Crown of Common Destiny

You are like a good screenwriter. You describe the characters' expressions, language, and actions very well, and the special effects are also good and detailed. The pace is very slow, and most works have small plot points, and the fun points are at the front, but you pile all the settings at the front, like reading the instructions for your novel. I think you may be an author with a strong sense of picture, but readers don't have so much imagination, which gives me the feeling that you are picking on readers. Are you describing memories at the beginning? If you are good at character description, describe the character in the front, establish the character image, and reveal it later. This can show the characteristics of your style, plot points, and readers' desire to explore. If you are good at describing battles, write about large battlefields and confrontations with action and language. It will be fun to fight from the beginning. You can also introduce the world's combat system and let readers understand your strengths. Choosing readers is what you have to do from the beginning. If the later settings can be integrated into the plot and the plot is faster, it can also be a good work.