Ji Han Guchen: Reincarnation of Jiang Boyue

Authors don't need to publish so many chapters a day. They can save them and publish them slowly. I've seen some authors say that for newly opened books, the more chapters they publish at once, the harder it is for others to see them. This seems to be the starting point mechanism. You can ask other authors in your author group if this is the case. I have finished reading the author's rebirth article. Very concise and carefully crafted. It must have taken a lot of time to write the article. It feels like the author has written it all in one breath and with passion. Once the feeling subsides, it will probably be difficult later. I have read online articles for more than ten years, and I feel that you still have some problems. The first person is too weird. Internet articles are more comfortable to read in the third person, and you can better express your writing skills. It seems that you are not writing online articles now, but writing compositions, lyrical compositions. Once you finish expressing the feelings you have put in, this article will probably be discontinued. It can be seen from your forced innovation of this chapter that you are greatly restricted by your first-person pronoun. If it were the third person, these chapters could be written into the article. I sincerely suggest that you change it to the third person, and don't write the content of the article into this chapter. The real skill is to write a good article, and don't expect to win by taking the wrong approach.

Although the writing is very good, it has been more than three months... Why hasn't it been updated yet?

The author's writing is very good and I read it in one sitting. Highly summarized and condensed. Of course, it's a bit dull. As for online articles, don't be too academic. You have to treat the readers of online articles as people who have graduated from elementary school or junior high school, and share more knowledge with everyone. For example, you can add background information, such as the life backgrounds of Fei Yi and Dong Yun, their characters and deeds, etc. Don't just summarize the character traits, you have to express them through certain things, right? The general background of the times can also be expressed by the joys, sorrows and joys of ordinary people. To tell stories more vividly, I'm not even talking about TV dramas, but movies. Many directors make a 90-minute movie about an event from the ancients. Don't be limited by a few words in historical materials, just process it artistically. I don't know if you have read "The Lord of Mysteries" written by Cuttlefish, who loves diving. It is really well written. What is even more rare is that after finishing each volume, he will summarize his writing experience of each volume and show it to everyone. Anyway, those who read online articles find it very rewarding, and I believe those of you who write articles can also learn a lot. Let me show you an excerpt from his summary. "Three refers to those people who were crushed into powder or rushed in in a hurry. In the history books, they have no names, no appearance, no past, no life, and only exist in simple numbers or descriptions. In a sense, aren't these "faceless people"? The simplest sidekicks, the least eye-catching cannon fodder, who cares what their faces look like? Just like the phrase "when people are hungry, they eat each other", how much sadness, pain, cruelty, blood and despair are contained in these six words, and how many living people without faces and names are condensed? Therefore, I tried to give some descriptions to the old Kohler, Liv, and Freya in the waves of the times, and tried to restore the hopes, hardships and tragedies of these "faceless people", making them look like people rather than numbers. Although this second part is a big reason for being scattered, it is the hidden main line. With their passing, more people like them have poured in, and the "faceless people" have always existed, and they are the essence of the times. A stepping stone, a pioneer of the times, and a true and indispensable character in the whole story. With this in mind, I abandoned a sadder and more shocking ending. After all, this movie is called Faceless Man. The reverse echo of the worst era and the best era can express what I want very well and powerfully. The era is advancing, ruthlessly and helplessly, but there are countless faceless people lying at my feet. "