Astral Companion Sacred Tree

Why do I feel like I've read it? It's also an astral novel with a jumping spider as the main character, but it's just unfinished.

The plot is a bit bitter and the plot is full of hatred. It might be better to have more heart-warming daily stories about farming.

After reading for a few days, this conflict has not been resolved. When can I honestly start farming and develop? I read a few Star World fanfics and found that I liked them all. I farmed and farmed and started writing about battles. I wrote content that I wanted to read about farming but didn't want to see. It was boring and procrastinating. I also wanted to skip reading but was afraid that there would be too few people reading it.

There's something wrong with the rhythm. I haven't written about cultivation in detail and I haven't gone out on adventures. Now it's like a running account, starting with winter - sprouting - waiting for the fruits to mature - waiting for the caravan - entering winter again. There have been many chapters without any ups and downs in the plot. If I continue writing like this, I will lose the few follow-up readings.

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The writing is indeed good, and it has the flavor of thousands of miles

My family helped me spread the word, but I haven't been able to read much.

Didn't you say you saved dozens of them? I will send out 5 pictures when they are released. Too little?

The writing is pretty good, but I feel that the scenes are a bit off-kilter and the connection is not smooth. Please give me 5 recommendation votes to support it.

It's too bland, Tian BuZhong's messy things are a big deal

There could be less dialogue. It's more important to advance the story.

Another Astral Sand Locust appears, who is the original author?

Are there any senior astral fans? You can guess Bai Lu's background. If you guess correctly, you will get an update {"NickName":"daiorz","UserId":349823999}@

You have to hold on, the one next door is almost finished, the other one is half dead, and the other one has been sent, you are the hope of the whole family.

How many lives, how many gifts does the protagonist have now, and what are their abilities?

After reading the first few chapters, I found that the interstellar ant tribe has a great advantage in the early stage. It has a throne to help Long Bai's offspring, a large territory, and many excellent seeds.

You are the only one left, come on, write more

Why are the recent divine gifts given to other insects?

Author, please hurry up and get married. It's so tiring to read so many words every day. It's really not as good as the sacred tree

Haha, there is really no need to write too much about these repetitive content of finding things and farming. It is enough to simply cover things that have no results in a short period of time. If you want to fill in the water, it is better to write more practical things. Don't always fill in the water over and over again. For example, write in detail the protagonist's learning process in Phytolacca, or interact with other people. Let's talk about the interactions between his characters, and then start writing about the Citizen Hill mentioned above. If that doesn't work, I can also write about what the other characters do in their daily lives. The author doesn't seem to know how to portray characters. Many characters don't have outstanding personalities, but you are the only one, and you can keep me going until the end.

Can you recommend more books like Star World? There is a shortage of books!

The combat power of Chapter 47 has collapsed. If the advanced Zerg warriors are not gifted by God, their combat power will be at least comparable to the giant beast warriors. If the talent is awakened in advance, it will be at least comparable to the beast mountain master.