Dragon Family: Please Make Me the Emperor!

Personally, I feel that the flashback in that chapter appeared too early. It might be much better if it appeared dozens of chapters later as a side story. In this way, the endings of many characters would be revealed at once, which would somewhat affect the viewing experience.

Overall, it is a good book. The words and sentences are very much imitated by some Western writers. Chapters 1 and 14 both pay tribute to Marquez, and the style of the whole book is similar. However, because of this, updates are very slow, and the author has overlooked one point. Today's books are not attractive by writing, but by plot. The current plot is good, it should be about how the Paul family develops, and it should be about farming and group portraits. However, if the writing style continues like this, it will not only screen out readers who don't like novels, but it will also be time-consuming and laborious. I hope the author will work hard and write well!

Try not to post about what will happen in the future. What we want to see is the excitement of the present. It will be boring to watch the future. You can hint and foreshadow it, but don't write it outright. It's like someone told you that you will be a billionaire in the future. Do you still have the motivation to work and make money? The unknown is interesting. I have read so many books, but there are few books that clearly write about the future.

It can be regarded as a tribute under the Western fantasy system. It can be seen that the tributes include "How Steel Was Tempered", "Millions of Pounds", "Lord of Mysteries", "Devil's Law", etc. Although it is not too amazing, the setting is quite good. You have to look at what is written later to see whether this article has written its own "new"

It looks like a lot of effort, not the kind of effort that is hard to understand, but the kind of effort that makes you curious about why the author wants to write like this.

The first chapter is about a dragon being imprisoned, the second chapter is about a beggar who is living a miserable life, that's it, I haven't read the third chapter, the third golden chapter is just a mess

I personally feel that writing about certain things in the future too many times is the most important thing is that you cannot guarantee that you will be able to finish the book. Marquez's One Hundred Years of Solitude is a complete work. His timeline is in the past. It is not the same type as your online serial novel. You can cut it off at any time. The two require different perceptions.

I didn't understand that the previous one said not to tell outsiders, but in the next one I told my family and knights. Could it be that this doesn't count?

For example, I have just begun to look forward to the role of Elsa, and you tell me that she will die young in the future. It is very difficult to handle it. Writing this kind of plot occasionally can increase the sense of expectation, but writing it all the time will lower the sense of expectation. I already know the ending. What else do you write?

Even if I try my best to write about the difficulties and humbleness of the family and my humble background, there are too many willful and willful things in it, which usually appear among the pampered children of rich families. In contrast, the so-called aloof magician knight is more rational and gentle.

The writing style is really good, and the Western fantasy flavor is very positive. It is not like other Western fantasy stories, but it is essentially a routine article about killing monsters and upgrading. I feel that the popularity should not be so low.

In the last chapter before the release, I really don't like this Paul. As the head of the family, his origin is not something he can choose. The author has given him a big deal, but he has not grown up at all. I feel that he is just a Lin Daiyu-style background character. He just cries and talks some big truths. He has never understood the world. He doesn't think about how to educate children. It all depends on the author's hard recommendation, right? Do you think there are many readers who like to read nanny articles?

I thought it was an Ice and Fire fanfic, but it doesn't look like it.

A slave with the lowest status was kidnapped at the age of 10. His family was an ordinary slave in the countryside To be able to talk about the setting of this world and talk about life and family is so extraordinary.

It seems that it has been nourished to death. I kept it and forgot about it. When I opened it, I saw that it has not been updated for 5 days. I don't know how to be a eunuch anymore 🙂

Invited a navy? The writing is very average, so many people praise it

The duel between Paul and Edmund and the relationship between Ellen and the princess are so well written.

You shouldn't submit fantasy, you should submit fantasy. Even though the time travel is about dragons, the protagonist is actually an interesting family story with a large audience.

When I read book reviews, some people responded, "Don't write about things that haven't happened in the future. They're all quite disgusting. One or two is fine. They're in almost every chapter. It's too exaggerated."

Chapter 76 The eve of the decisive battle (after reading the following article, I know that the tavern owner told the Paul family in advance that Carlson was going to kill him, and this is related to when Paul planned to ambush Carlson. Why didn't he say it? It seems very abrupt. The reader should have a God's perspective, not this kind Personally feel that the plot is like a meteor falling from the sky. , Smashed the monsters, and during the chaos, Paul wanted to kill Carlson, and then Carlson also wanted to take the opportunity to kill Paul. The tavern owner knew the news that Carlson wanted to kill Paul, and told Paul in advance, and then Paul designed to contact the snake girl to be a traitor to kill Carlson, and then established a deep friendship with the tavern owner. Now the tavern owner is in danger, and he is in love. Yu Li wants to go and see it. Instead of the current situation, where he goes to participate inexplicably and takes the whole family with him, knowing that the younger son warns that there is danger, but he still ignores the lives of his family. It is not in line with Paul's character. The development of the plot is very strong. The protagonist in Chapter 74 feels that Paul's family is in danger. Why, yes. What about a third-level mage? The fifth-level mage is already a legend. The protagonist knows that with him, the Paul family will be fine. Why are they still worried? This kind of Riddler, only the author knows the reason, and the readers don't know the reason, is quite uncomfortable to watch, especially when the third-level mage is forcibly prevented from taking action There are many such writing methods that forcefully advance the plot and increase the difficulty.

The book is a good book and the author writes it well. But I personally feel it's too hard. Life is hard, and reading is so hard.

I haven't subscribed to the latest chapters and have no interest. I need to speed up development and expansion.

I thought this name was Game of Thrones

When I saw the introduction, I wanted to ask: Is there a pickaxe in this story?

There are basically no hiccups in Octavius's rise after the arrival of the princess, and there are only some key moments that need to be elaborated. However, too much acceleration will lead to a weak character portrayal. It is better to look at the author's own thoughts. After all, I am only a reader.