Ji Dao Horizontal Push, Starting from the Killing Explosion Entry

It's very watery, there's a lot of water, and there's also an ancient monster who says he's level 4 and has 90 points of strength. It's too dramatic, and the sense of immersion is gone. It's recommended to change it to a leveling system that fits the background of the times. The protagonist can keep the leveling system. Didn't the author notice that every time a monster talks about his level, there will be comments later? It's because I lost the sense of immersion and the drama suddenly came to an end. I felt very bad after reading it.

As for the protagonist's plug-in, I feel that the protagonist's abilities are all plug-ins and cannot be integrated into the body. They are not cultivated by the protagonist himself, which is a bit uninteresting.

Gokudo-ryu, childhood sweetheart, little rich woman, beautiful girl, really an invincible title

The quality of the opening chapter is very high. The protagonist of the Yakuza style has been established, invested, and earned some coins. He should be able to sign a contract. Come on (it feels like the old man is reincarnated)

Write directly after the entry: How many words are in stock? You don't have to write another line to read it. Readers will say that your word count is too low.

I hope you can give me a lot of advice and thank you for your trouble