From the Son of a Servant to the Martial Arts Deity

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The content is the same Changing the soup without changing the medicine Bad bones God rewards hard work The master accepted a genius with good bones The genius has a bad character Then he became a white-eyed wolf . . . . . . . .

What kind of tricks are you doing? It's better not to play, than to be a talented person. It's like playing a game. Even if you cheat, you still can't compete with a master. So isn't this plug-in for nothing? It's a cool article to write this kind of Yakuza style, within 20 chapters. If you can't beat the shit out of the owner, it's not cheating. Look at what others have written. How long did it take for the top master in the county to use it? It took only 10 days to achieve hundreds of years of skill. That's why others can be on the ranking list. You're the one who's cheating, you're just fooling around.

Is it normal for a servant's son to finally enter a martial arts gym but not practice martial arts properly, become jealous of others, and fail to maintain his identity?

I don't see the role of the golden finger. How about removing the golden finger? The protagonist with the golden finger is really not likable. I never give any votes to the golden finger novels. Don't spend a penny and just watch the free chapters. If I can't stand most of the Goldfinger novels, I will report them and remove them from the bookshelf.

Ji Daofun, who suppresses the combat power in the early stage, will only die miserably.

A wonderful story about the world of martial arts that suddenly appears. The writing is inexplicable, and the pace at the beginning is very good. I didn't want to watch it after it appeared. Only the protagonist can deal with each of these undead heroes. Speechless. There are so many immortal people. No one is dead anyway. So what if you have high strength? I can't die anyway. What settings? Really speechless.

It is very similar to Luan Wu who started to join the martial arts gym. She is the daughter of the director of the martial arts gym and martial arts competition. They started updating it in September last year, and it was obviously plagiarized from others.

I feel like I have watched more than a dozen books with this kind of martial arts beginning. The master only has a daughter, a very good senior brother, and a very talented fellow disciple. The master is very kind to him and gives all the resources he wants to this fellow disciple. In the end, this fellow disciple stabs the master in the back. The protagonist turns the tide. It really is a new book even if the name is changed and the content is not changed.

Didn't the author realize that the current male protagonist is being transferred around by the emperor like a dog? Today he has been practicing for less than a month and he is transferred to work. Tomorrow he has been training for a few days and is transferred to a secret realm. Don't write it so disgustingly.

You can tell from the introduction that it is a piece of shit.

If you want to suppress your fighting power, you have to divide your realm into two more realms: bright energy, dark energy, and transformed energy? Just these three? The progress day by day is so slow. After more than half a year, I am still in the entry-level stage. What's your selling point? Have you let readers see it?

Chapter 20: I have never beaten a passerby of the same level.

It has always been like this endless nesting of dolls. After rising to the top in a given place, I will go to a larger place to work as a junior. It's already 2026. If you still write according to this routine, it's weird to get good results.

It is recommended to add a label to this kind of novel "County City Chronicles"

I've read a few chapters, but I have no intention of reading any more. Not to mention my fighting ability, I don't know how to write about human relationships, and so many people say it's a scam🕳️

The pressure was too great. I read a few chapters and found no meaning at all. I left.

It is very important to follow the new book issue now. I kindly ask you guys to scroll to the latest chapter if you have time. I will also try not to write any poisonous points. If there is any unreasonable plot, you can point it out and I will revise it immediately. Thank you very much 🙂

Because the new book is in the library too soon, it has not been published on pk. In addition, it will be shipped out the day after tomorrow. I will run naked in the next week and have to wait for the next round. However, it is still possible to catch up on reading in these two days. Thank you for following up. Dear readers, if you think I have written poorly, you can leave me a comment and give me a chance to give the author a chance. Don't abandon the book directly. Thank you, brother 🥺

Now I feel annoyed when I see Ji Dao Liu, and I feel psychologically disgusted.

I haven't read many pictures, maybe more than ten chapters, but you're all cheating. It took you three months to gain 178 experience points. At home, you said you didn't have any exercise equipment and gained some experience in half a day. When you went to the martial arts gym, you got 400 points, which was still two points a day. Then you said ingredients and experience, but I didn't see how much to add... Let's start at the beginning. You don't have to read it at the beginning to know what kind of ending it will be... You can't understand it even if you play it, and you don't understand what readers like at all. Even if you practice it over and over and gain a little experience, you won't say anything about you... I'm already fucking cheating, and I'm still going to do this. How long will it take for the light to rise to perfection?

This kind of mindless book, you don't even have the most basic feeling of pleasure, so don't worry about the rest. Not many people will read it. You still put it here and say that it makes the protagonist's life too comfortable. I really want to laugh. As for your book, 99% of readers will only feel suffocated after reading your book. You still put it so comfortable

Aren't you really an acquaintance of mine🥵😡

The writing style is okay, but the overall framework is copied from others, and there is nothing of my own. Generally, it is enough to support an initial subscription. Who would spend money repeatedly for a plot that has been watched countless times?

First of all, I can feel that the author wrote this book very carefully. I have written before, and I know that writing is not easy, but there are some plots that would be better if they could be slightly modified. I will only mention a few points that I have the impression of so far. 1 During the martial arts competition, the protagonist's opponent has no name before and is considered an NPC. If this NPC is given a plot to challenge the protagonist's martial arts academy, it may be more satisfying to defeat him in a battle. 2 It can be seen that you want to work hard to write some different plots, such as forcibly changing the map, which has some shadows of the Martial Saint of the Ten Directions. However, it is actually a failure to force the map to change before your economy has reached the ideal state. If you think about "Becoming a Saint in the World of Martial Arts" and "Martial Saint of the Ten Directions", when they broke through to the third realm, it was a great point, and they both reached the top combat power of the current copy. You see, your protagonist has come into his own, but isn't it so exciting to write? 3 It is okay to learn to go away and forcefully change dungeons, but you "abandon the essence and learn the dross". When the protagonist encounters a robbery, wouldn't it be better for the protagonist to have a higher force value, stand up a little, kill a few people, get some loot, and then change the map? I saw that you buried the meat hook, but the tension was still not enough. 4 The last point is also the point where I gave up the book. That Jingyue has no background and no resources. The protagonist changes dungeons and she just comes with her. Her status is still higher than that of the protagonist. Do you think this setting is reasonable? If you really want to set up this slap-in-the-face plot, which rich boy would you say he is attracted to? It's okay to take her as a concubine! Then he thought he was rising rapidly, looked down on the protagonist, and was not in the same class as the protagonist. In the end, the protagonist becomes more powerful, but she is abandoned by the son of an aristocratic family. Wouldn't it be better to write it this way? Why do you have to write such a disgusting plot before putting it on the shelves? I won't say anything else. I hope the author will get rich. It's hard to change the first 3 points. If possible, you can change the 4th point a little.

The writing is quite satisfactory, but it's a pity that it starts with an old martial arts school. However, the narrative is written steadily. Although the cheating is very restrained and the several competitions are not outstanding, it is reasonable and not clichéd (at least in this aspect), and each has its own audience. However, it is best to move quickly one step at a time. After all, the main thing is to see the protagonist become awesome. Of course, there is no rush. Just slowly and reasonably give the protagonist a high ranking. After all, the description at the beginning is to attract a more reasonable audience. Later on, I felt that if I arranged for the protagonist to save Lin Ye once, or arranged a deed to convince him or even subdue him, and then asked people to surround and kill the protagonist, it would become more and more old-fashioned. It was so refreshing to write it like this. After all, the two of them had a bit of a verbal dispute, and it was easy to get bored. After all, there are a lot of similar routines, especially now that Gaowu is so popular, a group of people will definitely be sent away at the beginning of the martial arts gym. Of course it depends on what the author thinks. I just read more novels and say a few lines to see if I can help the author attract more viewers.

Why is this kind of novel still so popular? The protagonist is oppressed by the family and provoked by the gangsters, so the protagonist goes to practice martial arts. If the protagonist is not good enough, he will look down on the protagonist. There is a male partner with good bones. The master will give him all the resources to train him. He is arrogant and arrogant. The master is the boss and he is the second child, but he still looks down on the protagonist. There is also a senior fellow from the inner court who helps the protagonist. In a competition with other martial arts schools, the protagonist shows off and the supporting actor is defeated. They all have the same taste Just see if they all have similar plots, a master who values ​​his integrity, a genius who is arrogant, and a brother who helps the protagonist. These three are must-haves.

Haven't watched it for a long time. Free of charge. After taking a look, a Taoist master is called a Taoist master when he is driven around like a minion. There can be higher levels. But you can't become a novice as soon as you arrive at a new map. What's the point of this routine? Proves that the protagonist's previous training is useless? In this case, you shouldn't write so hard about the protagonist earlier. How awesome is the Taoist disciple or the Taoist master? The top sect in the country. It's become a joke now

It's not a cool article, it doesn't look good.

Why are they all carved out of the same mold?