In the World of Heavens, There Is Something Wrong with My Painting Style!

I just want to know how the protagonist got started with this evil sequence. I haven't even written one or two chapters. You guessed it, it's written without a beginning or end. Did you get started with this evil disease? Then you wrote earlier that the protagonist wanted to ask the teacher for advice like an ignorant novice. How come, the teacher said a straight line and ignored it, and then you started to get started? They also said that there were evil diseases in previous lives. Didn't you come from the earth in your previous life? Are the diseases brought from the earth evil diseases? What kind of disease is that? Have you seen it?

It feels okay but the writing power is average. It is my favorite setting novel, two worlds type (may develop into the heavens), but the author still has the problem of God's perspective. Some places are not explained clearly, and the look and feel is not smooth enough. With the average writing style, some places are like foreshadowing, but it feels like a bug. Moreover, the collision of different knowledge systems (complementarity/pretending from different worlds) that I was originally looking forward to is also relatively weak. It should be the power system of the two worlds, but it seems that there is no difference, as if there is only one.

It is the first time for a newcomer to write a book, and there will definitely be some shortcomings. Admit it when you are wrong, and stand at attention when you are beaten. Please be gentle!

It feels like reading My Weird Life, but this one is easier to understand.

Nowadays, the settings are too broad. Not to mention the evil disease of the protagonist, there are three worlds, and there are also small replica worlds in the main world. The system is too complicated and the author may not be able to grasp it.

Regardless of the weird writing, it is actually a serious fantasy novel. It just writes some new systems. The only one I know now is Confucianism and Taoism. I will look at other follow-up works.

I have been waiting for the second world to open, but the system seems to be dead after the first world opens. It is so boring. Come on, author!

There are also settings for recurring resurrections, Huanru, Guanggong, and Shouci, but there is no two-realm crossing.

Immortals and Buddhas are all dead, why should mortals live? You don't have any brains to write a book from the beginning.