
Douluo Dalu: Wulin's Brother, the Dominant Xuan Spear God
斗罗:舞麟之兄,霸玄枪神
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- Ongoing
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- 1.4M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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- 7d ago
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- Qidian
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Recruiting for heroines
Capture the heart of Xu Xiaoyan, the number one strongman under the starry sky; Conquer the Star God Sword Crazy Starlight Valkyrie Ye Xinglan Redeem the devil's dependent fallen angel Yuan En Yehui: Gu Yue is still indispensable, Na'er is still Gu Yuena Friends who have ideas can comment and discuss 😆😆
Clarify the issue of nanny stories and female protagonists
1. Many book reviews are saying that this book is about a nanny. Let me explain: I don't know what everyone's definition of a nanny is, but from the beginning to the end, the protagonist never said that he took special care of Tang Wulin, right? During the special training, whether to fight or not, I didn't say that I should give all the good things to Tang Wulin. Even the Golden Dragon King's bloodline was not absorbed by Tang Wulin. The protagonist also used this to enhance his own energy and blood power. He couldn't take all the Golden Dragon King's bloodline away. Let's not talk about it for now. Old Tang Tong disagreed. The protagonist must be the elder brother, and he has taken away all the blood of the Golden Dragon King. Unless he finds a way to evolve the Blue Silver Grass into the Blue Silver Emperor, Tang Wulin will be useless relying only on the Blue Silver Grass. He cannot be allowed to absorb ten years of Lone Bamboo and become an invincible pole vaulter. 2. Regarding the heroine, the book determined the final heroine to be the single heroine Ye Xinglan based on the discussion in the comment area in the early stage. Shushu explained it in the author's words in a certain chapter, but some friends may not have noticed or seen it; and the general arrangement of other female characters was also explained in the comments of the heroine voting, friends can go and take a look. If you have other questions or some areas have not been handled well, you can leave a comment below and Shushu will reply. Thank you all book friends for your support! ! !
Female lead vote
1. Xu Xiaoyan: Gentle and cute on the outside, tough and independent on the inside, delicate and soft in body... If he is not the heroine, he is just an ordinary partner, but he will not be assigned to Le Zhengyu anymore. He is too proud and personally feels that he is not suitable. 2. Ye Xinglan: A blonde swordswoman with a proud and competitive personality and a persistent swordsmanship. If it is not the heroine, it can only be the follower of the protagonist (because of the protagonist's gun skills), and it will not be given to the little fat man. 3. Yuan En Yehui: The twin martial souls of the Titan Ape and the Fallen Angel, who carry family secrets, wear men's clothing for a long time, and have a cold personality. If she is not the heroine, she is just a partner. However, the protagonist will help him solve the problem of fallen angels later. There is a favor, but it is also not given to Xie Xie, because the original relationship between the two originated from Xie Xie watching her when she was taking a bath, and then Xie Xie kept being attentive to her because of guilt, and was finally moved. This is a bit vulgar. 4. Gu Yue: She has a complicated heart, cold on the outside and hot on the inside, extremely high IQ, possessive, and has a mission to revive the soul beast. If you are not the heroine, you can be an ally or a partner, making her fearful and convincing. Although it is a love continent, Gu Yue is really not suitable for falling in love. Her ideas are too complicated, especially when the protagonist is a pure human being. 5. Naer: Gentle, clean, pure, sensible, sensitive, soft on the outside but strong on the inside. If she is not the heroine, of course she is the younger sister. Na'er's character is simply the perfect younger sister, and in fact, she regards the protagonist as a brother she can rely on (written in the previous chapters) 6. Wu Siduo: Proud and competitive, cold and stubborn, strong-willed and single-minded, capable of taking things and letting go, she is a typical genius character. If she is not the heroine, she is a loyal follower. After all, Mu Qiang is her true character. Compatibility with the protagonist: Ye Xinglan>Wu Siduo>Xu Xiaoyan>Yuan En>Na'er>Gu Yue. (It may be more subjective, please forgive me) About Gu Yuena: Na'er already has a place in the protagonist's heart and is emotionally involved. In terms of the protagonist's character, he is really unfamiliar with who Gu Yuena is. About Dai Ling'er: There were too few scenes in the original work, and his talent was not high. What impressed me most was that he was scared out of his wits under the bed and was a pure loser. If it's a harem stallion, there's no harm in keeping it. About the male protagonist (no female protagonist): Although the original work and this book say that Tang Wulin is just like a girl, but... I am not Sister Li, and I cannot accept it. It's a bit much to write about, and the issue of the female protagonist is too important. After all, when watching Douluo fandom, everyone wants to see their favorite female character have a different life. You can comment: single/multiple heroines + heroine names. For example: single heroine + Ye Xinglan or multiple heroines + Ye Xinglan + Wu Siduo. If there is already a heroine you want in the comments, you can also like it directly (counted as one vote) Friends who have other ideas can also leave comments or join the book group for discussion. Thank you everyone! ! ! Finally, a word of caution: The above content is purely the subjective opinion of Shushu himself, please don't comment if you don't like it. As of next Monday, I will count the votes and find the final heroine! ! ! Some friends may think this is too troublesome, but please forgive Shushu for his difficulty in choosing! ! !
Two questions about this book
1: The protagonist is a time traveler who has read the protagonist. It is not because the protagonist has read the original work, but because you want to write about the brotherhood with Tang Wulin and the family bond. If the protagonist is a time traveler who has not read the original work, he had no father and mother in his previous life, and ended up traveling to Douluo Continent with both parents and a younger brother. He felt the warmth of the family and decided to protect this family and his younger brother. This is very reasonable, but the protagonist has read the original work, but it smells strange. Two: The issue of combat power is mainly divided into three parts 1. The author has set a very high combat power for the protagonist, far superior to his peers, but has not set up a corresponding opponent for the protagonist. As readers know, the protagonist is getting stronger all the time, but lacks the corresponding expressiveness. You can crush class zero with one ring, and you are still crushing class zero with five rings. In the middle, there is a fifth ring to ban the account, thinking that the opponent's level will be improved, but after the battle, he goes back to the outer courtyard to abuse the food. It gives people the feeling that Jack Ma wants to show off that he is rich but ends up comparing his worth to workers with a monthly salary of 3,000. 2. The protagonist has no shortage of resources. The protagonist does not need natural treasures or skills to practice his gun. Collecting natural materials, earthly treasures and skills is one of the cool points of the novel, and it can be used as a branch line to serve the main line. Without it, there will be only one main line. 3. Regarding the babysitter problem, it can be seen that the author wanted to write about the bond between the author and Class Zero, but he gave the protagonist a combat power that far exceeded that of Class Zero. As a result, the protagonist could not blend in. As soon as the protagonist entered, other characters were just pendants, so in the end, the protagonist was alone and everyone else was in a group. This leads to the fact that if the protagonist wants to deepen the bond with Class Zero, the protagonist needs to make continuous efforts, because the protagonist himself has no way to grow with Class Zero. As the gap between the protagonist and Class Zero becomes wider and wider, and the protagonist's extremely low demand for resources, other members of Class Zero are unable to give effective feedback to the protagonist, making the protagonist a de facto nanny. The most recent evidence is the Soul Tower, which was completely dragged up by the protagonist, but the tower itself is of little help to the protagonist.
Discussion of protagonist's combat power
In recent days, many readers have reported that the combat power of this book has collapsed, so Shushu explains it here. First of all, the protagonist is now the Soul King, and his physical fitness and various indicators are at the Soul Saint limit (close to the Soul Douluo), so it should be feasible to add the 100,000-year soul skill, the Nine Tribulation Styles, and the self-created spear skills to bring his combat power to the level of an ordinary Titled Douluo. Then the protagonist shattered a total of five hundred thousand year soul rings, plus the invincible power (mental power) that he shot out with one shot today after traveling to Zangfeng for three years, it should make sense to destroy a super Douluo Cai Yue'er who did not hide at all, was not a defensive spirit, and did not release his battle armor. After that, it would take time for the soul rings to condense again. In addition, the protagonist's one hundred thousand year soul is the spiritual power provided by Yun Ming. As the master of the Poseidon Pavilion, it is normal for him to keep it for himself, not to mention that he has a relationship with Leng Yaozhu, not to mention that Yun Ming himself does not have a full soul ring that is more than one hundred thousand years old. After all, Dousan's original work is a bit unclear about the soul ring, and I can't help it. Secondly, Dousan and Doukai exist, so the protagonist's normal combat power is now equivalent to Wu Zhangkong wearing a two-word Doukai. At best, it is a little stronger, but there is still a lot of room for improvement. Finally, if you have any other questions, you can leave a message below and Shushu will definitely reply! ! ! Of course, I hope you friends can be more sensible. If you really can't accept the combat power or other aspects of the protagonist of this book, Shushu has no choice but to wish you friends can find a book that suits them. I would also like to thank you for your support of this book. Thank you, Shushu! ! !
Without Gu Yuena, the heroine still falls into the old Tang family universe. She can't change the ending of the Tang family universe. That's really boring.
Writing Dou San without Gu Yuena is like the West without Jerusalem, and without Tifa in 3D, it can only become a relatively failed novel 💔💔💔
No, buddy, this is your update speed. Where can I find it? It's so fierce.
The author must keep writing, come on
It looked ok at first, but then it just sucked. I also ate the Tang Xue steamed buns. Most of the people who came to pursue this book liked Dou 3, but in the end, 50 soul bones were absorbed. Well, no matter what happens in the back, I can't stand it anymore 😄