Prosperous Red Building

Just look at the introduction. . Let me complain, the treatment of the second son is very unreasonable, and he was not born by his aunt. Which one of Jia Lian, Jia Baoyu and Jia Rong is not rich in clothes and food? And when the Emperor asked you what reward you wanted for being a Jinshi, why did you leave it there to make a wish? Also came up with one, two, three. . And. . Are you going to tell the emperor about rectifying clan culture? The second point is to check the old shortcomings? Is this an act of extermination? Is it possible for you to ask the emperor to help you with matters such as raising children and corruption?

The author's writing style and ideas are of a very high level, but every detail deviates from the original Dream of Red Mansions, which is very inconsistent. For example, In the first three chapters, Daiyu first enters the Jia family, and in the fourth chapter, the protagonist is flirting with Daiyu. The protagonist asks Daiyu, "Have you read The West Chamber too?" Daiyu replies, "You are allowed to read it, but I am not allowed to read it." The author who writes the protagonist's image description is still a child. That is to say, the author knows that the protagonist and Daiyu are less than 10 years old at this time, so he can still write this kind of dialogue, which is really awesome.

Either he is from Tomato, or the author has not graduated from college. Please choose one.

As soon as I came in and saw the introduction, I had no desire to read it. Don't you feel embarrassed by what you wrote? He also bowed down and prayed for a long time, and asked for one thing and two. I guess the author thinks he is quite talented.

The writing style is just okay, but the narrative is not good, with a hammer here and a stick here and there.

Anyone who can write such an introduction must have a serious brain disease.

The writing style is quite sophisticated, but there are many readers of Red Mansions. It's hard to say whether your writing style will become popular.

It's 2026, don't be disgusted by Dream of Red Mansions, and don't write about so-called young men and beauties. Write about this kind of sadness that cannot bear the mountains of bones and forgotten surnames. Sometimes I suspect that the author of such works is a spy of the Tungus barbarians 😅

I didn't even read the text, just the introduction. So the big-faced second master Bao becomes the third master Bao here? Was the male protagonist the offspring of Mrs. Wang? Is this still considered a Red Mansion fan?

The author's writing style is good, and he is skilled in choosing words and sentences. The plot needs to be read again. At present, the advancement speed is moderate and there are few Yuanzi dramas. However, as the protagonist is the legitimate son of Mrs. Wang, the only ones he can conquer at present are the maids and Daiyu. It is normal that the length is small.

Nothing to say, go down and settle down

There is little love but no big love, extreme egotism, mania, paranoia, pick up the bowl to eat meat and put down the chopsticks to curse! Is there anyone who can say good things to this pervert? What's the intention?

. . . . ? Your protagonist's name. . . Wrong seniority? The Jade generation is Jia Lian, the Jia Zhu generation You and Baoyu are twins, his name is Baoyu, your name is Jia Yu? ? ? ?

The track on the Red Mansion is a bit complicated, some are quoting classics, some are trying to fix things with the system, and some are rebelling. This book doesn't seem to have obvious features now. It follows the track of the imperial examination, but it also touches on the imperial examination.

Just the fact that Mrs. Wang has a Buddha's mouth and a snake's heart is disgusting enough.

You have to choose one between Sese and Logic.

In the past, I didn't dare to say that there was something wrong with other people's books, for fear of being scolded or criticized, but this book has too many "flaws", too many dramas, wrong backgrounds, and wrong ancient rules.