Douluo: the Original Body Huo Yuhao

The plot design and rhythm are relatively stable, the setting is also good, and the narrative method is not the same as the assembly line novel, but the writing is really poor. Although various problems are being corrected, the writing is still not up to the passing mark. I can barely read it. I can only say,,

1. Warhammer tells a story that lasts for 40,000 years, and the author may continue to write it in order to make money; Douluo Dalu also tells a story that lasts for 40,000 years, and the author may continue to write it in order to make money. 2. There are many gods in the subspace, and their powers include but are not limited to killing, life, destruction, and love; there are also many gods in the divine world, and their powers include but are not limited to killing, life, destruction, and love. 3. Warhammer has a complex and twisted ethical relationship between father and son; Douluo Continent also has a complex and twisted ethical relationship between father and son. 4. The emperor's ability is related to spirit and emotion; Huo Yuhao's ability is also related to emotion and spirit. 5. The emperor has children through gene seeds, which is related to the imperial war commander; Huo Yuhao also has children through gene seeds, which is also related to the imperial war commander. 6. The emperor was hidden in the subsequent plot and only used as a background board; Huo Yuhao was also hidden in the subsequent plot and only used as a background board. 7. The emperor sat on the toilet at a certain period; Huo Yuhao sat in a wheelchair at a certain period. 8. The emperor defeated the dragon; Huo Yuhao also defeated the dragon. 9. The Emperor led mankind towards revival and established the Mechanicum; Huo Yuhao led the Tang Sect towards revival and established the Spirit Transferring Tower. 10. The emperor has never denied that he is Huo Yuhao; Huo Yuhao has never denied that he is the emperor. 11. The emperor and Huo Yuhao never appeared at the same time.

I can already see what a psychopath with a shattered childhood and ravaged by Warhammer would do.

To be honest, if that time traveler knew that Huo Yuhao was the original body, I would probably cry like a fart

In the third chapter, poison is released. He has no soul power, no spiritual power, and no strength. He inexplicably engages in fraternity and befriends the auspicious beast. The protagonist does not know that the auspicious beast has Tang Fozu's back-up. Anyone with any logic knows that in Douluo's environment, the first reaction of the soul beast is to kill humans first. As a result, the protagonist's first reaction at this time is not to save his life first, but to make friends 😅

Let's just add Snow to the current three, but there must be many people who like the protagonist. If I can accompany the protagonist through thick and thin, I will give an explanation in the finale.

There is a big misunderstanding, that is, the resources of Douluo Continent are only enough to advance to the second level god. This may be because the plane consciousness is only the second level god. But in fact, the resources of Douluo Continent are completely enough to be promoted to God King, but not many people know about it. The original work is purely a random setting, just to promote the Tang Shenwang

Has the author actually seen Warhammer? If in Warhammer World. Be a minion or. Soldiers are a little better. The problem is. It is the Primarch, the very essence of the Primarch. Demigods, and their essence itself is created with some evil things in the subspace. Every original body can be said to have more or less flaws. To be precise, but a little bit. The human body's talent, combat power and even wisdom. Throughout humanity. No one can compare with them, but their madness is also unparalleled and terrifying. Not to mention the Emperor. If the author had actually seen Warhammer, he would have known. The Emperor's ideal state is when he sits without standing up. It keeps consuming like this, because which side will move first. That would be absolutely devastating, and it wouldn't be like the author said from the beginning. That kind of ending is completely impossible to happen, but the mentality, ability and even wisdom shown by the protagonist. This is not an original question. After coming into contact with Shikigami, every primarch has more or less mental illness, to be precise, madness in the Warhammer world. And loyalty to the Emperor. Rebellion doesn't count. If you really side with the Emperor, you are definitely loyal. This is really not a good writing. Also, every Primarch was found by the Emperor first, and they all grew up independently. If the protagonist, the original body, was created after the Emperor. That's impossible. To be precise, the Emperor paid a great price to find such a small amount of materials. Do you think he doesn't want to make more? It can't be built, to be precise. The protagonist is completely unlike a person who can live in the Warhammer world for thousands of years. Oh, I was wrong, the original body is not a human being.

There is the Dragon Emperor and the Moon Queen in the medieval war hammer. I think Huo Yuhao looks like an emperor, and the dragon is the proof of the emperor, so he is the Dragon Emperor. I see that Gu Yuena's name has "moon" in it, and every time she overturns, she hits it crookedly, and the result is correct. At the same time, it is the queen, and it can become the queen of the month. The Dragon Emperor and the Moon Queen are all here

Huo Yuhao and Lu Mingfei are almost becoming a reborn duo

No need to call Shen Nong, I will say two key words, Warhammer Primarch, Kindness

Although, Tang Wulin's crime is not worthy of death, right? And I think it's even possible for Tang Wulin to join the anti-Three camp. (But there may only be Tang Wulin in the background story)

I don't have a good impression of Tianmeng Ice Silkworm, but if you add a time traveler and let him snatch Tianmeng Ice Silkworm, you should do this in the golden three chapters of the novel. I still say the same thing, the first three chapters of the novel are for you to retain people, not to pave the way for the future. You have made such a small and medium-sized poison in the first three chapters. How can I watch the rest of it? Of course I will leave on my own if I can't stand it. I am just a reminder to those brothers who have read the daily guide.

Although I am writing about Warhammer, this text... Feels like I am writing a children's picture book. The flavor is not strong enough. My evaluation is based on the author's own background, which is too bright and promising.

The poison has been introduced again. Is the original body still kind? Can someone tell me?

After thinking for a long time, I found that the most suitable person for this version of Yuhao is Orange.

666. Before that it was Lu Mingfei. Now comes our Huo Yuhao

Forget about the front, forget about the middle, forget about the back. In the end, Mingfei and Huo Yuhao are a pair of hard-luck mandarin ducks.

After looking at it, I can tell you that these two people on Tzeentch's stall are also extremely naked🤣

Following Lu Mingfei's multiverse series, Huo Yuhao's multiverse opens again 😎

The author's writing in the first 5 chapters is very immature, and the integration of the world view is not good, but after the first 5 chapters, I feel that it is already a good novel. It is different from most of the previous novels, and it is still worth reading.

If that time traveler knew that Huo Yuhao's soul was the original body from the Warhammer 40k world, I don't know what he would think, and I don't know how wonderful his expression would be when he saw the Astartes armor and bolter. The most important thing is, I really look forward to the wonderful expressions he will make if he sees the Four Gods of Chaos, especially knowing that his system was created by Xin Qi. But is there Warhammer 40k in his world? Or does he know about Warhammer?

Could this be Tzeentch's conspiracy?

According to official settings, Douluo Continent covers an area of ​​more than 150 square kilometers after the collision with the sun and the moon. It is not as big as our big province. There are 700 million people in Douluo on the continent, and the living conditions are comparable to India.

As a patch, although the book says that 2k weapons can crush Douluo Dalu, the weapons made by the protagonist are actually similar to those in the 2k era in terms of appearance and usage. The material science of 30k is definitely far superior to that of 2k, and the protagonist has no idea about the material ratio in the 2k era. However, the current materials are not particularly advanced compared to ceramite (the material of Astartes power armor).

After reading thirty chapters, the heroine won't accept them all, right? Why do you feel that the author is currently writing about a female Tongtong harem?

Everything else is fine, but this hot weapon can casually crush Douluo Continent. I feel it's a bit nonsense. You can say that you improved the soul guide and developed it, or it's a 40k high-tech weapon, a 20k gunpowder weapon, casually crushing a fantasy world. It's too nonsense.

The protagonist is like Doraemon, always able to pull out a bunch of things without any foreshadowing. The "lover" in the plot is more reflected in the attack on "the men of Tang San's family", and only a few "teaching" plots show the protagonist's ability to teach. The girlfriends don't have much description. They basically only have the functions of "persuading with words or force", "adding scandals to the protagonist", and "showing the protagonist's strength". And women always "fall in love" with the protagonist suddenly. The author is always eager to throw away the baggage.

The author actually reset all the previous chapters

No, have you even reached the starting point of your story novels now?