Martial Song: Reclaiming Yanjing from the Start

When I read Chapter 10, what can I say, the writing style is good and the emotional value is also in place, but the common tactics of the protagonists in historical novels basically fail. The protagonist took more than 300 remnant soldiers gathered along the way and pretended to be captured to trick him into opening the city gate of Yanjing. There were only more than 100 brothers left, and Guo Yaoshi who was accompanying him had 20,000 men. The protagonist actually asked to take more than 100 brothers to guard the bell tower and resist the thousands of Liao troops who returned. Two consecutive bloody battles were indeed heroic and brave, but they seemed too brainless. A politically mature and ambitious general should actually hoist a righteous flag in the city to recruit heroes when he enters the city. This is not only to expand his team, but also to prevent the capricious Pharmacist Guo from stabbing him in the back, instead of mindlessly blocking the knife for Pharmacist Guo. Many of the war scenes seem too mindless, sensational for the sake of sensationalism.

Think of the male protagonist's name as Zhao Gou, and then look at the female protagonist. I thought Qidian was so wild now

Traveling through the two Song dynasties would not have gone far without military reform, including the next thousand years, where we would have stayed in place. Through the decentralization of power between the Privy Council, the Three Yamen, and the Commander-in-Chief, the Song Dynasty successfully solved the chronic problem of the late Tang and Five Dynasties of "strong soldiers will chase the commanders, and strong commanders will rebel", and achieved the central government's absolute control over the army. This system is effective in peacetime or in response to local rebellions, but it cannot support large-scale, active foreign wars. Once wartime is entered, frontline commanders (such as Xuanfu envoys and Zhizhi envoys) need to be given real "wartime command authority." The fragility of the system will be exposed and the military's offensive capabilities and battlefield initiative will be sacrificed. Once power is delegated, it will be like Liu Miao's mutiny, such as [depositors' deposits (three Yamen), bank loans (Privy Council), lenders (Jie Shuai), large loan repayment depends on character]. Refer to the political reform, such as the Ministry of Finance, Organization Department, Justice, Government Affairs and other vertical divisions, selection and promotion through state education, Taixue, and imperial examinations. Taixue Prefecture's academic examination system, establishment of military schools and personnel promotion and selection methods, followed by disarmament and training of new troops, must be combined with economic system reforms, such as transfer to state-owned enterprises. Reforms must either kill people and eventually backfire, or take advantage of the situation and be overwhelming. If we fail to reform the military, we will have one more Zhu Yuanzhang, and we will have to face the Manchu-Tatar pastoral slave regime later.

Author, your writing style is very good, and the concept is also very good. Logically speaking, the score should not be so bad I read it again from the beginning and found that after the story of Xixia began, the role of the protagonist could not be said to be absent, but it was also greatly reduced. I thought I was watching a group portrait. There are advantages to writing this way, for example, it can better present the calculations in the court, and the historical background is also very clear. Personally, I really like your portrayal of Cai Jing. But the disadvantages are also obvious. The sense of immersion is extremely poor. It's a pleasure to read the pictures in the novel. However, the protagonist doesn't appear in many scenes, which is very uncomfortable. So I think that if you want to achieve good results, you still have to focus on strengthening the role of the protagonist. You have already created the background in depth enough. The subsequent calculations between Song, Xixia and Jin can be skipped a little and simply explained. There are also very few scenes for the heroine, so pitiful, as if she is just a tool who gets married and goes to the border to get land. This is my personal opinion. I hope you can take a look at it. After all, the results are indeed a bit disastrous. I think this writing style should not be based on this. At least the monthly ticket should be seven or eight hundred. When it was good, it would be thousands. Now it is only more than two hundred a month. More than two hundred is the level of free water. You are not reasonable.

I think it is very well written. The military is like written by Emperor Taizong of the Song Dynasty. It is soul-stirring and full of positive energy.

The way you write it, I feel like you won't miss anything if you read one chapter every 2 or 30 chapters.

I feel like it's a bit too much in terms of value, and it's not silky smooth. Could it be less? Write more plots. Sometimes it's not safe yet, so I just start adding value without doing anything, which is a bit embarrassing.

If you dare to write more than a dozen chapters after entering a city, I will really admire you!

If it was ten years ago, it might be a cool article

Secrecy is about zero Does not obey orders Poor military discipline