three chapters of the book "Starting from the Vajra Kung Fu to Physical Sainthood" is the same as that of Gou Sheng. Friends and relatives look down on the protagonist, the villain wants to touch the core interests of the protagonist, and there is a good person who sincerely helps the protagonist. Every point is enjoyable The above is my personal perception.

Many provocative plots are inexplicable and are forcibly creating unreasonable conflicts.

It's a pretty good Yakuza novel, at least the protagonist isn't that aggrieved.

In fact, the writing is okay. Is this ready to be cut?

Basically, dogs on the roadside will bite the male protagonist, and the author thinks it is reasonable 😥 and it is too frustrating.

There are too many poisonous points written in it. Most people think that it is normal to be reasonable. This book is really not good.

Come on, you can update more every day, otherwise it won't be enough ❤️

I found that many people were complaining about why my direct disciples were provoked . I didn't understand it. For example, if an illegitimate child comes to the palace for a month and is then named a prince, won't the previous brothers come to provoke him? And this is a martial arts school, and people's tempers are even more explosive. To take a step back, even if I offend you, Henry Zhang, what serious consequences will there be? Will he be killed like in the palace? Zhang Xuan is unknown, how can he convince Han Tie and make people from Han Tie's faction say nothing. Secondly, most people are neutral. They are about to fight. People from the martial arts gym just come around to watch and don't boo. Some people even think that this is not allowed and they should please Henry. So what else can I say. And what Zhao Zhenshan described is the kind of person who doesn't care about false etiquette. He only needs to accept Zhang Xuan as his direct disciple and bow, which shows that he is looking for strength and talent, and the capable ones will be the ones. Then if Han Tie and the others beat Zhang Xuan, Zhang Xuan will definitely not be his direct disciple. If Han Tie beat Zhao Zhenshan, he would know that although Zhang Xuan is highly talented, he is not good at actual combat. Instead of feeling that Han Tie contradicted him, he expelled Han Tie from the martial arts gym. If you have any questions, you can ask them and I can make corrections. I will also explain my thoughts when writing below your comments. If you are just spraying for the sake of spraying, then forget it, the temple cannot tolerate it.

Finally, I have a thousand collections. Thank you for your support. I also hope that you can help me read more. Thank you all.

The writing is very good, but the updates are too slow and not enough to read. Hurry up and put it on the shelves for updates. I'll give you the monthly pass.

Too little? Who can read this little bit? Those who don't know think we look down on novels 🙂

The first few chapters were not very good, but the later chapters were fun for me to read anyway.

The first time I read it, I read a few chapters and decided it was boring and just a routine, so I left. Later, when I was browsing the bookshelf, I saw an update, so I took a few more glances and found that it was good.

It can be regarded as a pure novel for newcomers. The previous content also suffers from the common fault of many newcomers, and the logic is inconsistent. But it can also be seen that the author is very careful, and the subsequent content has been significantly improved. He no longer relies on templates to write. I can only say that as a newcomer, it is good so far, keep up the good work.

Many people in the comment area said that the previous content is not good-looking, maybe because the release of Shuangdian is not intensive. He was suppressed by Wang Lin and ridiculed by Wang Shuo, but in my opinion, the protagonist is bullied by the villain at the beginning and then fights back. This kind of story is really boring. The way the villain is treated as a fat sheep plucking his wool actually aroused my interest. After all, this villain will definitely be punished in the future, but he will just receive more benefits. Of course, this is just my own opinion. Everyone likes different types. I still prefer books outside this template.

Tomorrow is the climax of this book. I hope you all can read it. Thank you all. I wish you all a happy day, enough food and sleep.

How many words have you read? Do you have straight hair?