Psychic Ascension, Beginning with the Witcher

After reading 5 chapters, I found that the protagonist is too weak. He is helpless against the control of fate, helpless against the system, helpless against prejudice, and helpless against poverty. The various helplessness of the protagonist is revealed between the lines. It is unpleasant to watch. The highlight of this book, or the readers it attracts, can only be mainstream abuse lovers and people who want to experience "pain". Logically speaking, demon hunters and psychics Ascension, there should be a plot with high combat power or frequent battles, but after reading 5 chapters, there is no information related to combat and combat power, and I have no expectations in this aspect. I feel that the core of this book is the two aspects of "daily + helplessness". I have no ability to break the helplessness, but also enjoy the bitter daily life. There is no need to time travel, reality is not everywhere

Don't put too much emphasis on things like fate. After all, the protagonist in the fanfic is the one who breaks fate and can do things that the original demon hunter cannot do.

The title of your book is wrong, isn't it? It has something to do with psionics. I saw Chapter 30 and didn't see anything related to psionics. In my opinion, psionics are just two things: Warhammer and Stars. You, a person who updates every day, updated to chapter 30 and even the title of the book didn't appear. Why do you think we can read it? As the book goes on, my first thought when I saw the title of the book was that a psychic mage beats a native wizard. As a result, I don't know the current plot. I don't know what psychic energy is. I don't know the future specifications of the protagonist. I don't know whether I plan to follow the plot or restart the fandom alone. Anyway, I don't know anything.

The main characters are indigenous. Wish everyone knows

I don't recommend creating original supporting roles, ooc, I feel like I'm not good enough

The plot is okay, but there is no difference between the protagonist who has traveled through time and the protagonist who has not traveled through time. Anyway, he is a protagonist who doesn't know anything. You said that the protagonist has played The Witcher 3, but he behaves like he doesn't know anything about everything. It's very poisonous.

Don't listen to those people who are so uninteresting that they make cool articles. It's good to take things slowly at your own pace and feel your growth step by step.

It currently has less than 100,000 words, and I feel like I have to write about multiple worlds. As far as the current Witcher world is concerned, the writing is very good, especially the portrayal of the supporting characters. The unscrupulous people who don't want to give money, the elves who want to save money, the loyal and cautious knights, and the fanatical soldiers are all very well portrayed. These supporting characters basically set off the overall environment. But there is currently a problem. The protagonist places too much emphasis on "fate". I think there should be a balance here, otherwise there may be some bad arguments in the future. In short, it's still good so far, please give me more updates from the author!

The plot has gone in an inexplicable direction. Is this because I am too frustrated and too lazy to control the plot?🙂

The plot is good, but most players have ideas about sorceresses rather than original elves.