Moon Calculation: Blue Flame Ash Tree

When my contribution points reach 500, I will apply to be an operator

It is recommended to make major changes in the early stage and divide it into more segments, especially the dialogues. As a web novel, it was really uncomfortable to watch. The plots were almost stuck together and it hurt my eyes to read. Moreover, the early stage was too plain water, boring to the point of explosion, almost daily life, there is no main line at all, it is a pity to abandon it as it is tasteless.

The dream of a young man and the excitement of embarking on a journey. If these two precious qualities are not sharp enough, then use courage to make up for it.

So the protagonist's color is gray…?

Come on, realize your ideal, come on 😭

I really like this style, don't stop!

The author is very surprised that a person who has never been exposed to the world view of Xingyue can read it without feeling uncomfortable 😁

I feel like I've made a lot of progress, author.