American Comics: All the Peripherals I Created Have Come True

You spend too much time explaining the plot of the original work. You don't need to write these things. Even in the plot where the protagonist Goldfinger absorbs the power of destiny, you don't need to describe one by one which plots gave him the power of destiny and how it is different from the plot of the original work. Readers won't care about these. If you write them all, it will only make the article very, very cumbersome and wear down the readers' patience. Other than that, the writing is great, the writing is good, the logic of the characters' behavior is also on the level, and the plot design is refreshing enough. Especially the protagonist's personality, I like it very much. This kind of Slowpoke-like but very self-centered personality is great for a heroine, very cute

The writing is too verbose and the pace is very slow.

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