Douluo: the Dragon Soul Becomes a God, the Sword Box Proves the Way

There is only one request, torture San, torture Da Shi, and don't treat Shrek well.

Author, I have also thought about your setting. Since it is a sword game, don't use too many martial arts. You can just follow the example of Mr. Kong Kong. One soul ring and one sword, becoming a god is nine swords in one. Write in the direction of the sword fairy. As long as it's not too overwhelming, people will watch it.

Suggestion: Douluo and his colleagues should not think about how to strengthen the protagonist. It's about how to weaken the protagonist. After all, Dou Yi really got the fairy grass on the easy difficulty level, and got the Sea Universe Cover to guarantee a divine position.

The essence of fandom is interacting with the original characters. The first chapter must fit the plot of the original work, otherwise it will be difficult to retain readers of the fanfic. Come on.

No one will come to see if you haven't signed a contract because it's easy to eunuch

The problem with your book is that the first and second chapters are not in line with the current market. In the first chapter, there is a fight between a demon lord and a swordsman in blue robes. During the fight, he kindly said he was sorry for involving the protagonist, and then the protagonist walked in and got a bargain and got the soul and soul. What's the point of telling the truth about this kind of plot? It's better to write something interesting directly in the system and maybe it will retain more people. Your writing at the back is not bad after looking at the battle. Let's change it and see if it can be exploited.

Bro recommends going to q to read the first release. The Douluo at the starting point is still too difficult.

Wherever there is a market, send it.

Have you ever made an internal investment? If you haven't signed a contract, people generally won't keep chasing you because they are worried about poor quality or sudden interruption of updates.