Tokyo: Anmei Cartoonist

How can I put it, the old two-dimensional style of play, party struggle, tsundere, brother and sister, defeated dog, plus some articles that are different from the domestic novels and literary genres. Current flaws: 1. The younger sister is not lovable (due to personal preference), she is only arrogant, and the author has gone even further to increase the force value. Now he has become a very possessive and capable brat. 2. No matter how you look at the other female characters now, they are all losers. After all, you see, the sister basically stabilizes the male protagonist, and the male protagonist relies on various conditions to stabilize other female characters. That is to say, my sister's writing style is based on the light novel style, with strong women and weak men; the other characters are written in the domestic literary style, and are basically manipulated by the male protagonist. After all, in the original novel, they did not fall in love with the male protagonist because of the style of domestic novels. Especially since the author took it upon himself to eliminate the ecological niche of local girls, and now this vacant position makes it even more obvious that all other girls are clowns. . . In short, if you want real brother and sister to become husband and wife, then I can only say it's over. . . . 😒

So far, the overall rhythm is great. I'm either an old 2D character or an anime watcher occasionally. It should be good if you just follow the rhythm. Now there are more than 100 chapters in which the male protagonist has started a business and the female protagonist is a chaebol princess. I don't know if it will collapse in the future. I think this kind of daily life with a career line is good, but in the future, I feel that it can only be 500 chapters at most. It is a pity that this kind of daily sweet article cannot be written as a full-length novel.

Classic wooden head, classic idiot in love, classic key interruption, classic Asasi Yang Wei male protagonist

The average age of the audience for this book is 30+

Obviously in the early stage, the main career line was supplemented by a romantic comedy, wasn't it played well? Everyone watched it happily. Ever since the confession and confirmation of the relationship started, the Asura Field and the inexplicable main emotional line of the club plot started to become boring and there was no enthusiasm for subscribing. The key is that the female character appeared in the early stage and there were three invisible characters whose lines were not developed. The protagonist has already fallen into the Asura Field and there is no room for them to enter, so is it just a supporting role?

This kind of writing, this kind of characters, this is 2016!

There is only one question, why isn't the heroine called Chen Rui?

It's a classic tsundere, but the author has thought deeply about it, can everyone tolerate her being arrogant now?

Chen Rui, when will the lemons ripen?

What is the second time Sarumaruden, this Nikkei style, the eye for selecting works such as (Chino) is very comfortable I don't quite understand those who copy the three major migrant workers One is that these are all very long novels, and the protagonist can't be said to be completed in one or two years when he is a humanoid printer, let alone have enough time to write other things, and when he is a human Shape Printer is purely an act and is no longer acted The other is that their success also has elements of the times. There are already a lot of conspiracy theories about Naruto. The one who was born only two years ago in the beginning is absolutely amazing. The Bleach also has limited strength in the early stage. I have seen the video analysis before, and those cool and poetic lines are very interesting. Stylish costume design and cool super power system are the factors that are very popular in the future. I don't know much about One Piece so I can't comment And there are many people who died suddenly due to various accidents. For example, I really like a book called Danterian's Bookshelf and Wolf Sin And I hate this genre very much. The Magic Circle and CL were thrown out first. What's the difference between this and Landlord throwing out two bombs first? One is recognized as a masterpiece, and the other is a milestone in redefining a genre. I can't bear to watch another Zhanhongtong show in the future. Although it is also a good show, why can't people think that the first two are the best? That's it for the complaints about the topic. The current pace of this book is also very comfortable. I think it is food for the old two-dimensional people, so I can look forward to it, but there is no guarantee of the follow-up. Currently, Kyousuke and Kirino have appeared, but I think Kirino really doesn't need to slap my sister like that. One is that Kirino's original work can't bear to see his brother fall. Luo, and their relationship is actually not bad, but although they are brothers and sisters here, they are still in the estrangement period. They can wait until a little relationship is developed before they are so bold. This is how her popularity was lost to Liuli and the model. Also, it seems that the black cat and the earth girl have not appeared yet. Will these two characters still appear? It seems that the local girl will not appear. The famous scene of the woman fighting in the animation should be gone. In addition, the theme of the comic is not sure whether the Dream Eaters will appear

It's really strange that you can still see my sister's fan works in 2026, but I hope the heroine is not my sister, and it doesn't end up like the original work, just a piece of rubbish among a bunch of diamonds! ! ! Arrogant and arrogant, the most important thing is to be arrogant and not arrogant.

Publish works under different pen names, then expose them later, and then cause an uproar, pretending to be ruthless. This is an old routine of copying articles. What's so strange about it?

I would like to ask, why do these novels, which seem to be directly borrowed from anime, have to be renamed and published? Is it because fan fiction doesn't make money? Then the protagonist changed his name and posted it and made money?

As some comments said, spending so much time describing club activities is the biggest failure later. No matter how much I criticize the male protagonist in the past, the core audience of this book can accept it, because everyone has watched anime from ancient times. Although it is annoying, it has little impact. As a result, I have been writing about the club for the sake of being a saint in front of others, and the others are obviously to be collected. The heroine was simply thrown aside, and the point of getting together with Saori was too early, so early that the others lost any reasonable suspense of competition, and only her sister could compete. Or maybe Saori had such an advantage that for some reason, she was able to ride on the face of a flying dragon. It should be said that in light novels, a character who is full of affection at the beginning, not arrogant and has no shortcomings, is too influential. If you want to write about Saori, you shouldn't be full of affection for the male protagonist from the beginning and keep making brave moves towards the male protagonist. At the beginning, the old-fashioned setting of a love idiot could be used to fool the past, but it is impossible for readers to accept it. This should be the reason for the collapse of this article. The progress with Saori is fast, and the room for ambiguity with other heroines is lost. In the end, missing a girl is the most unacceptable thing. Among other things, it is absolutely inappropriate for the girl group member and Ling Nai's best friend to also be abandoned.

I feel that the relationship with Saori was established too early. Other characters could have been introduced, but now they have all turned into having affairs.

It would be great if I had the protagonist's style It grows on the protagonist Then if the protagonist is really good to the heroine, I will not wilt This hero is mainly not good to the heroine, so I will not stop and let him use me to hurt others😭😭😭

I'm speechless. How can this author hide his identity? What's so cool about it?

The author is a man and a woman. I'm not saying that men can't do it, but I just need to wear gloves when typing. I'm just in love and don't want to be cheated on.

I haven't subscribed in the past few days. I watched it today and the plot of the game is still not over yet? It's really too watery.

After copying all the texts, there is no need to put on several vests and set up memorial arches, right?

Forget it if the original work sucks, even you will come

Came from qq reading. . . Only 2 of the 5 female protagonists were included, the ending was hasty, and there was also a cartoonist female character who has not been seen at all 😅

I felt something was wrong after reading half of it, so I quickly canceled the custom order and took care of it, but it ended up running away soon... 😭 Forget it, it is one of the few Japanese manuscripts that has become a high-quality article. At that time, two light novel categories in Sanjiang were copied from Japanese comics. One was unfinished and the other eunuch ran away. At least half of the book had a beginning and an end, and the number of words was more than those two books, and the results were better than those two books 😵

By setting the male protagonist as a scumbag, the book would be much better to read and write. The reason why I abandoned the book in the middle is that I feel that the male protagonist is becoming more and more mentally retarded. The setting of the book is too noble and I can only write the male protagonist as mentally retarded to avoid the emotions of those girls.

Sure enough, it's a mess. Besides, I'm chovy, so take care of your daughter 🥵

It's all unfinished. Can you please change the status to "completed" so that I can get my health back with the two coins I invested?

I thought I was going to exert my strength, but you told me it was going to be over.

Old friends are like leaves falling in the wind, withering away one after another. When I think of this book, I read it again and it's over...

You don't need to read this book after team building. There is not enough emotional foreshadowing. In other words, in fact, Ling Nai's proportion is the largest in the early stage. The relationship line of Phoenix Hall is not accumulated enough. The part where he becomes a boyfriend and girlfriend is too abrupt.

It's bad. It suddenly died. I didn't hold it tight. I remember it looked pretty good. I said I wanted to raise it, but I live in Bengbu. I can't even find a group to complain about. I'll give you a monthly ticket to commemorate it. Have a good journey. JPG