1949: Northeast Heavy Industry

After reading it, I wrote a lot of comments at the beginning, pointing out what the history was like, and taking it for granted, as well as the technical routes and flaws. It seems that the author has some understanding of ferrous metallurgy, but the understanding is too little. He did not check the specific historical materials and technology trees before writing the book. I hope the author will write better and better, or just follow the golden finger, or develop step by step, increase the speed of development, and climb the technology tree. I'm just too lazy to use Beanbao deepSeek to ask. One more thing, there are not many articles about the Northeast, very few about metallurgical enterprises, and even less about Anshan Iron and Steel (you can refer to "History of China's Iron and Steel Industry", Anshan Iron and Steel Chronicles, Development History of Anshan Iron and Steel Plant, Anshan Iron and Steel Plant Chronicles, Anshan Iron and Steel Chronicle·Science and Technology Volume, Benxi Iron and Steel Chronicle, Benxi Iron and Steel No. 1 Iron Works Chronicle, History of Modern Chinese Iron and Steel Industry Technology). Hope you can stick with it. Come on.

I almost ran away. Under the conditions at that time, it was enough to produce an integrated shovel like the 205. The technology was not advanced yet, so I thought of making a dual-purpose shovel, and also changed it to a trapezoidal handle. Whose shovel has a trapezoidal handle? It is a craft expenditure of little practical significance. You also say that this is the rebirth of an old man. This does not sound like an old man who understands the current situation and the future.

Don't weaken the role of the collective. Without you as a time traveler in history, Anshan Iron and Steel Co., Ltd. Has also refined steel. Now you want to position the time traveler to advance this progress, then focus on this work! Other tasks are completed by other people.

The results are not consistent with the strength of the book itself, which is a pity. As a veteran, this book can still see some things I want to read. 1949 + Northeast + Metallurgical Heavy Industry. Starting from the golden three chapters, you can feel some period writing style, which is very gripping. I have to say that the subject matter is well chosen, the author's writing style is also delicate enough, and the narrative rhythm is slow, but this is the characteristic of period writing. Overall, it is good. For me, I hope that the author will write about life in Northeast China in 1949, and the real treatment and thoughts of workers and peasants in that era. The writing style may be more cold. In the latest chapter, the rice is ripe thousands of times. I also particularly like to use this sentence, but to be honest, it is still too high-level for you to talk about this with the people of that era. If you can continue it, Some ground spirit would be better. If you want to start with ambition and integrity, you might as well use the coldest reality to compare the hottest ideals, and then use the gradual rise of life and the enthusiasm of industrial construction as support. It is still not recommended to throw away ideals all the time. The theme of the book "Heavy Industry and Heavy Industry" falls here. Slowly promote industrial development. There are few book reviews. I look forward to the follow-up!

An engineer shovel has almost 100 chapters yet to be built, and there is not even a sample. In 1949, if you want to have the right to speak, it is much better to complete a mature and reliable industrial product first than to talk about it. The success of each product will strengthen your authority. Many things are difficult when you are a soldier, but when you are an official, you can say something. We readers should look at the real things that this kind of industry needs, instead of spending 2/3 of the article reasoning and feeding chicken soup.

It would be a pity not to visit Teacher Mao in this era, but with the current intensity, it is easy to be censored and killed.

Hold the grass, is it true that you have never planted crops? Do you know how difficult it is to build a glass greenhouse? Do you think you are a plant factory with potatoes that mature in 45 days? The normal growth cycle of potatoes is 60-120 days, and the growth cycle becomes longer the further north you go. It's not just temperature that affects plant growth. There are also light, nutrition, humidity and so on. If you don't understand, ask the current AI to stop making such ignorant questions. During the founding of the People's Republic of China, if you wanted to create food in the Northeast, you could organize people to go to the woods to hunt pine cones, hunt, and set up a fishing team to fish. At that time, the Shuipaozi fishery resources in the Northeast were very rich. When fishing boats can be built later, offshore resources will be very abundant. At that time, the sea was an untapped natural source of protein. It would be better if you build an ocean fishing boat. It is not difficult to build these as long as you have qualified steel.

In the subscription chapter, Chapter 8 talks about how to block the air duct and how to open it. What do you think? Reader, you don't need to top up your money? . ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​MbOUTOUT ​​Whether it is detailed enough to properly advance the plot development is the key to whether the book will be a hit. If you are unfortunate enough to die, I hope there will be successors.

I have always wanted to read industrial literature about the early days of liberation, and I have been looking for it for a long time. To be honest, the writing is okay, but the pace is a bit slow, and the advantages of later generations cannot be used. At least the management concepts are not expressed. . . .

Why not suppress the bandits? No matter what, we have to scan the surrounding safe zone. If you don't clean it up, how much will be consumed, how much will be wasted, how much will be lost,

Is there any Daiyuqingwenzi link?

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Didn't all Anshan Iron and Steel staff evacuate before liberation? I remember reading a historical file describing the six associate presidents. Most of these experts eventually became members of the academic department. It would be a bit too empty to work alone.

In terms of technical difficulty, I think it is more likely to be a water pipe at the level of 1949. No matter how you do it, you can't guess the author's idea.

At this pace, you shouldn't have come to the starting point.

The people are in charge, for the first time! ? You want to rebel?

The writing is actually pretty good. If you keep writing, even if it's not fairy grass, it will be enough to solve the book shortage However, the shortcomings of this book are also obvious. The author wants the protagonist to take more responsibilities and pave the way for subsequent accumulation. This is understandable. However, there are a few shortcomings. One is that the identity of the protagonist is very vague. He is responsible for the maintenance of the blast furnace but does the work of the director of the factory. He has to take care of everything, so the length of the article is too long. The second is the rhythm and excitement. The problem is that it is too slow. If Anshan Iron and Steel is compared to a big house, there will be only one visit for 500,000 words from Shenyang to ask about the military shovel. The only contact with the outside world is the news of the liberation of Peking. There is no material support at all. We are writing online novels, and we cannot write about suffering for the sake of suffering. It is too deliberate In short, work hard for the next book

There will be no such window period until the War to Resist U. S. Aggression and Aid Korea. During this period, Europe is in urgent need of blood. It is the best time to borrow money to buy their second-hand equipment. Tanks and the like can be purchased as scrap metal, and they can still be used when assembled domestically.

I don't know if it's my imagination. Some people say that this author's writing is very unprofessional. But from my point of view, I think what he wrote is a bit too professional. There are a lot of descriptions, and they are all too professional. For example, if you update a chapter with 3,000 words, and then 2,000 words are written with professional content, do I think it is inappropriate? What about the progression of the plot? And I feel like it's very complicated to write. It's not easy for the author to understand these professional expressions. It's a bit thankless.

I messed up because of my lack of experience. If you want to scold me, just scold me below this post.

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After reading the free chapter, I ordered a few chapters and read them. How do I feel that the writing is so confusing?

The industrial literature of the era can be read in one sitting. There are no poisonous points so far. The description of the era is still very good. There is no system or Long Aotian, but it still looks good. It is about the construction of Anshan Iron and Steel Co., Ltd. In 1949.

Is that Song Lingyi the heroine? I like Shen Yue. I don't know if it's the author's setting or something. As soon as Shen Yue appears, she makes people feel very comfortable. And just from the two sentences of dialogue with the militia captain, I feel that this person is very straightforward and serious, and has a unique temperament.

It's a bit slow. It's been over 100 chapters and I haven't fixed a furnace yet.

It feels too slow. One furnace has 360,000 words. It has not been repaired yet. It feels like the plot has not advanced at all. Is it difficult for you to write one million words for one furnace? Are other people writing another million words? Isn't that the word count of pure water?

If you write like this, very few readers will read your book. You write books to make money. Can you make money by writing like this?

Too slow. . . There has been no plot advancement at all for such a long time. The story is well written, but if you look at it without progress, you will lose patience. The furnace has not been repaired and things have not been built for such a long time, and the plot is too scattered. . .

450,000 Words. Has the furnace been repaired?

It can be seen that the author still has some writing skills, but the pace is too slow and there are too few exciting points, so the results will not be good.