We Told You to Study, So Why Are You Filming with Your Deskmate?

Before I clicked on the introduction, I saw what kind of film I was filming. It turned out to be a video.

I have ordered most of the current updates, and I am not sure whether I will follow them later. I have to wait and see. Advantages: I know the beginning, I am familiar with the routines, my writing is passable, and there are no low-level mistakes in the details. Disadvantages: The routine is too familiar. Too watery. Princess "Peace". The title of the first chapter is very good. It captures the true meaning of the "three golden seconds" mentioned by the protagonist, which makes people a little interested. The basic layout and detailed description are both good. It's just that the problem is here, the layout is particularly in line with the online writing assembly line, and it smells like a machine. It seems that the account is running smoothly and the water is still being added. There is a lot of invalid information, but not so much that people immediately point their fingers at it. For example, the protagonist's little electric donkey rings and beeps to send the girl home. Just write about a little ambiguity or worry once or twice, then write it every time? Moreover, he still got into the car, put on the helmet, parked, put on his feet, and took off the helmet. I wish I could recreate the scene in text. There is a saying that goes something like this: If a gun appears, it should go off. What, your foot support, does it have a role behind it? It would be inappropriate to say that everything is detailed and detailed... After all, it's not written how the protagonist goes to the toilet, right? It can be seen that the author still knows that there is no need to write everything. Then it can only be said to be comparable to the water of the Pacific Ocean. Water is also reflected in another routine. For example, the same thing can be said to the heroine, to the parents, to the teacher, and even to the child! Let's go into details! Elaborate! What is this if it's not water? There are also advantages. The chapter names are very clear, which makes it easy to jump in and order. I have always been used to writing dozens of chapters in batches, but with this book I came up with the idea of ​​"picking a few chapters and taking a look". You can see how much invalid and duplicate information there is. In this chapter, I told my parents about advertising. In the next chapter, I told the teacher. In the next chapter, I told the reporter. In the next chapter, the students recited that the protagonist advertised... I think this must be because I am old and outdated. I wonder if there is such a program now. Put a topic and automatically generate five or six characters' descriptions of the same thing? But it doesn't quite look like it. I went to the snack street once. I ate a few skewers and then a few sticks, and I wanted to write a list... It seemed like I had put some effort into it. There is another sense of "routine familiarity". For example, hand touching, a man blowing a woman's hair, protecting her, kissing her forehead goodnight... It's not that these are bad... Well, I may have to find the reason from myself, maybe I have been through too much... The last thing is Taiping. If things don't go smoothly, it's hard for the story to be established for a long time, right? Later it became an upgrade guide. The account is getting bigger and bigger, and you are trying to find ways to gain popularity - is this the way you want to develop? Interspersed with some facial makeup characters from another pair come out from time to time to interrupt? Bolan is not necessarily a villain. It's okay to have an opponent who is slightly evenly matched. Once the content was stolen, and another time the NPC female classmate got close to her and retreated in three seconds... Never again. No conflict, bro The male and female protagonists, best friends, parents... Are all mature and conventional images. Thousands of online characters have these beautiful qualities. There is definitely nothing wrong with it, but it also has no personality at all, which is equivalent to "Internet celebrity face" in another sense

Speaking of campus editing, the most immediate thing that comes to my mind is our school's tradition. During the 100-day swearing-in ceremony, we will send out a blessing video shot by the current class teachers and the previous class's seniors. I hope that we can also make one by then. It looks like this class teacher made the video.

It's well written, but I feel like there isn't much to write about. Now it seems to be pure love. If there are not multiple female protagonists, there will probably be a bad script or a commercial battle later.

The author has now written it as pure assistance. The poverty alleviation behavior without relatives or friends is not flattering in the novel.

The rhythm is good and the plot flows naturally. I hope it can continue to be like this

Can you update it faster? This little bit every day is really not enough!

It feels too bland. For daily writing, why not learn to play with the divorce system? 🙂 There are too few ambiguous plots between male and female protagonists. The most important thing in campus novels is the ambiguous and interactive plots between men and women 🙂

I hope the style can continue, come on

Come on, author, it's very interesting, but I'm a little worried that the novel will be killed.