Douluo Dalu: The Peerless Little Huo

The name Yunhao makes me always feel that Huo Niang is a boy (

Why is Ling Luochen's performance stronger? Moreover, Ling completely became the main controller during the game. Huo Yunhao did nothing except increase the ice attribute, and the soul bone was also lost by the butterfly. Huo Yunhao has been changing his physique, but it has no practical effect. It is so strange. After Ling appeared on the stage, it was as if she was the protagonist, and most of the descriptions were on her.

It looks great. Come on, the author. There are reasonable changes without major changes to the original work. The look and feel is really good.

The author please don't follow the original work. I hope to get rid of the so-called test of Tang San, who is actually a dog-trainer. No matter how he creates his own god, there is Yi Lao, the Holy God of the Dead. If he takes it apart, he can create a god of death, a holy god or a god of magic. It is better than being trained by Tang San all the way to the divine world.

Does the heroine have cp? Is it a sex change from the original work? Will it follow the original plot or will it be adapted later?

I feel so bored and I don't know what I'm writing. Who is this Wang Chen? There are so many inexplicable scenes. Isn't it about the original cp? How come you didn't write about Dong'er?

Very pure fanfic, not bad, not bad

It's quite good to read. Many plots have been changed very reasonably. However, I don't know if it's a problem with uploading the article. There is always a chapter missing. From time to time, a plot is missing inexplicably. It affects the viewing experience, but it is really very well written and enjoyable to read.

Is the author anti-Tang, pro-Tang, or neutral regardless of Tang?

It's a good book, but it's a pity that this part is not suitable.