Daqin: Prince Ren Fusu Awakens the God of Killing at the Beginning

First of all, I found your work from the new book rankings. To be honest, the Qin Dynasty is a period of history that I am more interested in... But to be honest, I will give you a reminder after reading a few chapters of your content: I don't know how old the author is, how many novels he has written, and whether he has historical knowledge, but my personal guess is that the author does not have much... First, all the titles in your novel are wrong. For example, "His Royal Highness", "Prince", "Minion", etc. Are all inconsistent with the Qin and Han Dynasties. This is a complete imposition of the titles of film and television dramas... I can also understand that it is clearly stated in your introduction that it is a "shuangwen". You can set the "system" and "golden fingers" of your plot. There is no problem, because in order to cater to "some" readers, but you cannot confuse it with wrong titles. If some young readers read your novel (if they particularly like your work), then they will common sense think that the title setting in your novel is correct, which will prevent them from truly understanding the real history. Therefore, I suggest that if you really want to use the system and cheats to write history, then I suggest you take a good look at the history and research it before writing (or at least replace the wrong title). Finally, I didn't say how your plot is, I just gave you well-intentioned suggestions from my perspective. After all, it involves history, and the readers' stickiness will be very high... So, good medicine is bitter...

The plot sometimes skips and repeats twice, such as the reaction after the urgent military report, and the information about the Huns army, which is really embarrassing! A good military strategy discussion, but somehow it turned into information telling the Huns that they planned to raid the grain and fodder with 30,000 people. How did the protagonist know? Historical fact? Spy? System? The author can't make up his own mind, he has to write it down for the readers to know. The key point is that the protagonist inexplicably revealed the information and no one questioned it. Moreover, Meng Tian led the army very steadily and was very defensive. I don't believe that he would send out an emergency report that the border troops were about to break. It would be more reasonable to change it to a report! The title of Prince is really awkward, but it can be solved by changing it to Young Master. I feel that the author has used too much force in many places. I feel that I can write an analysis of the character first. When the plot advances but does not meet the character setting, then I have to write more patches to make it less abrupt for readers!

Is Zhufuyan the one from the period of Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty?

Missing Wang Ben and Wang Li, they were fighting against the Great Wall Legion in case they did not commit suicide, and the fact that Wang Li, the descendant of the princess who married into the palace, was not liquidated and still controlled the Great Wall Legion without a military soul showed that the Wang Family team was Hu Hai. After all, without Wang Ben and Wang Li's team, the Great Wall Legion and the others would not be able to compete if they did not commit suicide, and the consequences would be very serious.