A Journey Through the Heavens That Begins with a Demon Hunter

My brother didn't just take Xili out of the city to avoid the enemy, he just wanted to defend the city with his mother's heart. If you use Wushuang to defend or allow people to escape, you can do it; but you are just a broken demon hunter, so you can't change the outcome. At most, two more people will die on the opposite side. Pure water drama

The wizard's troublesome people deserve to die as always.

I read it 22 times, and it's well written, but the growth in strength is too weak. The protagonist in the first chapter has this strength, and the protagonist in Chapter 22 still has the same strength. The plot design is reasonable and not a big problem, but for old readers, it is not exciting enough, and they are desensitized to ordinary plots.

A demon hunter, doing the work of a paladin, missing a piece of his brain? Why do you go against the army? After finishing the plot, I fed everyone a pile of dung, and then cried and wrote a single chapter to explain it. What bullshit? Why don't you just delete that plot and rewrite it? Do you really think that the saying that a mouse poop spoils a pot of porridge is nonsense?

Everyone is here for the Demon Hunter of the Heavens, but the protagonist in your novel does not look like a Demon Hunter at all. He needs to be changed to a Paladin. Except for the way of fighting, which is somewhat similar to that of a Demon Hunter, the Demon Hunter is not as involved in the war as you are. Fortunately, it is Western Fantasy. If you put it in the background, you have to label the protagonist as preventing unification (if you are a native). It's okay to be a native of Cintra, a time traveler, and a demon hunter. I don't believe how much you love Cintra. Jing Ke assassinated King Qin because Prince Dan valued him. A scholar will die if he is a confidant. The Queen of Cintra is very good to you? What's more, she asked you to take Xili away, and you are still here to defend the city. You can be regarded as a smiling tiger and two black dog sharks)

The plot these days, uh, I just can't understand it. He got the title of knight. Hey, I don't understand it. The protagonist is a time traveler. And it's the identity of the protagonist. The attitude of people in the wizarding world towards the identity of the protagonist as a demon hunter. Where does he get the sense of belonging? You haven't shown many ties to this country, and you don't have any relatives here. I can't stand the behavior of these soldiers. This is understandable, after all, it would be uncomfortable for a time traveler. But the problem is, this is war. The protagonist's current strength cannot be changed. She clearly asked the protagonist to help take Ciri away. The protagonist is still here to help him defend the city. The protagonist's current strength cannot end this war. Don't be afraid to keep it like this, or be afraid that you won't be able to leave later. He is not invincible either! You actually can't stand this behavior and miss the order and items of the earth. Then you should form a force and flatten the world. Let the world develop as you expect, or should this plot be a turning point in the protagonist's mentality change, paving the way for the protagonist to recruit people and develop his power❓ But if it later returns to the state of the witcher fighting alone, this plot will feel... Also, I really can't get into the part of Knight's Charge when I read it personally, because it felt quite abrupt anyway.

Do you, a demon hunter, also want to be an Astartes?😏

The content is seriously inconsistent with the introduction. It is impossible to see what the introduction says. The world of a witcher is so boring that I can't even imagine it.

Why did the eunuch have bad grades? In one sentence, the time traveler is still a virgin in a world full of unscrupulous demon hunters, and still has a fighting ability.

Since it's Zhu Tianwen, then at least around fifty chapters should go to another world, but now it's hundreds of thousands of words, and it looks more like a witcher fanfic, and I don't even know where to go in the next world. My rating is medium, so don't rush to read it.

It doesn't look good. I'm completely off topic later.

The main character's behavior is different and the plot is too scattered

No, what about the system? Dead?

The writing is good and the plot is good. But somehow it doesn't make sense. The main character is like a loser. Do it here, do it there. I also like to rush alone. What can I say? I miss the earth's food, paper, and so on. The protagonist has traveled so long and can't even make a piece of paper? Also, your money is also a gold coin, and it feels worthless. No matter what you do, it feels useless. Your money is just a number. And the plot is a bit frustrating, semi-grinding. The protagonist is not a time traveler, but an indigenous person. It gives the impression of being an indigenous person. It's just a time traveler's skin. For example, when the guy who just entered the city called you a motherfucker, he just called you a motherfucker. The protagonist seems to be deaf. And the city lord is also 500, 500 as agreed. He deducted, but you didn't do anything to him. Others should compensate others, but he deducted from you. You don't mess with him, you're a coward. Is it okay to hit a sap? Is it okay to hit him, break one of his legs, remove one of his arms, and gouge out his eyes? What are you afraid of? What are you cowardly about? In addition, the protagonist's combat power is also confusing, giving people the feeling of being strong and weak. And for what little beggar, what elf team did he kill, and what did he kill again? What soldiers to support? Just do it. A gentleman has certain things to do and certain things not to do. After doing it, it keeps squeaking, squeaking, and squeaking, which makes people's senses very bad. Now the protagonist gives me the feeling that he is just a street kid, and so is his character. It gives people a homeless feeling. Your entire article makes people feel very happy to read it. Killing people everywhere. But the NPC in your article keeps insulting the protagonist, the protagonist. It's just weird. It feels good to feel aggrieved again. Neither frustrated nor unhappy. Also, why didn't the dots and dots appear behind the panels in your first few pictures? What kind of legendary thing is there? What is that? None of the next 50 photos appeared. What kind of system is this?

The protagonist's performance is completely unworthy of the stats, equipment, and skill tables he possesses. Using deepseek's simulation scene, the protagonist should be able to activate Wushuang: Against humans/ordinary troops ↓ 10 unarmored armed soldiers → were crushed by the protagonist's swordsmanship, and it took < 3 seconds to annihilate them all. 20 armored soldiers → Protagonist Yu Dou + Alder Suppression + Seal to clear the field, it will take 10-15 seconds to completely destroy them. 50 elite troops (including archers) → Arm guards to block arrows (6 times reaction speed) → Close close → New seal to clear the area, total destruction takes 30-60 seconds. Legions with more than 100 people → Youdou + the sword energy of the new sword + the battle of attrition of the seal, total annihilation (requires kiting tactics) takes 3-5 minutes. Knights (Heavy Armored Knights

No, bro, your progress is really slow. Where is your golden finger?

Let me give you one, two, or three compliments at the beginning... I was wrong... The original plot was to pick up the people and leave, kill a Nilfgaardian warlock on the way to silence them, and then stand on the hillside in the distance, watching the smoke rising in the direction of Sintra, and then turn around and leave. But! But! ! But! ! ! My brain was spinning, and I remembered Geralt's knighthood of Rivia for no reason. I thought that I couldn't lag behind others, and I was torn about whether I should arrange to be knighted in Temeria. Foltest can also be regarded as the hero. Then, I underestimated my patience and made a stupid mistake: when inspiration came up in the middle, I just ignored the outline and jumped right in... I regretted it the next day... I regretted it completely on the third day... On the fourth day, every time I opened the Writer's Assistant, I wanted to slap myself... During this period, I didn't even dare to browse the comment area. Every time I wanted to open the comment management, I was in a state of quantum superposition. , Probably like: "Would you like to read it? I guess there will be a lot of people scolding me... It's an estimate! There must be some scoldings! What if I don't want to read it? Let's take a look... Forget it, just finish writing this paragraph quickly, and then kneel down and apologize..." But there is no other way, I have already written it, let me apologize to everyone, there is still water in the middle, I am really not sincere, I really didn't think of how to end it at the time! ! ! ! Then, regarding several main opinions, the number of words in the comment area is limited, and everyone's questions are quite repetitive, so I cannot reply in detail, so I will reply here collectively. ——1. Damn author, you're done fighting here and you've got a knighthood. What will happen to the other demon hunters? ! The principle of neutrality has been broken, and everyone has a hard time! —— Answer: All witchers will not be wanted. My understanding of Emhyr is that he is "flawed, but a strong lord". In more than ten years, he turned Nilfgaard from a small country to an overlord dominating the southern border. While other kings only regarded warlocks as vases and advisers, he has already applied the power of warlocks to reality. When Cintra was captured in the original work, the magic city gate was breached by Nilfgaard warlocks. So, after seeing the power of the demon hunter, his first reaction should be to take the demon hunter for his own use, or how to cultivate such power, and then if you can't be used by me, I will kill you! Even if you can't kill me, make sure you are not used by my enemies. He is not even an enemy to the protagonist himself. The soldiers are bargaining chips, but the chips also come in different sizes. What you export will be exported. The strategic goal of capturing Sintra has been achieved, and the protagonist is no longer the enemy. The typical representative is the Battle of Sodenden, where the Northern Warlock Alliance, under the command of Vilgefortz (a very awesome warlock), defeated the Nilfgaardian army (miserably defeated), and Emhyr's ambition to continue the Northern Expedition was completely bankrupt. Afterwards, Vilgefortz and Emhyr got in touch again (they had known each other for a long time, but later lost contact, details are in the separate chapter of the work), and they also collaborated. Also Francesca (elven sorceress) also participated in the Battle of Sodden Mountain and severely defeated Nilfgaard. Afterwards, Emhyr drew her to his own camp on the condition of dividing the fiefdom and naming her the "Queen of Flower Valley", and successfully destroyed the Warlock Brotherhood. What's more, directly participating in the war is not a problem at all compared to directly assassinating the king in the game, and it will not cause much impact. Letho, a trio of demon hunters from the Viper School, was hired by Emhyr to assassinate Foltest, the then King of Temeria. Afterwards, Emhyr not only failed to fulfill his promise to rebuild the Viper School, but also wanted Letho. The situation of the witcher was worsened, but it could not get worse, just like what happened in The Witcher Three. ——2. The author who suffered a thousand cuts, you are trying to sell yourself like a sheep, but where are the gods as promised? Where did it go? —— Answer: It's not that fast to go to other worlds, but it won't be very late either. The setting is not to clear one world and then go to another world, but to leave through a cross-border portal and come back later. The subsequent plot is connected in multiple worlds, so the progress is not that fast. If you want to make specific arrangements, you may have to wait for one or two major events, after the portal is rebuilt. ——3. What about the system? Eaten by you? It's already sixty chapters, how many times has it come out? —— Answer: This is my biggest mistake. I'm really not good at writing the part of releasing tasks, completing tasks, adding points, and becoming stronger. In the middle of the Cowburg section, I wanted to add the system link. But later on, it was too abrupt (I thought), so I deleted it ┭┮┭┮. The system exists, but it will definitely not appear repeatedly. It assists the protagonist to become stronger, but does not guide the protagonist. I... Well, I don't like to be passive... And this is a writing error. In fact, less than two months have passed in the plot... ——4. You are so disconnected. Why does the plot suddenly become passionate? Also Knight Charge. —— Answer: I set a good ending for Cintra. After all, it is the place where the protagonist is canonized. If there is a title in the future, it should be Li De of Cintra. If Cintra is too coward, I always feel that it is a bit lost. (The author thought casually: I think the last paragraph was very good~~ Reader Sir: I'll slap you with my big mouth!! Author: Oh~ don't slap me in the face! I'm going to adjust the equipment with Party A tomorrow!) ——5. Damn you, I asked you to write a novel. Today your head hurts, your butt hurts tomorrow, and you're always sad for the spring and autumn. Just kill him! ! ! Fighting is fun! Don't even understand? ! —— A: Actually... I have actually written a book before... I wrote it in college, but then I stopped taking the postgraduate entrance examination. It was so fun to fight there! Pure fighting, fighting until every ten chapters I write, at least one will end up in a dark room, and I still can't be saved. I can only go to the editor and cry: Look, look, review him for bullying the Lun family! Editor: I will beat you to death! It's written like a pervert! These are all broken limbs and broken arms, with flesh and blood flying everywhere. Are you blessed by Khorne? Didn't the police call the police and arrest you during the review? It's considered a cover-up, you know? Sobbing + muttering: Fighting feels so good~ Editor: You are so happy for yourself, do you think I will save you? As for the sadness of spring and autumn, the author is the kind of person who is full of emotions and is easily aroused. He also likes to pretend to be a "tough guy" and feels that it is embarrassing to show his emotions. When I was watching a movie with my ex-girlfriend, let me give you an example of "Life Events". It was true that my partner was crying so hard in front of the computer that I didn't know what to make of it. I wanted to cry too, but I felt ashamed of crying for no reason. Until we broke up, she told me that she saw me crying. Every time the movie came to a tear-jerking scene, my tears came faster than hers. How could I pretend... So, sometimes I couldn't help it. I wrote a character, even if it was just a brushstroke, without even a name, and only used general words such as "people", "civilians" and "them" to refer to it. I would also think about what kind of emotion he should be at this time, and whether the protagonist is too cruel when his emotions are not fluctuating~ and so on. If you really have any objections on this point, I will try to change it. ——6. Your progress is too slow. You can't see the improvement of the protagonist. It just feels the same as before. —— Answer: When I started writing it, I thought it was very difficult to work on. There are no realms for witchers. Later, after designing the Goldfinger level system, I thought over and over again. When there was no clear level division, everyone's strength was in a superposition state (also known as being easy to fool~). After clearly dividing the levels, if you, a level 1 brat, want to fight a level 10 monster, your combat system will be broken. I just happen to be the kind of "high-level monster, right? Look at me, right? Look at your shit, and then I'll fuck you!" There are so many high-level monsters, and I feel really uncomfortable if I don't fuck two! But if you want to fuck him, you have to consider the power system you set, which is very uncomfortable. Moreover, the system is a way to improve combat effectiveness, but it is not the only way. The subsequent methods of improving combat effectiveness will include: strengthening equipment, secondary mutations, strengthening known methods, and introducing new power systems (I was already designing Warhammer World with two hearts and three lungs! But I didn't think about whether to go there. When I really went in, I couldn't tell whether the thing in my mind was the system or Tzeentch...) Seven... I haven't seen the seventh point yet. The above are the most questions and criticisms I have seen. Reply here. To sum up, I'm sorry, dear readers, my eyes have been affected by convulsions during this period. If you are still willing to support me, thank you all.

The protagonist has 5 attributes, strength 21, agility 19, perception 18, vitality 18, and will 20. Chapter 1 mentioned that when the protagonist first traveled through time, the sum of all attributes was not as high as the current attribute. The protagonist's lowest attribute is 18, 18/5=3.6. Since the panel does not have a decimal point, the decimal point is excluded. The single attribute is ≤ 3, so we set the benchmark point of a normal person's single attribute as 3. The protagonist has 7 times the strength of ordinary people (instantaneous power, continuous power), 6 times the agility (reaction speed, movement speed, shooting speed), 6 times the perception, 6 times the vitality (stamina, defense), and 6 times the will. I don't know how to calculate perception and will, so we only count strength, agility, and body. The protagonist's performance is: Unarmed attack → A punch of half a ton can break any bones of ordinary people; can bend steel bars with bare hands; crush human skulls with one punch in a single attack Armed attack → cut industrial steel at will; armed attack can tear ordinary steel and metal armor, such as cutting through paper with a knife. Skin defense → An ordinary person holding an ordinary steel knife needs a charged attack to barely break through this skin defense Muscle defense → An ordinary person holding a stainless steel weapon (200-300hv) needs a charged attack to cut through 3 cm; The arrow attacks of bows and crossbows with a pulling force of 200 pounds will get stuck in the muscle layer and cannot reach the internal organs Reaction speed → All unarmed, armed, and long-range weapon attacks with a pulling force of less than 200 pounds by professional soldiers in the cold weapon era cannot break through the protagonist's reaction. Moving speed → The normal jogging speed is only about 1/6 lower than the sprint speed of a modern horse racing horse; The sprint speed is about 67.5% Of the bullets of the pneumatic rifle and about 80% of the speed of the D-prefix EMU train Attack speed → about 30 times per second with bare hands and 20 times per second with weapons; humans cannot react and capture all the details of the protagonist's movements Endurance → can jog continuously for 4.5 Hours without speed attenuation; all-out combat The fighting duration is 24 minutes The following is the detailed data calculation: Using the data provided by deepseek, the attributes of a 60kg normal man who has exercise habits but has not been professionally trained are as follows: Strength→ ·Instant force (the maximum pulling force of one hand in an instant) is 45kg. (One-handed punching power) is about 1.2 Times body weight = 72 kg. ·Continuous strength (continuous pulling force of both hands) is 70 kg. Agility→ ·Reaction speed (visual reaction speed) is 0.225 Seconds. (Auditory reaction speed) is 0.175. (Complex selection response speed) is 0.4 Seconds. ·Moving speed (Walking speed) 1.3 Meters/second = 4.68 Kilometers per hour (Jogging speed) 2.5 Meters/second = 9 kilometers per hour (Sprinting speed) 7.5 Meters/second = 100 meters 13.33 Seconds = 27 kilometers per hour ·Punch speed (Punch speed/single punch ) 0.2 Seconds (Weapon attack speed/single) 0.3 Seconds Vitality→ ·Endurance (jogging duration/duration without obvious speed attenuation) 45 minutes (Fighting duration/taking boxing match as an example) If not hit in the whole process, you will enter a state of physical exhaustion in about 4 minutes. ·Defense (Skin hardness/Vickers hardness) 1HV (Muscle hardness/Vickers hardness) 10HV in relaxed state (Reference hardness of other common materials/Vickers hardness) Common industrial steel - Unheated No. 45 Steel 200HV, tungsten steel 1800HV Protagonist attributes (if the protagonist weighs 70 kg) → ·7 times strength (21 points) (Maximum instantaneous pulling force with one hand) 315 kg (one-handed punching strength) 504 kg (continuous pulling force with both hands) 490 kg ·6 times agility (19 points) (visual reaction speed) 0.0375 Seconds (auditory reaction speed) 0.0292 Seconds (complex selection reaction speed) 0.0667 Seconds (walking speed) 7.8 M/s, speed 28 km/h (jogging speed) 15 m/s, speed 54 km/h (sprint speed) 45 m/s, speed 162 km/h (punch speed/single) 0.0333 Seconds (armed attack speed/single) 0.05 Seconds ·6 times vitality (18 points) (jogging duration/duration without obvious speed decay) 4.5 Hours (Fighting duration/all-out fighting) 24 minutes (Skin hardness/Vickers hardness) 6HV, equivalent to hard leather, thick rubber (Muscle hardness/Vickers hardness) 60HV, equivalent to polyacetal engineering plastics, soft aluminum alloy, about 30% of common industrial steel

Heavens and heavens, it turns out that staying in the main world is a big taboo.

Just cut it when it's put on the shelf, right? Goodbye to you

Can this book still make it to the other side?😐

What happened? It was cut? What you wrote is okay. And you also apologized. You know what happened. Just don't do it again in the future.

It's a pity, I feel like there are very few fanfics about witchers.

If you make the change, it's best to say it before, otherwise if there is no movement for a few days, it will be considered as a cut.

Are there any novels with protagonists like Barbarian Warriors?

Xili, the father's name is very funny.

No updates for 3 days! What's going on? Run away with the bucket?

Damn, she's pretty. Why isn't she popular?