In Douluo Dalu, My Martial Soul Is Mahoraga

There is no need to write about Moxuluo, he is too invincible. I am still cultivating my soul power. After absorbing two soul rings, I broke through the rules of the world and began to add soul rings without restrictions. I practiced by myself and got used to the soul core and divine position.

The protagonist is born with full soul power, and the Wuhun Palace awakens. Depending on the situation, it is not a waste of the Wuhun. Do you think he will report it? Will anyone come over? Don't fight for this kind of talent. Is it possible to keep him outside? Moreover, the protagonist needs resources but has no resources. No background, just an orphan. How can you be so picky? The protagonist is an orphan who earns money by telling stories in restaurants. When we arrive at Notting College, the protagonist is really rich. He gives the guard a Gintama coin at the beginning, and then gives him another when asking for directions. This is not how you spend your money!

I feel like the main character is too dancey, so why don't you hook up with me, or the eight knots, or he's not stable enough?

I wrote this fanfic because I wanted to try writing a book. There will be battles, relationships, and self-designed characters. What I want to practice are emotional lines and character design. How could I not write them. If you want to read a pure battle novel without emotional lines or a stallion's harem, you will be disappointed. I saw some people commenting that they want to watch it from beginning to end, or they don't want to see the love story but want to see the girl. Let's find out about it in advance. After all, in addition to the free chapters, it costs money, so avoiding it in advance will save you money, right? Because I haven't been writing the book for a long time, I lack experience. Some of the protagonist's flaws are set by me. After all, no normal person will grow up instantly as soon as he travels through time. Not to mention that it is so logical that it can form a world system of its own, I still want to avoid at least something that can be noticed. The protagonist is an ordinary person who travels through time and there is a growth plot, so I will design some of his shortcomings, but the abuser will not have them, because it is the core of a refreshing novel. There is also a poisonous point that I couldn't notice. When I wrote about the sworn sworn relationship, I just wanted to make a joke at the end. I really don't know what the poisonous point is, but maybe the protagonist can't be inferior to others? Avoid this when writing later. Well, there's nothing else to say. The main thing is the emotional line, because I will not write fan fiction all the time, and I will not arrange it casually according to the existing routines. I will never give up on the emotional line no matter what. If you want to see a harem and a stallion, and fall in love with each other, don't waste your time on this book. There are also some people who specialize in writing negative reviews, but I have no choice. The book has not made money yet, and I don't want to spend money to get good reviews, so I can only hide the ones that I can't read for a minute and only look at the title to find problems. If something is particularly outrageous, I will still choose to stay, which can be regarded as a negative example. Those who write negative reviews can refer to this to avoid pitfalls. Negative reviews should also be written with a certain level of skill, right? If you are not dedicated, who will ask you to write negative reviews? This book will be written to the end, even if no one reads it. For those who commented normally, saying that there are problems with the selection of the protagonist and problems with resource allocation, I am also learning. The bad reviews made me angry, and they told me what the plot was like at the beginning. In the end, I'm still worried about not seeing the [single heroine] label clearly and deliberately giving bad reviews. We have a single heroine, so I must write a detailed emotional line. It would be much easier if I didn't write a romantic line. Anyway, I will love one when I see one, and accept one when I see one. That's it, there are self-created characters and emotional lines, so don't worry if you accidentally enter.

The biggest advantage of the Ice and Fire Eyes is that the God of Fire directly takes it, so you can tell me how to play it later, right? Originally, I was playing the game of infinite adaptation, but in the end, I took the route of inheriting the divine throne, and it was still just a fire element 🙂 with a maximum limit of one level one god.

Let me reply here, this book is anti-Tang San, but it will not be embarrassing. If it is embarrassing, it won't have that feeling. You can't just say that he is Tang San, and then just be anti-Tang San, right? It is always necessary to write about what Tang San is like to have a more realistic feeling. There is also the Wuhun Palace, which is indeed the best of the several forces in the original work, but it can only exist as a religion and not as an empire. Therefore, in the early stage, it will feel that the protagonist is on the side of the Wuhun Palace. Later, he will also make a difference and create his own force. Finally, please ask for follow-up reading and monthly tickets! ! !

I don't understand what I'm writing at all. Why are you ready to kill as soon as you arrive at Shrek? Didn't you still take me seriously before? Do you have any preparation? Nothing was written. The character design is also misplaced. Your protagonist doesn't like killing people, so why does he suddenly look like killing people? And does the protagonist lack the soul bone of the soul beast? Your goal should be the power of law, divine power.

Regarding this kind of invincible novel, the best thing is to end it when it's time to end it. Don't let the protagonist grind in a certain realm just to suppress his combat power. When the protagonist can use the mechanism to strengthen himself, don't be stingy. And we know the "hang" of the villain. , For example, Bibi Dong's dual martial arts, level 99, divine test, the combat power is actually not low. The protagonist can feel free to "hang up", and your protagonist can win if he wins. I have read many works. For the sake of word count, the protagonist is not allowed to win at all costs, so that the protagonist is invincible and becomes the strongest. This book is not overwhelming yet, and it is well done. And in the later stage, when the world is invincible, I recommend a game like the King of Sharks. The protagonist does not care about worldly perspectives. It is different from the "enemy of the whole world" or "against the whole world for you" in other works. The giant shark abandons emotions and morality and uses desire and madness to drive power and insult the entire world. Be strong! , The protagonist may not rely on desire or madness, but it must, must! Don't let the protagonist's behavior lose its "property!". The author has done a good job in the past. I hope to see the protagonist finally "single-handedly defeat the whole world of tmd!". Or writing about the protagonist being invincible, traveling around the world is actually a good way to write, such as the sequel to the curse, the invincible performance of Emperor Tiger Heaven. Readers are actually very willing to see the protagonist invincible, and are not willing to see what Naruto and Sasuke were reduced to in "Boruto", and weakening can easily cause logical bugs, finally! Invincible writing must be invincible!

The subject matter is very good, but it's a pity that it has a single female protagonist.

Is there only Moxuluo? In fact, the Ten Shadows method feels more interesting. Moxuluo who has been subdued at the beginning is invincible in the world.