Naruto: Traveling Through Time and Space Starting from Seizing the Dragon Vein

Two pairs of kaleidoscopes that can restore pupil power are forced to look like gutter rats due to the so-called plot correction power/God's will. What's the trouble? Kenji and Obito are not so embarrassed, right?

I once read a novel with a similar setting, and it was also said that there were some plot corrections. It was a martial arts novel. The protagonist was already invincible and shattered the void. After only going out for a week or two, my wife had an affair with the male protagonist in the original plot, who was the protagonist's younger brother. It disgusted me to death.

In my opinion, the correction power is just an excuse for the author not to know how to change the plot.

Let me tell you my opinion. I thought it might be interesting when I started reading it, but unfortunately it became boring after about ten chapters. The so-called intensity of correction is too low. If the author pushed the correction to the highest level and even couldn't resist it, maybe this kind of subject matter is more interesting than the current way of writing that returns to the traditional Naruto upgrade system. It's boring to write too many upgrades and then return to the upgrade system. What will happen if this revision theory contributes the most is that this world is a theater for the birth of Naruto, or is this really the world? If this is the case, combat power is not needed and may even be a standard that will be targeted.

The omnipotence of divine magic in Boruto can indeed achieve the so-called corrective power mentioned by the author

The setting of the Fountain of Return to Light is good, but the Eight Thousand Spear itself is a small infinite Tsukuyomi, which can draw chakra to replenish the endurance of the eyes.

Sasuke Uchiha almost went blind when he beat Danzo, and Obito couldn't beat Minato. Why do everyone think they can overthrow Konoha by turning on a kaleidoscope? They really treat others as weaklings.

For example, how to deal with it if you know your fate? You can know the answer by referring to the sixth part of JOJO. If fate prevents A from killing B, then let C kill him. Destiny says that A cannot die before X time, so let A be on the verge of death until X time. Destiny says that A can only be killed by β, so let A hit β in advance. You can't say that your protagonist doesn't have even the slightest influence on his destiny. If that's the case, then your protagonist should be an invisible, unsmellable, unheard, unspeakable, untouchable, unknowable ghost in the eyes of others That's even simpler, just go to the cheat book. Anyway, the formations and other things in the cheat book can't sense your protagonist.

How do these people explain the Uchiha and Minato who are still alive in other worlds?

Uchiha Hikari and Uchiha Madara should be about the same strength, why are the two Mangekyo still suppressed?

It can be quite interesting

Japan has a culture of domination: no matter what the identity of the other party is, as long as the other party does not have a small group, they will dominate the other party Brothers Yu r>Uchiha was bullied for bullying others Gaara was bullied by the villagers because he was bullied by his father and had bipolar disorder Chirabi was bullied for not contributing Hinata was bullied for having a white eye Chouji was bullied for being fat In short, as long as you don't form a small group, the small group will bully you...

The protagonist of this book is Uchiha again.

At the very least, a novel should have a reasonable storyline, even if it's just in the first few chapters.

Quite interesting

The setting of the power of destiny correction is relatively ancient on one hand, but also interesting on the other. The plot interpretation based on this setting is quite interesting. I think it's okay when I watch it. Come on, author.

When he was reborn into the Uchiha clan, he initially thought there was no golden finger, and then used his foresight to forcefully open the Mangekyō Sharingan. He discovered that the golden finger and the Sharingan were fused to form a communication group for all realms. Have you done anything?

This book can be a good idea