People Are in Douluo, Wuhun Demon Xuluo

The protagonist is born with full soul power, and the Wuhun Palace awakens. Depending on the situation, it is not a waste of the Wuhun. Do you think he will report it? Will anyone come over? Don't fight for this kind of talent. Is it possible to keep him outside? Moreover, the protagonist needs resources but has no resources. No background, just an orphan. How can you be so picky? The protagonist is an orphan who earns money by telling stories in restaurants. When we arrive at Notting College, the protagonist is really rich. He gives the guard a Gintama coin at the beginning, and then gives him another when asking for directions. This is not how you spend your money!

There is no need to write about Moxuluo, he is too invincible. I am still cultivating my soul power. After absorbing two soul rings, I broke through the rules of the world and began to add soul rings without restrictions. I practiced by myself and got used to the soul core and divine position.

I feel like the main character is too dancey, so why don't you hook up with me, or the eight knots, or he's not stable enough?

I wrote this fanfic because I wanted to try writing a book. There will be battles, relationships, and self-designed characters. What I want to practice are emotional lines and character design. How could I not write them. If you want to read a pure battle novel without emotional lines or a stallion's harem, you will be disappointed. I saw some people commenting that they want to watch it from beginning to end, or they don't want to see the love story but want to see the girl. Let's find out about it in advance. After all, in addition to the free chapters, it costs money, so avoiding it in advance will save you money, right? Because I haven't been writing the book for a long time, I lack experience. Some of the protagonist's flaws are set by me. After all, no normal person will grow up instantly as soon as he travels through time. Not to mention that it is so logical that it can form a world system of its own, I still want to avoid at least something that can be noticed. The protagonist is an ordinary person who travels through time and there is a growth plot, so I will design some of his shortcomings, but the abuser will not have them, because it is the core of a refreshing novel. There is also a poisonous point that I couldn't notice. When I wrote about the sworn sworn relationship, I just wanted to make a joke at the end. I really don't know what the poisonous point is, but maybe the protagonist can't be inferior to others? Avoid this when writing later. Well, there's nothing else to say. The main thing is the emotional line, because I will not write fan fiction all the time, and I will not arrange it casually according to the existing routines. I will never give up on the emotional line no matter what. If you want to see a harem and a stallion, and fall in love with each other, don't waste your time on this book. There are also some people who specialize in writing negative reviews, but I have no choice. The book has not made money yet, and I don't want to spend money to get good reviews, so I can only hide the ones that I can't read for a minute and only look at the title to find problems. If something is particularly outrageous, I will still choose to stay, which can be regarded as a negative example. Those who write negative reviews can refer to this to avoid pitfalls. Negative reviews should also be written with a certain level of skill, right? If you are not dedicated, who will ask you to write negative reviews? This book will be written to the end, even if no one reads it. For those who commented normally, saying that there are problems with the selection of the protagonist and problems with resource allocation, I am also learning. The bad reviews made me angry, and they told me what the plot was like at the beginning. In the end, I'm still worried about not seeing the [single heroine] label clearly and deliberately giving bad reviews. We have a single heroine, so I must write a detailed emotional line. It would be much easier if I didn't write a romantic line. Anyway, I will love one when I see one, and accept one when I see one. That's it, there are self-created characters and emotional lines, so don't worry if you accidentally enter.

Let me reply here, this book is anti-Tang San, but it will not be embarrassing. If it is embarrassing, it won't have that feeling. You can't just say that he is Tang San, and then just be anti-Tang San, right? It is always necessary to write about what Tang San is like to have a more realistic feeling. There is also the Wuhun Palace, which is indeed the best of the several forces in the original work, but it can only exist as a religion and not as an empire. Therefore, in the early stage, it will feel that the protagonist is on the side of the Wuhun Palace. Later, he will also make a difference and create his own force. Finally, please ask for follow-up reading and monthly tickets! ! !

The biggest advantage of the Ice and Fire Eyes is that the God of Fire directly takes it, so you can tell me how to play it later, right? Originally, I was playing the game of infinite adaptation, but in the end, I took the route of inheriting the divine throne, and it was still just a fire element 🙂 with a maximum limit of one level one god.

I don't understand what I'm writing at all. Why are you ready to kill as soon as you arrive at Shrek? Didn't you still take me seriously before? Do you have any preparation? Nothing was written. The character design is also misplaced. Your protagonist doesn't like killing people, so why does he suddenly look like killing people? And does the protagonist lack the soul bone of the soul beast? Your goal should be the power of law, divine power.

Regarding this kind of invincible novel, the best thing is to end it when it's time to end it. Don't let the protagonist grind in a certain realm just to suppress his combat power. When the protagonist can use the mechanism to strengthen himself, don't be stingy. And we know the "hang" of the villain. , For example, Bibi Dong's dual martial arts, level 99, divine test, the combat power is actually not low. The protagonist can feel free to "hang up", and your protagonist can win if he wins. I have read many works. For the sake of word count, the protagonist is not allowed to win at all costs, so that the protagonist is invincible and becomes the strongest. This book is not overwhelming yet, and it is well done. And in the later stage, when the world is invincible, I recommend a game like the King of Sharks. The protagonist does not care about worldly perspectives. It is different from the "enemy of the whole world" or "against the whole world for you" in other works. The giant shark abandons emotions and morality and uses desire and madness to drive power and insult the entire world. Be strong! , The protagonist may not rely on desire or madness, but it must, must! Don't let the protagonist's behavior lose its "property!". The author has done a good job in the past. I hope to see the protagonist finally "single-handedly defeat the whole world of tmd!". Or writing about the protagonist being invincible, traveling around the world is actually a good way to write, such as the sequel to the curse, the invincible performance of Emperor Tiger Heaven. Readers are actually very willing to see the protagonist invincible, and are not willing to see what Naruto and Sasuke were reduced to in "Boruto", and weakening can easily cause logical bugs, finally! Invincible writing must be invincible!

The subject matter is very good, but it's a pity that it has a single female protagonist.

Is there only Moxuluo? In fact, the Ten Shadows method feels more interesting. Moxuluo who has been subdued at the beginning is invincible in the world.

You will put original characters in it and add the protagonist's mentality, which is very good. I can see that you also have the idea of ​​​​improving and creating your own works. But you don't think enough about your characters, so that there is a conflict between the front and back characters. Think about it, doesn't your protagonist just take it seriously? Doesn't it mean that we need to see the world and the people we meet clearly? How could this weird plot of Shrek Academy happen?

Can you tell me who the heroine is?

First of all, thank you all readers for reading my book. Meeting means destiny. Because I said before that I would not stress my combat power, the end was imminent. I felt that it was very fast. I did not expect that my combat power would be so strong so quickly. According to predictions, it should be completed in early May, or at most in the middle of the month. I was confused at the end of writing this book. On the one hand, I didn't expect that some points were actually poisonous points, which made me a little at a loss. I wrote a lot of poisonous points. I only realized it after being verified by the data. Another point is that I am not sensitive enough to the market. On the one hand, writing Douluo is to be more friendly to novices, and on the other hand, I am also very interested in it. Let me talk about the first point first. The advantage of fandom is that it has its own popularity, but I have not researched the market. Most of the time, I give priority to what is fun. Including my own reading, most of them are just for fun, so sometimes logic can be abandoned. I knew from the beginning that it was impossible to take into account all the logic, but what I thought was that as long as I thought of it, I would take it into consideration and put it first. However, I still often fail to focus on entertainment and make readers happy... The second point is that I am very interested in Douluo fans. Because I saw a lot of Douluo fanfics on Douyin, I came up with the idea of ​​using Douluo as a practice pen. Then I personally like double fusion, so I chose a book like this, which fuses Mo Xuluo and Douluo together. But later on, because of the overwhelming negative reviews, I didn't even look at the background for a long time. I deleted the Writer Assistant on my phone and only kept the code page on my computer. The data is very poor. At the beginning, it was a little popular because of the launch, and it reached the threshold of perfect attendance. However, because I didn't know the rules of coding, I didn't get perfect attendance. In the second month, the popularity was too sluggish, and it was more than half the distance from the threshold of perfect attendance. Or because I didn't know the rules, I wrote too much at the beginning. At a daily rate of 10,000, I would have published hundreds of thousands of words. However, for fanfics like Douluo, readers are often only interested in seeing hundreds of thousands of words (when it comes to this, I admire the great guys from Qidian. They can actually write so much. QQ only puts 50,000 words on the shelves) Because it was put on the shelf late, the popularity itself cannot rise. Although it is not entirely for the purpose of making money, a large part of it is out of interest, but it is also with the intention of making money, especially when the first month is more than the second month, this month I estimate it is only about 400 to 500. I've been feeling a bit cold since about the 14th. Plus the data was not good and the reviews were bad, I really wanted to cut it off. At that time, the author group of QQ Reading also advised people to cut off their books. I think it is common for this platform to cut off books. But since I said I wanted to end it before, I really thought about it and said it would be over. If someone reads it and writes it, but no one reads it and writes it, then do what you are told. Once the words are spoken, you can't throw them away easily. (However, I won't say this easily in the future. No wonder the great masters didn't say it to prevent their hands from shaking when cutting the book.) Being affected is an objective fact, so the quality must have been reduced, which cannot be denied. Because I am easily influenced, when I want to spend time writing about emotional lines and some characters, I will think about being criticized (characters are imperfect and three-dimensional, so it is inevitable to be scolded when writing about characters) There are also some when writing battles, when writing plots... I have read many books, even the books of Platinum Master, some people criticized them, and there are quite a few... I know this truth, but it will be affected in my heart. I am thinking about how to write better works without being affected. I want to finish it, but I don't want to finish it hastily. It's just that with my current writing power, it's difficult for me to bring the current situation back, because I really don't want to overwhelm my fighting power. When I read novels, I hate suppressing the combat power, so I try not to suppress it when writing. I said before that I would write a book that would be in line with the market, and I did write one. It's the canopy type. It's really fast to write that kind of mindless thing. The speed can be increased to almost 5,000 an hour. I didn't expect it to be so fast. But after writing ten thousand words, I feel a little uncomfortable. What am I doing? Why should I write that kind of thing? This is a paid platform. If the author is perfunctory, it doesn't matter what the reason is, right? So I didn't write that book. On the one hand, I didn't like it myself. On the other hand, I still resisted it and hid it. Next I want to write a book, either Douluo or Dual Fusion. It is the fusion of Douluo and bad people. My hope for myself is that I can write what I want to write without being affected. The feeling of being able to write, but giving up and deleting everything out of fear, and then writing plain words, makes me feel like a pool of stagnant water. The protagonist of the next book will still have flaws, but some elements will be added according to the cool text template to let the cool feeling prevail. There will be growth, and it will be imperfect at the beginning, but it will be a little more subtle and not obvious. In some points that are not easy to notice, the imperfections will be written from the details. Although I will throw away some of the logic that I can consider, I will still control it and not make any sense. I feel like I have no talent, so I can only persevere. Then I plan to keep writing as long as I have an idea. Until I judge that my writing skills can write the characters I imagined and control the rhythm of the plot, I will prepare to create an original novel. Before that, I will also write Douluo fan fiction that interests me and does not follow the clichés. Even if I write fan fiction, I have to write my own thoughts in each one. The next book is coming out soon, and just this week, I'm wondering if I should pick it up tomorrow. If I upload it tomorrow, I will have to write less in one day, because the rules of QQ are like this. I will test the water on Tuesday. I have tasted the cost of writing more in this book. Or Friday. Friday is what the big guys in the group say. Friday is just the right time. Normal updates are recommended. Still saving, let's talk about it later. Thank you all for reading this. I talk a lot of nonsense, maybe because I am upset. Thank you!

Save time: Overall it's not bad. The disadvantage is that the improvement is too fast. I'm afraid the word count is relatively small.

The protagonist's B-level can actually be improved a bit. For example, if you can only let Mo Xuluo attack when you take action, and you can just stand on the side and look calm and calm, the B-level will actually increase a lot.