Man in the Moon World, Lion King Leon Jonson

I haven't finished it either, I've read more than a dozen chapters, and it doesn't quite suit my personal taste, so I don't have much to say. The level is probably just average, with no extravagant work and nothing objectionable (I have only read a dozen chapters, so I can't guarantee what will follow) Strictly speaking, this book should be called: Time Traveling Moon Has the Power of a Lion King. If you look at the introduction of the book title, you don't have to expect to see the cool Lion King in Warhammer. The Lion King here is just an ordinary person who has gained the power of the original body.

Primarch

I want to see blood flowing like a river, let's fight, let's fight

This is not the Lion King. This is not the red one-eyed Ogryn and his relative, the colorful clown Ogryn. With this kind of ability to recognize people, the protagonist will rule Britain for another hundred years. Not to mention the navy that will dominate the sea in the future, I am afraid that he will not even be able to raise a fishing boat.

Full of clouds and half-understanding From character design to writing It is better to open a new book. Xingyue started writing carelessly from Merlin. I know Master and King Arthur come from the same place But don't you think it's inconsistent? Should the Sword Emperor be the protagonist or the old woman? Moreover, when the protagonist can defeat the old woman by relying only on flying bricks I just want to say: the original body is the original body, it is not an instant kill It is better to restart and write a new book. The lion part is even more sloppy The stereotypes are gone Inner circle, secret words, silence, reliability, confidentiality, loyalty. None of these stereotypes are depicted. You wrote The Lion King, if nothing else, these things need to be sorted out. Babar, you are chasing traffic, can you please get ready?

He traveled to a world with supernatural powers and became a handsome boy dressed in red. His father's dream of saving all mankind failed, and he was almost killed by a canine gunman. A plug-in was immediately launched to fight the Ancient King. In the future, there may be other versions of himself that he can't deal with. Am I Shirou Emiya? Let's take a look at where this is. In the world of space opera, there are gods and all kinds of lunatics emerge in an endless stream. Here are genetically modified warriors fighting endless swarms of insects, and over there is an omnic rebellion. From time to time, you can see primitive people fighting against space battleships. As a background, there have been several devastating wars in the past. The force I am in now is inspired to travel across the galaxy. Understood, I am really Shirou Emiya. This is to link up the Star Dome Railway. By the way, where is the train set? Huh? What is the assassination of the Warmaster? Forget it, let's make peace with it now, let's tell the emperor the news first.

The Primarch described by the author is just a little bastard who has free time and the body of the Primarch. He messes around and bombs his own house. The superhuman brain of the Warhammer Primarch shows no signs of it.

It's really interesting in the comment section. Someone actually said that the original body can explode stars.

In addition to the space jump that liberates the essence of subspace, the Lion King is only at the level of a knight, an archer, a spearman, a berserker, and a swordsman. Because the war hammer blows to the sky, but the expressiveness is not up to par with what is blown out😂

Why do some people always say that the Primarch is strong? The Primarch is strong, but in contrast, the Emperor's psychic powers are stronger. If the Primarch does not awaken to the essence of the warp, he will be seriously injured or even die after taking a few Riemann tank cannons.

To put it bluntly, it is easier to write a protagonist with a diaosi character who has a lustful personality, and he also has the largest audience.

Are you the Lion King? Isn't this Tang San😂

The beginning was also boring. The protagonist gave me the impression that he was a big fool and pretended to be smart.

Generally speaking, I can barely watch it. Although it is neither Chinese nor Western, the original body does not understand it clearly and has no psychic powers. Based on his own mysterious immortal genome, he created twenty superhuman genomes without using cloning technology. Can I have a baby? Are you saying that Morgan is better than genetic technology 30,000 years later? If it could be done so easily, wouldn't it mean that there would be a lot of criticism among the four gods?

I feel numb, I regret subscribing, what did you write? From the beginning, it seems pretty good. From the beginning of Morgan's rebellion, it becomes more and more bloody. The author gets more and more excited as he writes, right? Immersed in my own world

It's an ancient Stallion Fighting World text with a warhammer and fate skin. It doesn't feel out of place to delete these elements and replace them with ancient dynasties. Not good

There is a beast in the Lion King, but it does not mean that he is a beast on the outside. The one who is the same on the outside is called the Butcher's Nail Jinchūriki. Besides, this writing method cannot be applied to that original body, unless the author pulls out the second and eleventh ones.

This Lion King... Really has nothing to say! Old man Huang has nothing but inherited the physical fitness of a young man... This is not a beggar's version of old Chinese medicine. You are only left with technology to survive

It feels like my guess has come true. Not only can Morgan not die, but he can also take away the child and raise a child who rebels against his father. And then the protagonist is still wiping his butt here. Let me put it bluntly, you are already a Primarch, and your combat power is so low that you can't beat the planet. Why are you still playing house here? Is it fun? The protagonist looks like he's having fun It made me laugh so hard If I keep writing like this, I'll just do it for fun

Author, haven't you read the original work? The Lion King's full name is Ryan Al Johnson Have you ever heard of the word Al?

I don't know if something happened to Morgan, but if I keep writing like this, something will really happen to this book 🙂

Dressed in Western lords and warhammers, the core is Eastern language, which is extremely inconsistent!

Regarding the comments raised by readers, especially the character design of the protagonist, the author has received them and has adjusted the following outline. If you have any questions in the future, please feel free to point them out. As long as they are normal comments, the author will read them. Please also please refrain from personal attacks, swearing and swearing. With a pragmatic attitude, we will build a harmonious reading atmosphere and strive for a positive discussion environment. Please also take care of me.

This book has been included in my daily guide seven times. I have to take a bite at some point.

Damn it, the main character ran away like a brainless person.

This book is actually quite interesting, but the author's story design and arrangement have some problems. You may not see what you want to see, or it may be "tasteless". Generally speaking, this is a Ben type moon fanfic, with very few Warhammer elements. The plot of the Holy Grail War is a bit formulaic. This book might have been playable in the past, but it seems a bit boring now. There are too many routines written by predecessors. There is no excitement or freshness in reading this book. If you are not picky about your taste, you can still watch it. After all, the idea is really interesting.

It's just a joke in the first three or four chapters, which is a bit interesting, but the rest is nothing.

I don't know what it is about. The more I read it, the more awkward it became. I skipped reading it at first, but then I really couldn't read it. I regretted subscribing 🙄🙄🙄

I was mistaken, I thought it was the Lion King armed with super beasts.

Okay, don't be the first one to accept a second-hand product.