
The Ultimate Creatures Begin with Justice League
究极生物从不义联盟开始
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 86k Words
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Myriad Worlds
- Updated
- 2mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The dungeon is opened with just a few cards at the beginning, and the writing is very unfriendly to people who have never seen the spell return, and it looks very confusing.
I've never seen Conjuration before, it feels so confusing.
The author writes American comics, not anime. I clicked in and took a look. I entered a copy, but I couldn't understand what he wrote.
The spells are too written, and the only ones you get are ten spells and enhanced emotional absorption? If I make a deal with Gojo directly, I will only get six eyes when I go back
I haven't read Spell Return, which is too unfriendly to us. Isn't this book mainly based on American comics? 😭😭😭
Author, your dungeon is too long and the main world is too short, which makes people feel whether the dungeon is the main world or the main world is the main world. The main world has only five or six chapters, and now there are 25 or 6 chapters in the dungeon. It feels like it should be over with a few dozen chapters. If you have written 3 or 40 chapters in the main world, it would be better to write so many dungeons.
This power system is a bit like a novel I have read before, "All Heavens". The protagonist is everyone with abilities. The protagonist initially controls his body perfectly. Bones, muscles, and blood control their own growth hormones, allowing nutrients to flow to various parts of the body at will. Then they imitate and copy other people's physical talents, such as Big Mom's steel balloon, Whitebeard's super strength, Barrett's physical strength, and Kaido's vitality (which can only be simulated in One Piece) The last step is to control the body's cells, bacteria, viruses, gene chains, and bioelectricity.
Can Superman fuse behind the protagonist?
I feel that the pace of the copy arranged by the author is not very good. There are only about ten chapters in the main world and more than thirty chapters of spell plots. Not to mention whether the two audiences overlap, but there are too many scenes arranged. Readers who originally read American comics have no patience to wait for more than ten days for the copy.
Why not parse animals?
If you don't read it again after writing it carefully, the article will have a ridiculous amount of typos.
For a protagonist like ours, shouldn't you give him a superhuman body? He loves saving people so much. The most interesting thing is that the only thing he wants to die is that he can run faster than anyone else.
In just a dozen chapters, the author's self-interpretation and design of the work has appeared in as many as five or six places. I think some of them cannot convince me, so I say goodbye.
The ultimate is that your ability becomes mine with just one glance, and then the copied ability can become qualitatively perfect and multiplied infinitely 🙂