Doomsday Shelter, Starting with a Simple Spear

There was a substitution later. It feels like the front and rear cannot connect.

It feels like it was written with AI, and it also feels like a person wrote the beginning and then sold it to a studio. I don't know what happened.

I read eleven chapters. Neither the protagonist nor the heroine seems to need to drink water. 😅

This is written differently. In the first place, the black stone test was used to defeat monsters, but later it became a matter of picking up monsters. In the front, the black stone has a system to assist in absorption, but in the back, it relies on exercises. Then the writing became messy. Zhang Deming's arm was injured at first, but it was almost healed in the middle, and then he became one-armed, and his writing was messy.

Don't kill him and save it for the New Year. This protagonist is not a virgin, so just be neat.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is barely readable; The details are not good, and it meets lv1. Logic, world structure, characters, etc. All need to be polished. The following parts can be brought up if you put a lot of thought and energy into research.

You're procrastinating, you're always losing your word count, your shelter isn't upgraded, you're just knocking around all day long, your higher math class isn't as boring as you are.

There is a system, but you are also submissive, and you are constrained by being a good person. If you give up, you will feel tired just looking at it.

Before chapter 50, it was fine. It can be said to be an invincible farming novel. It's easy to read. After chapter 50, I changed the setting and the upgrade method to suppress the protagonist's combat power. He is invincible when defending the base. No matter how difficult it is to describe, how awesome the monsters are. The protagonist can defeat the boss at the same time. When he comes out of the door, there is little Karami, so he has to take his time like an ordinary survivor. It's like playing a game. It's obvious that you're cheating, but you have to act.

The eight hundred kilogram lizard was crushed by a concrete wall two meters thick and three meters high, and I was stunned. Your dad is laughing so hard. Poisoned to death

After reading part of it, it can be seen that the author has some ideas, but there are problems in expression and data calculation. It is recommended that the author check it again before sending it out.

Will the shelter facilities not be built? Fireplace Biological dissecting table? What about property viewers?