Happy God

I seriously suspect that the author came here as a moderator. Others just scratched the surface of one or two paragraphs, but he just started with three chapters. Normally the plot is jerky and illogical, but it is so smooth and silky! 🥵 And in order to deceive others, I didn't write much about this kind of plot before. But when I met the female doctor for the second time, I just let myself go and the wheels flew away.

The amount of money you spend is too small and too frequent, and you won't get much money. In addition, the threshold of happiness will get higher and higher, and the further you go, the harder it will be to write! Therefore, this kind of rich and powerful novel is not as good as the kind that gives big money at the beginning. Although it will collapse in the back, it is fun enough in the front! But if you are not happy enough in the early stage, you will not be able to achieve good results, and it will be more difficult to develop in the later stage. There is basically no hope in the vicious circle!

This novel is okay, the plot development is relatively mild. If I continue writing, it will be a small masterpiece. Of course, it is not impossible to look forward to a big masterpiece. But there are three poisonous points that dissuade most people: 1. Yu Wenwen's psychological activities at the beginning were too rich, and his self-attack and transformation were too fast, unlike the psychology of a beautiful woman with an 89 score. 2. The plot of the mother urging the marriage feels too severe and makes people prone to drama. 3. I got nervous once or twice. The clearest thing was the second time, when 1 million was given away directly. Yes, the protagonist may not look down on the money, but it can't be calculated that way. For most readers, if you give 30%, it's pretty good, so you just give it all. The first time was the taxi driver. So overall I give it a score of 6.5,

Yu Wenwen's self-defeat was too exaggerated. Would a girl with such good looks be self-destructive to a man like the protagonist who only has height and nothing else?😰

Newbie, new book, finally signed! Please collect and read 🥺🥺🥺

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He Yunling

If you are 27 years old and have a car loan and a house loan, you must be mentally ill. You can write it as 30 years old. At 27 years old, you have a mortgage and a car loan. You are very capable of making money.

The author just follows what he wants to write! Reasonable absorption of suggestions, I think this kind of plot of slowly pretending to be x in life is very interesting and in line with daily yy

I beg you all Yanzu Yifei to please read it! Ball ball! My child hasn't tried the water push yet, and he really wants to try the water, everyone! Give everyone a shout! ONG bang bang bang! ! !

Everyone enjoys the pictures!

Volkswagen Lavida? 😁If you have money, switch to a Mercedes-Benz S-Class

The latest chapter, I bought a stock, I feel a kind of physical discomfort, I feel sick, I deleted the book and left.

After the poison test, it was a piece of shit

It's edible, but somehow it doesn't feel like a romantic novel. It feels like a romance novel. There's very little plot to buy, buy, buy. This is the essence of a divine novel! Maybe it's because the word count is too short and I haven't written enough yet? Rated as hay edible

I've seen this type of movie a lot. Dan generally wouldn't play a female colleague as the protagonist. It's too unflattering.

Don't write down your appearance score! Don't write down your appearance score! Don't write down your appearance score! This is a pitfall of Shenhao's writing. It's not good to write too high and be criticized for being too low. Wait until there are more women and people criticize you. Why do you meet all the good-looking ones! Anyway, as long as I write it, I will be sprayed.

Automatically subscribe to open, come on.

After reading the first five chapters, they are not attractive at all. The author should consider cutting it out.

The monthly vote has been cast, come on!

Brother, you need to write a sense of contrast! If Shenhao doesn't write funny stories, you won't be able to read them. Judging from your circle index of 56, I know you must be strict about writing Shenhao and he doesn't write funny plots.

The plot is good and the pace is good! Come on! !

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The writing is pretty good, thank you to the author💪

I've always seen your posts, and I've only written 170,000 words.

Isn't this another stallion story?

It's too little. Let's wait until it reaches 500,000 words.

Why is it that writing stories about gods and heroes is all in the same way? It's obviously bad, but the thinking is still stuck in the old mode, the plot is old-fashioned, the characters are flat and stereotyped, and there are no results.

There are so many wonderful articles, but I can't write anything with characteristics or achievements.

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