I Know All the Plot of Super Magician

Does the stand-alone game have in-app purchases? And it's not a decorative in-app purchase but a direct sale of strength? Does anyone really play this garbage game?

Looking at the introduction and title, it seems like there is too much conflict with the Super Mechanic.

It is recommended that the author use less of those exciting plots. For example, as for the identity being introduced here, don't jump to other places. After introducing the identity, write about other things. There's a fight going on here, don't suddenly change the perspective to another place and create riddles, otherwise the impression will be very bad. The most important thing for an author to write a story is to feel comfortable, coherent, and have his expectations satisfied. Don't let your readers' expectations be disappointed. Don't look better here and suddenly jump to another place. As soon as you write it like that, I want to skip a chapter and read the follow-up. It feels like you and your girlfriend have finished the foreplay and everything, and are about to get down to business, but suddenly there is a knock on the door. You think it is your parents, but when you open the door, you see that it is a salesperson. That feeling of being neither up nor down is particularly uncomfortable.

Sure enough, he is a eunuch 😅

The author's writing is too exciting. The anticipation is enough here, the appetite has been whetted, and he jumps to an unrelated matter. Forget it once, I can't help you doing it over and over again. The readers who write like this have already bought into the book, and then the first subscription collapses, and then they become eunuchs. The author should stop writing like this in the future, otherwise it will definitely not become popular.

Good book, excellent writing, good story, strong author

The rest of the writing is pretty good.

Everything else is okay, author, please do your best.

I've been a bit busy at work recently, so I can only write 2,000 words. I'll get back to it later.

It is very important to follow up on reading. If you think it is okay, I hope you can follow up on it! ! !

Exploding the sense of existence "Pleiades Star Official's Monster Hunt"

This is not more, it is too little 😡