Pirates: from the Great Era of the Valley of Gods

There are several points. First, you come up with a new system and call it Golden Finger or Dragon Ball system. In the end, half of the cheating is just using the tricks and giving the local domineering restraint power. . As we all know, Dragon Ball's biggest weakness is the Saiyans. If you exploit half of the abilities and then use some restraint, then you might as well be the strongest and most domineering at the beginning. Selling dog meat over sheep's heads is a crime. Secondly, you distorted the character of one of them. In the original story, Kaido himself wanted to be the boss and ignored Charlotte Lingling's recruitment to let you become the second company🌿, so he took refuge in you. How should I put it, Xiaobai. Third, being a nanny to Kaido is for the sake of the group. What the hell is being a nanny to Rocks? Garp also went to help fight Im Wulaoxing. You're a demon. . Then Rocks took the initiative to disband the pirate group before he died? ? ?

Might as well eat the sparkling fruit, the Dragon Ball system in the Pirate World will collapse

It's okay, but Dragon Ball is a bit over the top, Wudi Wen

Why use the original work as an introduction?

Wasn't the captain always Gloriousa, a member of the Rocks Pirates?

The combat system of this Dragon Ball is too high in One Piece. In Dragon Ball, Kame Senjin can destroy the moon. Why not arrange a devil fruit, for example: animal type, Renren fruit fantasy beast type, the ability of the immortal form is to control Qi, and can use Qi to launch various attacks. For ability development, you can also refer to Under One Person, Dragon Ball, Bleach, and Naruto. , Spell return to battle, dungeon and warrior's telekinesis, etc... For example, before the fruit ability is awakened, you can only control ki to attack, or form a layer of protective ki on the body surface and a layer of ki on the hands to enhance the attack power like the weapon color. You can also refer to Naruto's shadow clone or the incarnation of Pili puppet show. After awakening, use Qi to control natural elements. Please refer to novels about cultivating immortals. For example, using Qi to temper weapons for a long time makes the weapons like the flying swords of immortal cultivators. On a deeper level, for example, the Immortal of Six Paths unifies all phenomena. The Qi he attacks contains the power of Yin and Yang of the five elements and can annihilate everything, even the soul. You can also refer to the eight magical skills under one person. For example, the Liuku Immortal Thief absorbs the qi between heaven and earth to restore itself, and swallows the qi of other living beings to strengthen itself and recover from injuries. After the ability is awakened, it can cover an area with qi to form a field. In the field, it can absorb the enemy's qi once the enemy's qi has been sucked out. Just like Sartan was turned back into a skeleton by Im taking back his power, you can also refer to the reversal spell of the spell to regenerate the body. Daluo Cave Observation, combined with the Observation Color, can see the flow of Qi in other people's bodies and the Qi around other people's bodies, so that you can predict the direction and moves of their attacks. For example, a swordsman will use The first sword he swings can predict the next one, ten swords, and one hundred swords. Since this is not a simple sight and hearing color, the effect of the sight and hearing kill is greatly reduced. Even if the red-haired sight and hearing kill can restrain the sight and hearing color, yours is not a simple sight and hearing color but also has fruit ability, so when your fruit ability is not awakened, You can disperse the energy in your body to form a field, and you can sense everything in the field. After awakening, you can refer to the spells to return to the field and attack the field. For example, the enemy cannot hide in the field, and you can control the energy between heaven and earth. You can use the energy to form an air blade to form a field such as the Demon-Suppressing Chef. The ability of Qi is a universal puzzle that can be integrated into any system. As long as you have a rich imagination, you can integrate things from other systems. For example, the spiritual pressure in the Shinigami can be replaced by air pressure, which basically makes you invincible 🙂

Why don't you take Kozuki Toki? That fruit is a bug, and it's a beauty.

Looks good, come on. 🙂

Now the Valley of the Gods really has a basis in reality, but the parties in Loli Island are still much "wilder" than the Valley of the Gods, and the senile girl Im is not as good as Epstein

By the way, wasn't it 1522 when Luffy went to sea?

This book is a bit busy, not as powerful as the Lord of the World, but with the same IQ as the roadside boss🙄🙄🙄

Are you not going to let Jhin eat the phoenix fruit? Oda also drew a picture of Jhin eating the phoenix fruit, and kept his arms that can be used to use swordsmanship.

It's fun to write, but you have a lot of typos. Doesn't Qidian have a writer's assistant to help you mark the typos?