The Infinite World Begins with Crayon Shin-Chan

As a newcomer who writes articles for the first time, I still feel quite unsure, so I came here to chat with you all~ I wonder what you think after reading it? For example, the pace, the fit of the characters, and whether the foreshadowing is too blunt. Any suggestions and opinions are welcome in the comment area! Whether it is the plot direction, detail polishing or writing style issues, as long as it is your opinion, I will carefully read each one and slowly change it~ I also ask you to give more recommendation votes and favorites. Newcomers really need support when they start. I will continue to work hard to update the article and live up to everyone's expectations~