Douluo Peerless: Unification Begins with Moxuluo

It's not very good, the time span is too far forward, and the plot is too compact. No time to develop at all. And since you accept this, Xu Tianran is good. Then you have to side with him. If you want to be independent, or follow other directions, then it is just a failure. Then the plot afterwards is too watery. There was also a Catwoman who kept assassinating her, but she was not beaten to death like a roadside assassin. It's another problem that no one takes precautions against this.

How can there be so much gold of living things 😅

Xu Tianran and Xu Tianzhen seem to be both talented people. It makes more sense for the protagonist to be called Xu Tianming

I feel a little confused. There are not so many authors writing The Gold of Living Beings, which is like Chinese cabbage. Isn't Jing Hongchen from the Hongchen family? How did you become a Jing family?

As soon as I read the title of the book, I knew that it was 10000% necessary. Sure enough, a flaw that requires soul power to be adapted was directly added at the beginning. Without soul power, it would be dead. The ability to directly adapt to the concept also seemed to be completely non-existent. The first soul skill was defense. What kind of defense thing are the nine shadow spells? Inexplicably, a useless and useless defense soul skill was arranged. What kind of defense does this thing show in the original book? You are actually looking at the shadow spell? It was even further cut. Once you have a soul skill, you have to kill the soul beast yourself before you can use it. This author is simply a genius and wrote the setting like this.

Can the author change the name of Jing Mingde? This is so fucking unbearable! Author, don't you think there is something wrong with the logic? Do you think it is possible to hear Hongchen laugh at Hongchen and dream about Hongchen, and their surname is Hongchen? If you insist that Jing Hongchen's surname is Jing, then why don't any of his grandchildren have a surname related to Jing? I just get more and more irritated the more I look at it

It's so childishly written. I feel like this writing style is the most energizing for love.

The original settings are not good, nor are the self-made ones. It is recommended to run a book with AI to practice first, and then go to other websites to write a few short stories. Douluo fandom is already the lowest threshold thing. If you can't understand it, there is no need to be a fan of online articles.

The protagonist is also described as being too fond of seeking death. Basically, Extreme Douluo is someone who seeks death by himself. He also likes to level up, challenge difficult dungeons, and likes to take chances.

Looking at your profile, I can tell that it was written by a child. Douluo Bloodline Continent. When your awakened martial spirit is completely incomparable with the royal martial spirit, that's when you die.

That's pretty cool to say, and it looks very frustrating.

I've been writing for a long time, but I can't understand something. What, it's going here and there? Where is Moxuluo? How many times have you appeared? What about adaptive performance? What about a slap in the face? Where is your pretentious article? You can't defeat him, but where is the part about you fighting back to kill him? Isn't that what you want to see?

I don't understand why it is necessary to write about the protagonist getting the chance to become a god, but also to write that it is given directly to the enemy. In the end, it is written that the opportunity turns into a murderous calamity, and it is repeatedly emphasized that the god of death can only be used in one paragraph.

I feel like 300,000 words is enough for the finale. It must have been written too quickly. The boss of more than 600 chapters was immediately scheduled to be offline. The next step is to prepare to fight against Emperor Tian, ​​right? When the hero comes out of the earth, he is invincible in the world. 😥I thought women's videos were fast 😅

My wheels exploded when I watched it, I don't recommend it very much.

The name given to Snow Emperor is rubbish and unworthy of it.

The spell manipulation technique should be able to control souls (