Chronicles of Immortal Road Characters: Mortal Bones Immortal Road

Thanks to all the book friends who have not given up, although after discussion, I realized that there are still many omissions in my work, so I wanted to start a new chapter and start a new chapter. However, after thinking about the generous investment and high hopes of readers, I couldn't bear to give up, so I decided to overhaul the entire text to reward my close friends. From now on, I will continue to update as a saved manuscript, one chapter per day, as a buffer; the previous article will be polished and reconstructed chapter by chapter, striving for improvement. If you would like to wait for a while, you may wish to keep the book for a while. When I finish polishing it, I invite you to enjoy the new look. Be grateful and live up to your trust.

The description is very detailed, and there are many characterizations of the environment and psychology. The writing style is relatively tactful, and the writing style has obvious traces of imitation. It doesn't look like reading an online novel, but similar to that kind of physical book. Personally, I think it can be considered a hit for readers who prefer this type of article. Personal opinion, please don't curse when discussing.

Pulled here after reading the comments

The writing is very good, but the story is very flat. If there is foreshadowing in reading, it can definitely be a small climax.

There is a problem with the viewing angle. Look at the world from the perspective of the protagonist. Don't use God's perspective. The narration in the book will not give you a sense of empathy. If you write two million, maybe some people will read it, but just like walking with your hands, if you walk for a few years, people will come to see the excitement, but they are not because you are practical, but because they are curious. Don't write a book with narration, walk with practical feet. The title of the book needs to be changed. There is no information. The title probably expresses traditional cultivation of immortality, but your book itself is in this category. You have wasted the title and said nonsense. Just like when someone asks you what your name is, and you say your name is "I", others may not say anything to your face, but they may curse you in their hearts. From the reader's perspective, these things are unremarkable, but from the author's perspective, your book is very "neurotic", not illegal, but sick. To sum up, there is a man walking on the street with his hands. When someone asks him what his name is, he says my name is me. I can probably understand why you wrote it like this, but I still frowned when I saw something like this. Your basic cognition is different from ours. I don't know how to tell you. You have to hit the wall countless times. It really hurts, and then you suddenly realize how curious and weird you are.

Come on, write hard. I hope you will read my new book "Zhu Xian: Visitors from Another World"

The latest one was updated a month ago, it's only 10 chapters, I don't dare to read it, it's a seedling that won't grow.

The introduction has been revised and is much more pleasing to the eye.

How about the name "Cultivation: Insufficient Permissions"?

1. First of all, the title of the book is "Character History". Is that a group portrait article? If not, why use such a name 2. It is 2026, not 1996, and your beginning is still the same as the beginning of the last century. You can write a book with nothing, but you can't write without understanding. 3. Just start with a paragraph to catch the eye. The smaller the scene, the better. Otherwise, the beginning will not fit in. 4. What you need is not to write a book but to improve the level of appreciation 5. The problem with newcomers writing books is that they don't start from babies or write about teenagers or teenagers. It's disgusting and pretentious Anyone who has some brains will not write in such a pretentious and disgusting way at the beginning The author may have read two books by Shen Congwen and got this kind of hypocrisy. Advanced aesthetics You have to understand that this kind of rural landscape is really the aesthetics of farmers in the last century. People read books for fun, not low-level aesthetics The beginning of the mortal is lying on the bed and staring blankly at the rural mud walls The beginning of the extreme is the aroma of osmanthus cake in the nose It is recommended to read the book for five years before writing.