Zombie Player

The setting is very vague How can the protagonist inherit other people's memories when he physically travels The World of Warcraft crystal core only has a probability of making people become players, and eating one means it is useless? The description of the player system is not obvious The world view is not clear The setting of Cube Park is not explained clearly, and the first copy of parkour survival looks very childish Many settings and items that appear are not clicked in place, and it looks very messy

The description of the battle is too poor or not available at all. It feels like eating a dish without salt. The ingredients are all right, but it is tasteless.

There's nothing wrong with this idea, but it's written very loosely. It's not a story, but a setting. People can't help but wonder why this setting is together with that setting. For example, in the first chapter, it is said that there are zombies in this world, and there are other messy monsters outside. Are zombies considered monsters or what? How is it different from the monsters outside? Otherwise, why would they be juxtaposed? There are some such problems in the article. Two settings that are not very related are put together. The creativity is still there. Although it is also a relatively familiar urban alien type, the author can make the settings simpler and less complex.