All Heavens: Starting from Shooting Condors, Immortality

You want to snatch model worker Huang Rong again, right?

Why does the protagonist feel like a psycho?

If you have the strength of the Other Side Realm, you can't push it horizontally in the Condor Shooting game. The protagonist can't do it.

Now that I have grown up, I realize that there is something wrong with all these things.

In the second chapter, Xiantian Taoist read the Western Emperor Sutra and then Lun Hai Dacheng recited a poem and said that the golden elixir entered his belly. In the third chapter, he fought with someone and asked if he had bought insurance (in the Song Dynasty). . . It's poisonous to death

Just look at the introduction. Another system that covers the sky passes through the Shooting Condor. 😅I really don't know what these authors think.

Covering the sky and traveling through the sky to shoot the vulture? I don't know what you think? Even if you travel to Fengyun, you can do it!

The world of martial arts is a joke, and too much of a show is too much.

The writing is not interesting, and the main character is sometimes pretending to be cool and then feels stupid at other times. I despise the kind of protagonist who has completely time-traveled and used modern pretense in front of others. What he says is understandable to others. Pretending to say words that only he can understand is called a fool. Also, he has not just time-traveled. He knows the world he is in and writes poetry when he meets people. This is also a solo travel. If there is an opponent in a group, he will self-destruct in minutes.

Can't you just concentrate on becoming an immortal? I'm here to watch the fights and fights, not the love stories and studs.

The common problem of many authors is that they are just like themselves when they first enter the society. They always feel that they can do it and I can do it, and they always want to write their own style or tell the story in their heart. In fact, as long as you can make money, you can write any story. As long as readers like it, the story will be simple and easy to write. For example, killing and killing all the way, mindless pushing, invincible and refreshing, how to gain feelings. Many people may not like it, but it is easy to make money if there is a market.

Guo Jing, listen to my advice. If you don't understand Huang Rong, please help me.

Huang Rong, who has been tested by every cross-traveler, has now become swollen. Some time-travelers feel that the sluggishness is too severe and have begun to test other characters such as Li Mochou. 🤣

After reading the previous chapters, there are too many different kinds of jokes. For people who don't know the king of these jokes, it seems incomprehensible and affects the perception.

First of all, your immortality and sky-shielding martial arts have already collapsed at this point. What motivation does the Condor Shooting have for you? Readers will not feel that it is useful because you are already immortal. If it is time-traveling and the Condor Shooting integrates limited resources to allow the protagonist to achieve an ability similar to immortality, book readers will feel a sense of accomplishment.

. . . . . . Fall in love? Leaving Dapu! ! !

The language is too stiff, like a composition, not like a novel. The fighting scenes are very poorly written, and you just wave your hand at every turn, and then what? I suggest you read the original work of Zhetian, the original work of Shooting the Condor, and then look at what you wrote. Isn't it really possible to use AI more for polishing?

Huang Rong

I feel like the protagonist looks a bit like a little Yakuza

Why do you choose TV series if you don't like TV series?

Without Huang Rong, there would be no Shooting Condor. Just because she is very popular. Everyone accepted her. After all, Huang Rong is still fragrant.

End the World of the Condor as soon as possible. You can go to other worlds, such as Tianlong, Tang Dynasty, etc. If you accept Huang Rong and add Huan Huan,

I don't understand why there are so many funny jokes in a fantasy novel. No wonder so many people complain about it. It's so ridiculous.

Sang Wen, uh😓, because I am a fan of novels, I have a filter for this character. Sang Wen does not look good in the novel, but he just sings well.

The overwhelming combat power is just a dust for you.

I didn't want to see him getting married to Mu Nianci. I don't know why so many people like this stupid woman.

The main character really doesn't look like a human being at all. All kinds of bad jokes come out casually. There is also a cultivator who is nagging at a group of martial arts practitioners. He doesn't look like a cultivator at all.

Why Marvel😅