Naruto: I Am in Kirigakure, but the System Says I Am in Pirates

I keep writing that the main character is elegant, his head hurts, and the other one is water, all kinds of weird...

It's too poisonous 🙂, Rory is so rude

As soon as you didn't die as a time traveler, you knew the plot and you became familiar with this gay Zabuza. . . Is it necessary to write it so awkwardly at the beginning?

A discussion of more than ten chapters, can this be read?

Wow... There are so many dialogues, it goes around and around, it's so long-winded! And not a ninja at all! Ninja is a military group, not a rap group. What the hell are you talking about?

To be honest, I think it's pretty good. I don't know why your grades are so bad. The only thing that might be a little bit poisonous is that your strength span is too big. You actually become invincible after eating the fruit, but you make it weak at first and then suddenly become invincible. In a time-traveling mist, Shinobu would be out of luck if he didn't take down Mei Terumi. Also, since driving a pirate is not as good as a superman, and freezing is not as good as thunder, the threshold is relatively low. Maybe the plot at the beginning was not compact and it got too long and lost some readers.

It's not that you freeze Orochimaru and crush him. His cells have stopped dividing. How can he survive? I just want him to live. He is so powerful. Go write Orochimaru. What kind of protagonist should you write?

Life return is very buggy in the ninja world. As long as you can eat it and your physical strength increases, the upper limit of chakra will continue to increase! There are also black technologies in the pirate world - artificial devil fruit technology, artificial weapon bears, blood factors, etc., Which are all very powerful technologies. If these knowledge can be rewarded, the world of Naruto can go sideways.

It's obviously a thought-through, not a brainless post.

I don't know if it was intentional or accidental.

The beginning is good, but it gets worse as you go towards the end. Forget it.

It was a bit long-winded at first, but after I got through it, the main character looked very good as a Mizukage. It didn't slow down the pace or overwhelm the combat power. It was quite enjoyable to watch 😜😜😜

Are so many people scolding me? I think it's okay, but it's very possible that the eunuch is.

To be honest, it would be a bit amateurish to think that Mizukage didn't write about tailed beasts in Chapter 20.