Zongnet: the Messenger from the Underworld Is Brushing the Book

Have you revised the previous chapters? They don't match up with the second time. The experience doesn't match up either.

If you have any good opinions and questions, you can raise them here.

The author will update soon The author's soul is back... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul is back... Driving a long whip and setting up six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountains and singing... Back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul is back... Singing high and triumphant... We are all in the same robe... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back. In the first update, the flaws are revealed, and the ridicule is like a tide; A small reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, the righteous men rush to arms, and there is a constant stream of debates; At the tenth watch, the Confucian scholars revitalize the church, and the chants fill the road; Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be like a long river, so that the starry night will be flawless, and readers will forget to eat and often see it.

The first few copies of "Cyber ​​Cultivation of Immortality" did not explain clearly, the plot was unclear, and the origins of the characters were unclear.

As the title says, wait for me ---Dividing line-- After reading the three golden chapters, tell me your feelings Internet novels are all cool writing, books with no ups and downs, no one likes you, the beginning is peaceful, it is best to change it Literary youthfulness is a test of writing skills, do you want to continue writing like this? Qidian's out-of-chapter training course is actually very valuable, you can study it Many books on Zongwang, just change the names, and if you can't write something of your own, you are destined to fall into the street. I don't see any interesting settings in the first three chapters of this book. I will observe again. If it still doesn't work, then I wish for world peace.