Tokyo: Again, This Is Not a Romance System

The writing is very good, but the title of the novel is a bit of a drag.

I am invincible😁

It's hard to imagine that at the beginning of the 21st century, when all kinds of romantic light novels were under the control of virgin authors, such a dark horse author who was not a virgin could emerge! For a long time, there has been a consensus in the book club circle that only virgins can write fascinating love novels. They use their brain-racking fantasies to fill in the missing love experiences to make the novels fuller and make people empathize with the ecstatic love. At the same time, it also makes many non-virgin authors unable to hold their heads high in this field, because some beautiful things can only be embraced through imagination. I don't understand, and I think many virgin book lovers don't understand either. This novel full of virgin fantasies is actually written by a non-virgin author. The shock to me is no less than the discovery that the Chinese characters are pasted on after using serum for a long time. This smell is so authentic!

The advantage is that it has good lightning protection. The disadvantage is that the author himself knows that the perspective is very confusing and makes it look tiring. Moreover, there are almost no explosive points in the first 100 chapters, and in the end it feels boring. But there are very few people writing about Tokyo now, so it's good not to have a bad job. I hope I can keep writing.

I have already posted 5,000 words today, which is actually enough. Maybe it's because I still have a little extravagant hope in my heart, and I want to at least be recommended in one round. Anyway, lend me your power!

The things written by Little Chef Man are the most delicious

It's great. Is the author Xiao Chunan? I finished reading it in one go.

Great author, Xiao Chunan's works are indeed the most delicious😋

The author should have read the book where the girlfriend is a voice actress. I still can't read the ending. I hope it will have a good ending.

Not bad, not bad. Riqing's daily life and twists are very delicious. The three heroines with different personality flaws bring three unique feelings of avoidance, possessiveness, and sexual desire ´ₒ⦁⩊⦁ₒ` I'm really looking forward to the follow-up 😍

It looks good, it looks good, come on, come on, come on, I have to finish it.

It's pretty good. It's not a bulldozer plot, and it's not greasy either. It feels like a light novel.

Come on, author, don't keep it private🥺

The writing is not bad, one day it will lighten up, don't look like it anymore

The advantage is that the emotional description is delicate, the heroine's action psychology is in line with the character, the distortion of the Shura field and the gravity are very interesting, and it is worth watching. The disadvantages are: 1. Some of the marginal descriptions will make it appear that nothing actually happened. This is the case in the first thirty or forty chapters, and basically nothing happens in the next twenty chapters. I have encountered such a problem 2. The motivation for emotional entanglement is a bit confusing. The first heroine's description is good, the second heroine is barely plausible and needs to be watched for subsequent plot development. The third heroine feels that the development is too fast, and she starts to 0721 the protagonist without knowing what is going on. . . 3. The title of the book is a bit bad, does it feel too blunt? It is inconsistent with the core of the book Give me a monthly ticket for encouragement

No ccb (Sorry to leave)

I think it's quite nice. I don't know why there are so few people. Maybe it's because the cover of the book is not good, but the writing is quite good.

Come on author, don't die

It's a very interesting Japanese light novel, and the protagonist's honest "virtue" is also very comfortable But I feel that there is no progress in the career line. If I let several heroines revolve around the protagonist for too long just relying on appearance and personality, I personally feel that it is far-fetched The strength of Japan at the beginning is well written. At first, I thought that I would grow up step by step with the protagonist (such as making it a Hatsune project), but suddenly I jumped out of the avoidant attachment personality and became a texting girl. It felt like the author wanted to temporarily go offline to make room for other characters, but the strong feeling was gone. Yue's words were actually the same as the question the protagonist asked her in the latest chapter, "Why are you special to him?" The protagonist was a bit insignificant to her, and he was rude to her in many incidents. For example, when he asked if he could live with the protagonist when he had no place to live, the protagonist said "no" and then stopped, and then moved to her to find a hotel by herself. In addition, there are many rejections. The argument is to reject her desire for control. I think this is very unfair. , It turns out that there is a sentence in the middle, "I gave up the idea of defeating them"; in the middle of the card game, the protagonist suddenly decided to go to the toilet, and then there was a quarrel in the toilet. When he came back, no one was there. If he felt something was wrong, it would be better to find a way to lose and be punished than to hide in the toilet. He still knew how to let it go in the afternoon It is a bit troublesome to read the idea in single quotes

The advantages and disadvantages are obvious, there are no explosive points, and the descriptions of the Shura Fields are a bit dull a few times, making you feel like you want the Crimson King. However, the impressions of the female protagonists are very good and have deep memories, which will reduce the boredom caused by dullness, and the emotional scenes are also performed well. In the middle period, Asahi's avoidant personality scenes are reduced a lot, which seems a bit fragmented. This kind of plot is originally blunt, but the writing is not polished enough, which reduces the impression a bit. But the author's emotional description makes up for this a little. The character's characteristics are well portrayed in the early stage. When this kind of plot appears in the middle stage, you will also consider the idea of ​​"want to watch it and look forward to the follow-up development". You can also feel that the author's writing style is getting better and better, and he has made great progress. All in all, the author is great. Xiao Chunan's works are indeed the most delicious😋

You don't want this kind of thing

This is a daily guide. After reading a few chapters, I feel that it has a very Japanese flavor. Personally, I think it's pretty good.

The writing is still light and interesting. Good luck to the author.

I hope I can survive. There are too few such themes these days.

It has been recommended by many people. Has the author noticed that many people have read it?

The quality is very good, I hope it can survive

Oh NO, I hope I won't have to stop full attendance next month.

The milestone is still at 3,000 collections. The 3,000 collections next door are still around the same time as this one. Now it has taken off. Come on, stay alive. Author