Versatile Mage: An Ordinary Mage

Just don't have a heroine. The heroine is used to cover up the story and over-plot. It can allow your novel to retain some readers when you encounter problems, and it can also fill in the gaps between climaxes, so that the plot will not be too compressed and depressing.

You participate in the competition, and you dare to break through the super level. This is too poisonous

It feels like a bit of a composition.

Some long and boring things are written too plainly, like a running account. How should I put it? Some of them are unbearable.

I am speechless. On the one hand, I am worried about not getting votes; on the other hand, I obviously have the strength but do not participate in big events such as the West Lake Black Snake to express myself to get votes. Now I really go to guard the house. If you consider yourself ordinary, don't think about the benefits.

Can the author stop adding "hehe" and "hum" when people are talking? Modal particles are important, how can you add them once in a sentence? Especially Dean Xiao, how can you say a word like "hehe" When fighting, you have to "hum" every time you cast magic It looks too awkward.

It's still very good, not so impetuous, and doesn't require so many bloody plots. You just need to develop normally in your own way!

The writing is a bit bland, but there are no mistakes.

I don't know how long the author can write 🙂