Douluo Dalu: I Swore Brotherhood with Chrysanthemum and Ghost, and Spread Spirit Transmission Across the World!

Traveling through Douluo's private server, soul bones can be exploded at will.

Okay, okay, just don't lick your ass.

There are a lot of wrong sentences in the first chapter. Are the reviews praising this book serious? With this frequency of wrong sentences, I really can't believe how careful the author is.

As soon as I saw that I deliberately refused to absorb soul rings for several years in order to survive for hundreds of years, I really couldn't stand it. I'm mentally retarded.

This book is good. It is normal for twins to have high talent in martial arts at the beginning but not to defy the heavens. They have experienced growth and development, have logical thinking and character, and their sanity is online. I like to watch their growth process. I suggest that they have more communication scenes or fighting scenes with the generation at that time. I hope they have a longer experience before they reach the title. They try to trick Yu Xiaogang in the early stage, and they try to trick Tang San and Yu Xiaogang in the later period. I think The ratio can be 2:1 or 2:2. I don't mind either having a single female protagonist or no female protagonist. Don't think about Bibi Dong Qian Renxue and Shrek's Seven Monsters female character A Yin. I think this is the best among your three books. Of all the Douluo derivative novels I have read, yours will definitely be in my top three. This is a good novel. This is the first time I give a gift to the author. Come on.

Go faster and stop writing in a sloppy way. Don't be like your Tara Mask. You write well in the early stage, but then you crazily stretch your hips and raise the opponent's strength in the later stage.

The idea is good, but it's too cliched, a bit too abstract, and the author's writing skills are not strong enough.

This author must be a newbie. Starting from the first chapter, various messy settings are frequently inserted into the text. And interrupts the reader's reading continuity

The writing is too taken for granted. Shuangwen has a sense of déjà vu

This book has begun to test the waters. Readers, please read it more. If you have any comments, please leave them. The author will make adjustments accordingly.