Return of the Spell: Start as Enichi Tsukuni

The writing is monotonous and boring, just for the sake of showing off. For people who know both demon slayers and curses, I really can't think the plot is good. There are all kinds of sentimental feelings and a bunch of empty words of enlightenment. They talk about risking their lives. The writing is very emotional and is actually very casual. It fails to reflect the difficulty of the battle and awareness. Also, Enichi's Hinata's breath is someone's normal breath. You might as well write a Tanjiro template. Generally speaking, the idea is good, but in fact it is not satisfactory. There is still a lot of room for improvement. The above is purely a personal opinion.

To be honest, the configuration of Jiguo Yuanyi plus Tian and Tyrant is not very good, and it cannot highlight the role of Jiguoyuan Yi. After all, in the world of magic, isn't the protagonist the same as Tian and Tyrant? I can't see the role of the template of Enichi Tsukuni, but if the author lets the protagonist Enichi Tsukuni add the power of a magic spell, then this book will become a cool article about a generation of masters of the magic spells who challenge the world of magic. Just like before the appearance of the Black Flash Knotweed, the spell response was still a spell response, but after he appeared, it became an elbow spell response.

I am also an author of cursed fanfics. During the time when I started writing the book, I have been intensively searching for cursed fanfics on the site. I have also read this book. Let me talk about a few problems. First, the protagonist's golden finger has not been localized, which would be very abrupt. First of all, the spell setting means that to kill the curse spirit or curse master, you need to rely on spell power or spell tools, and Tian and Tyrant are no exception. You can take a metal bar and use a set of Breath of the Sun to cripple a special-level curse spirit? The other issue is the combat power. Demon Slayer's combat power cannot be compared with that of magic. It's the same if you click on Yuanyi's template. Whether Yuanyi can surpass this god and the tyrant is a matter of debate. The third problem is the connection of the plot. It's okay that the protagonist's appearance will trigger a butterfly effect, but you have to have a twist and how to trigger the butterfly effect. It can't be said that Gojo Satoru took the protagonist to the magic high school just to get together with the second graders of Kozune Hisuhito and Zenin Maki. The original timeline of the two grades was originally staggered. That's all for now, come on.

It's a bit difficult to read more than ten chapters. The protagonist has only unlocked a few percent of the progress. He has all kinds of sons of gods, the sun is burning in the eyes, and the will of gods is cut off. This is too embarrassing. I originally disliked demon slayers because they were too harsh. Although the level of the spell is not high, your description is too exaggerated. I don't dare to think about what it will be like when the progress reaches 100%. Think about the description of the protagonist. The performance has completely failed to keep up with the description. If you don't have the strength to do this at the beginning, it will just look awkward.

Is Enichi's first reaction when he sees Gojo Satoru a fight? You are invincible, kid. Just how Crocodile has shaped Enichi, you have never found fighting interesting. The title of the strongest, and the fun of fighting, for Enichi, it is better to farm with the person you like, and then you play the role of Enichi here, and fight with Gojo Satoru, what? Gojo Satoru also killed your wife like Muzan?

Unbelievable, normal people know that experience cards can be used to save lives, but when you use them for the first time, you use them just to experience the feeling of fighting with strong people. This protagonist is incomprehensible. The author wants to set up a martial arts idiot? I feel like a fool anyway

Isn't it just that the Demon Slayer Curse is just like the Yigu hitting the bulge phase - forget about Jiguo on the side of the road, the smarter primitive people came to modern times and suddenly became equal to Einstein? Demon Slayer will never admit that no matter how good-looking the floor tiles are, they are still floor tiles.

I couldn't stand it after reading the first chapter. I started by killing my teammates. Where did you come from?

It's a classic and exciting name. Books with this main character are likely to be sold out.

To write this kind of thing, it would be better to write about Tsukuni Yuen traveling through time and then slowly integrating into the world. The timeline can be pushed earlier, and it is more in line with the character. It is too rigid at the beginning. He fights as soon as he comes. After the fight, the strongest one appears, is taken away, and trained. It is not interesting. He is not invincible immediately, but he has to write the feeling of invincibility, and he has to pretend to be invincible. The character setting is not as good as Fushiguro Megumi.

Author, don't you even understand the basic settings of spells? In the cursed worldview, everyone has the power of a curse. The power of the curse comes from people's negative emotions, but ordinary people cannot control their own curse power and cannot feel it. The effect of the curse is that there is no magic power in exchange for physical buffs. At the same time, because there is no curse power, it is impossible to see and destroy the cursed spirit (Fushihei Shiji and Zenyuan Maki rely on curse tools). It emphasizes that the protagonist has no curse power and also says that the protagonist is not the curse. Are the left and right brains interacting with each other? What does it mean to have the effect of Tianyu Tyrant when the stripes are turned on? Because of the curse of the twins, Maki has been passively squeezing the magic power of her younger sister Mayi. At the same time, the magic power in Maki's body is constantly being eliminated. As a result, there is always a trace of magic power in Zenyuan Maki's body. Can even the basic settings be wrong when writing a fanfic?

I used the experience card at the beginning, what does it mean?

I couldn't stand it at all after watching the beginning. During the Hyakuki Night Parade, Fushiguro brought Japanese knotweed to the entrance test 😰 Has the author read the original work? And Japanese knotweed can't suppress Nuo? In the original book, the knotweed cannot be suppressed until it was eaten by ten fingers in a short period of time. If you eat them slowly one by one, this won't happen at all.

The setting is wrong. The protagonist has no magic power. The sure-hit effect in that field is invalid for the protagonist. Moreover, he can freely enter various enchantments.

The combat power value of the spell was deliberately kept very low. Generally, supersonic speed is enough. Super-light speed, which will burn the body to ashes, is definitely impossible. But even so, it is impossible to fight with magic in a world with low martial arts like Demon Slayer. The ugly Tsukuni may not be able to beat Nanami. Most of the pillars can only be destroyed by one three-wheeler.

If there are not enough milk dragons, Ji Guoyuan will have a red milk dragon

The knotweed is holding the grass and shouting, no one really thinks it's a show?

Monotonous and confusing timeline, AI text

Poisonous. Please take a look at the spell settings. Secondly, I really don't understand. What is the purpose of writing a role? For the protagonist to become a continuation of the country's fate? Forget about acting, even dress up like Xu Guoyuan? ! It would be better to write a continuation of the relationship between the two countries and travel back in time. Secondly, I really don't understand the system rewards. The Breath of the Sun and the extension of the country's relationship are already at the ceiling level in Demon Slayer, but the reward is the breathing method branch? Brother, could you please check for yourself how the breathing in other systems comes from? It's like learning. There are obviously formulas for you. You don't need to learn the formulas, just the answers. Don't say that the author didn't understand the setting of the curse. He didn't even look at the background setting of Demon Slayer? (#－.－)

Can't beat Gojo Satoru after fully experiencing the card? ? ? Then why fight the ghosts? Forget about surrendering! !

You act like a ghost, you don't even have sun earrings, and even Wu Pei ignores you when he comes.

No, why do I see that the breathing techniques you wrote have special effects and actually exist? 🤔 I remember that the special effects of Demon Slayer's Breathing Technique are just drawn for better performance. In fact, they don't have these elemental effects. It can't be ☁️ 😄

They all say it doesn't look good, but they are all apprentices, so I'll give it a try.

Is it possible that a logically coherent and smooth plot does not require the author to explain to readers one by one why the content is described in this way? I just said that your AI was not fed properly and you were already crying.

I would like to ask the author. I signed the contract a few days ago. How about collecting and reading? I would like to refer to it. Thank you!