Peerless Tang Sect: I Am Duo Tuore, Is It True or False?

Doctors study for the sake of transcending mortals, while Reindot studies for the sake of transcendence. Reindot's research results can cause much greater disasters than the doctor's.

Okay, okay, Dotore is the best for Douluo

The cold rationality and thirst for knowledge are the highlights of Dotore. It is a bit difficult to open a harem. It is hard to imagine that a scientific madman would be addicted to women.

No, buddy, there are a lot of typos and titles. I suggest you correct them as soon as possible, otherwise the reading experience will be seriously affected.

It's very strange to read. The title is good, but the content is not very good. Not only is it childish, but the protagonist's intelligence is worrying.

I haven't read Chapter 10 yet, so it's hard to comment. I can read it, but there is a little bit of childishness between the lines, and the use of memes is a bit stiff. There is a sense of "I use this gag because there should be a gag here", and it has a template-like feeling. It even gave me the feeling that I was reading a fanfic from five or six years ago, a bit jumpy and unsettled.

Even if the plug-in is a doctor's ordinary Douluo novel, the plot and characters are nothing new.

Honestly, the idea is really good. The writing is just not good. In the first chapter alone, many words are repetitive. The protagonist's time travel process was explained earlier, and then he explained it again after changing the topic, Che Lulu said it again and again. It feels like the AI ​​ran the article many times and then modified and copied it without looking carefully. Just copy it.

If you like to write about stallions, don't use your doctorate to attract traffic.

Using lightning rods to block lightning disasters is really too abstract

Yuan + Douluo. The writing style is like that of a junior high school student. The more you live, the more you look like a clown. This kind of book can also be put on the shelves. Recently, I want to look back at my childhood and read Douluo fanfics. It is indeed a cesspit. Nine out of ten books are self-motivated articles and they are all on the shelves. I laughed.

The positioning is still a bit confusing. The character of the doctor is a pure beast, inhumane, and a scientific madman. Adding a harem into it will affect the perception too much. To do this, it is better to change the character from the beginning, to an Alchemist, with the appearance of a prince like Albedo, a cold and straight-ball character, and a little edge, a succubus, it is all said and done.

In fact, if the doctor traveled to the funny world, he probably wouldn't take the route of martial arts and soul guides. After all, his path is too wild and his heart is too big to follow the steps. For example (a little immature idea): The doctor (the same person) traveled to the world of Dou. Because he is a time traveler, his innate soul power is 0 like Xiao Zha San (Xiao Zha San relied on practice to reach level 10, although the effect is similar to the innate 10), and he has no martial soul, only the doctor's original knowledge and inspiration. So he began to study level 0 soul guides at the age of 6, and discovered that the so-called "soul power" was not a kind of energy, but a mixture of various abilities and particles. Rely on the doctor's original knowledge to separate the soul power and create a storage device to create an energy storage that is different from the world. At the age of 12, he relied on his personal abilities to secretly control the smuggling network, achieve a balance between the major forces, and make huge profits to support research expenses. When I was 16 years old, I studied Wuhun and found that the so-called bloodline of Wuhun did not exist because no one could combine with tools such as sickles and hammers to give birth to bloodlines. At the age of 18, he defeated powerful enemies as a level 0 soul mentor and officially stepped onto the stage. At the age of 22, he developed an artificial martial spirit (the marrow of March behind the Doctor's boss), and then sliced ​​himself into pieces in various time periods to create some kind of clone for backup and scientific research. Then the strongest avatar went to Shrek City, exposed the secret of the golden tree through live broadcast, and set fire to the tree in public. He beat up the old man of Poseidon Pavilion with one enemy, fought against Munn alone, and attracted the attention of the plane masters. The real doctor hid behind the scenes, manipulating the Sun and Moon Empire to attack the Douluo Three Kingdoms, causing Poseidon to go down to the realm to save the situation. The doctor created an extremely unfavorable environment for Poseidon in advance and shattered Poseidon's throne. Only the Asura god was left, and Xiao Zha San had to escape back to the God Realm. Studying the Poseidon to discover the secrets of the divine world and the so-called scam of becoming a god, the doctor began to try to take a completely different path from the so-called god. (I can't edit it anymore, after all, the time is limited. Anyway, the general idea is that if you write a doctor, you must not go to the academy, nor can you fight in the ring, and you can't use martial arts and soul rings. Even the so-called artificial martial arts are best only used for sliced ​​clones. In short, the doctor can't stay in the teaching academy of Xumi, let alone the funny academy that makes the world laugh.)

It would be a pity not to accept the messenger of death 😍

What is written like this? The character design of the protagonist has not been written yet, and later on I will write a time traveler dressed as Huo Yuhao.

Is there no one who traveled through time and became Reindot? Is it because I'm cowardly?

The protagonist himself has no character charm, the plot does not involve combat and wisdom, and the character interaction is on the same level as the NPC dialogue in early web games.

Some of the chronicles are very crudely described. The characters are a bit OOC.

The creativity of March Male God is good, but the author's writing style is really not good. I can't afford this idea. Can't write the plot that readers want to see?

I actually really want to ask, without any discrimination, what is the combat power of the travelers (the plot and the special effects of the game are really terrible, I don't have the patience to read the copy, and the quarrel between Tieba and Bilibili is too brutal) How much can a full blow destroy?

Yeah, why do you have to use your mouth and teeth?

There are no scientific madmen in sight 😥.

May I ask, what are the attributes of Di Tian's dual soul cores? Darkness + space? Dark + spiritual?