Turns Out I Am the Immortal's Cultivation

Have you ever rescued a fox on a snowy mountain?

The first copy written by this author is one of the best among the simulation articles I have read, but the biggest problem now is that the subsequent real-life plot advances too slowly. Although it can be seen that the author is obviously foreshadowing and foreshadowing, if he cannot write a breakthrough point similar to that of the first copy before it is put on the shelf, the first order data of this book may not be very good.                                                                                                                                         Many authors' enthusiasm to write a book will seriously decline when they see that the first order data is not good. There are many authors who vowed not to be eunuchs at the beginning but subsequently cut the book (I won't give examples). I heard that reading data is very important for new books. In order to support the author, I started to read it with great interest. I stay up until past 12 o'clock every day just to read the latest chapters as soon as possible, and then vote out all my votes. After chasing the protagonist and the senior sister down the mountain for more than 40 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. I can probably guess the short plot that follows. The reason why I rarely read new books is because it's very uncomfortable to worry about gains and losses. I feel itchy when I can't see the subsequent plot, and I am always worried that the author will cut the book. So I removed the book from the bookshelf several times and added it back. Some time ago, I finally made up my mind to hold it in for three or four days without reading it and successfully saved 6 chapters. Today I couldn't help but come back and read the table of contents and quickly glanced at the latest chapters. As expected, it was an adventure story between the protagonist and his senior sister. I was extremely disappointed 😢 My heart was broken. I quite liked this story, but now I am pessimistic about the follow-up of the story. The author is very good at catching people's attention at the beginning of the story and attracting people to read on, but he has a big problem with the rhythm of the story. After the stamina of the first copy wore off, a lot of chicken feathers were left. The pace of the story has obviously slowed down, but it has slowed down a bit too much, making it difficult to arouse the reader's emotions and interest to continue reading. I believe that many readers are looking forward to the continuation of the first copy, hoping to see the real-life bond between the protagonist and Susu and stay to read it. However, the author did not pay much attention to the interaction between the protagonist and her, and only buried a few foreshadowings and left a few suspense. At present, it seems that Su Qingqiu exists more like a background board, and a few non-simulation heroines occupy the main space. Of course, the junior sister and senior sister are also very well portrayed, and I like it very much, but I still want to watch Su Su😫  That's all, I can't sleep in the middle of the night and complain (maybe it's already morning), the author and other readers can just treat the above words as farts. I will come back after a while after gaining weight. I hope the author's subsequent results will slap me hard in the face. I really like this story, don't lose it.

The author was like this in the previous book, and suddenly he became a eunuch 😆

The title of your book is awesome🙂

If you cut it, can you publish the outline and make the book open source 🙂

This book is very predictable. I have read a book before that was about finding the return flow, and then I kept putting it off, and ended up being a eunuch without even recognizing the first one. If you haven't clicked on the explosive points planted at the beginning, you can sweep them into the trash can.

Ha~ I knew the book was going to collapse when I saw that the author also started to abuse the Lord in the main world. Writing a book requires emotions, but if you are emotionally overwhelmed and unable to control the rhythm, the plot will fall apart.

When will there be a blacklisting function?

The eunuch is also normal, but there is something wrong with the pacing, the skipping is too large, and the story is about women just to write about emotions, and the protagonist is made to be so pure in love. How does it end at the end? At least the first life simulation can be watched.

Haha as expected. It is estimated that the resumption of farming will involve three days of fishing and two days of drying nets. There is no need to look forward to the plot, allowing a person who often interrupts to sort out his own plot. Will he remember what he wrote when the time comes? I'm probably not a full-time writer either. If you are really full-time, I will not only take back all my criticisms of you, but also praise you fiercely for being able to persist for such a long time without starving to death.