Naruto: My Version Is Ahead of the Ninja World

In the Nine-Tails Rebellion, as long as you keep fighting the Yondaime and his wife, you can keep improving your strength. Why are you looking for ninjutsu?

Isn't it too stupid to arrange for Orochimaru to kill people and steal books? It doesn't matter to you. The others are the third generation disciples. Even if the third generation doesn't give him forbidden techniques, Danzo will give them to him.

Color contact version (Naruto, Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba) → Makeup version (One Piece) → Tattoo version (Naruto 2: Boruto) → Hair version (Dragon Ball)

After reading the second chapter, I don't want to read anymore. Why should you, a cannon fodder genin, be led by a jounin? You said it's okay for jounin to take many genin on missions, but why do you join the elite team? None of the skills you got from cheating have been exposed, right? The plot is a mess, the copy can't kill Naruto easily? There is also the Yang Kyuubi in it. Don't tell me that Minato can run out and kill you with that little chakra, or even the six paths jump out. Even if he does kill him, it's still a copy, right? Moreover, Asura and Indra Chakra reincarnate for a thousand years, and they don't care if they die in the six realms, right?

The title is just a gimmick, where is the lead? It's really annoying to use titles like this to trick people in.

It's 40 chapters. I haven't seen the version you mentioned, author, is so overwhelming.

So sweet and pure! Even if you write it right from the beginning, the protagonist endures the pressure of the Nine-Tails and kills the dying Yondaime with a kunai. It can be regarded as setting up a hook to make people want to see what happens. As a result, Luo Liba introduced Golden Finger for a long time, then ran to act for a dying person, and finally used a medicine bottle to hold the person to death? It's been a long time since I've seen the beginning of Shaobing like this.

Because he is too strong and omnipotent, the plot involves killing people and destroying countries. First of all, Otsutsuki is a white-eyed corpse bone vein. It can be said to be a universal slot. It has excellent adaptability. Anyone can use it if the eyes are dug out. The main reason is that it has a long lifespan. This is the essence of advanced life. Secondly, the Sharingan Rinnegan Wood Release is a bloodline derived from the sacred tree. It is the product of the extraordinary system of the natives of the ninja world being absorbed by the sacred tree. It is placed in the slot as a card and can be hot-swapped. So Uchiha Senju actually represents the ninja world, and the protagonist also comes from these two families, the reincarnated family of Asura Indra, which lasted for more than a thousand years. Otsutsuki is an American, and the natives of the ninja world are Japanese, so the Uchiha Senju are colonizers of mixed blood, representing the colonists who have the best effect in ruling the natives. As for the Uzumaki clan, the sealing technique actually comes from the extraordinary system of the indigenous people of the ninja world, and they have a trace of Otsutsuki blood through their intermarriage with the Senju. The past version and the future version have both, as well as the internal and external bloodlines of indigenous people and aliens. It also adheres to the traditional sealing technique as the core inheritance, and the sealing technique defeats Otsutsuki. Mixed, but not too Westernized. He inherited more of the essence of the original culture. He was a strong competitor for the protagonist. In the end, he succeeded. Uzumaki Naruto was born, representing the final victory of the natives of the ninja world, although it can only be regarded as a spiritual victory. Compared with Uchiha Senju, Uzumaki is not completely as Westernized as a half-breed, so he should be more suitable to be the protagonist. And the three treasures of physical healing, Vajra blockade, and Kagura's mind correspond to physical skills, ninjutsu, perception, and energy and spirit respectively. It can be said that the foundation is very good. It is the same principle as the Uchiha Sharingan, physical insight, copying ninjutsu, hypnotic illusion, and the three treasures of spirit, energy, and spirit. It is just that it is not as hierarchical as single magatama, double magatama, and three magatama, which can correspond to the lower, middle, and upper levels of the ninja system. If those super sealing techniques or senjutsu are incorporated, then the Uzumaki clan will have a stable inheritance route from genin to kage level, which has much better side effects than Uchiha's kaleidoscope. The most important thing is the longevity of the Uzumaki clan, which shows that when the Uzumaki clan grows up, they have the potential of Otsutsuki, and they are still the Otsutsuki of the ninja world. Of course, the fashion value is not as good as the colored contact lenses, so it is understandable that he was killed by the plot, otherwise Uchiha Senju would really have nothing to do with him. Clear hierarchy is an important factor in attracting fans. The Senju Clan does not have a clearly hierarchical setting, so many fans prefer Uchiha protagonists . Mu Dun either hasn't awakened or suddenly reached the shadow level. Like Byakugan, it doesn't feel like leveling up to fight monsters. But in fact, this bloodline is the most awesome, and it has no shortcomings, which is hard to understand. Uchiha is a killer tool, a mass-produced biological weapon, a short-lived evil that is rapidly upgraded, that is, from the reader's perspective, as a game character, so it is more popular.

In the third chapter, the poison is released. You are a commoner genin, and you are a four-person team entering the autumn path to get wind. What does the author think? You think you are not cooled quickly enough, right? When writing a book, is it possible not to use your brain? Write whatever comes to mind. If you want to develop the plot, it should at least be reasonable. Chunchun forced feces into my mouth.

Why do you want to engage in fire escape? It's inexplicable. You even use ninjutsu to exchange for some broken oil. You can make friends, but you want to use some broken oil to engage in fire escape. You are crazy. There is no unlimited supply of this oil. Why are you so depressed?

The new Naruto book is quite good. If the protagonist wants to join Konoha, he'd better solve the problem of the source of his ninjutsu and update it faster.

In the two chapters 61 and 62, the protagonist mentioned above did not fail... He grew up to be the most low-profile version of Sarutobi in the end? So what is written before? Where is your hook? Have a lot of sex with a little Hinata and then think that you are not a loser, right? Change must first have the strength to suppress.

Orochimaru was an artist ahead of his time. He developed tattoos in the ninjutsu version.

I have a question, why don't you try to explode Naruto's gold coins in the dungeon? There should still be time for a gamble, right?

When I saw the name of the protagonist, I almost thought Hongye had opened a new trap~ Damn the Yu family is still in the pigeon!

In the previous chapters, I saw that a member of the Hyuga clan died, and the caged birdman would disappear when he died. What you wrote is still there. I suggest you change it. The book is still good.

Don't make the two eyes different. You can switch them. Don't make one reincarnation eye and the other reincarnation eye. It doesn't look cool.

What's going on? It's 220,000 words and it's not on the shelves yet.

Single or more, no heroine? If you don't reply, the default is no heroine.

It's good-looking. It's considered a high-quality piece of fan fiction. It's better than the others on the list, and I feel like they're all fake 🙂

I think Demon Slayer is just a perfect ghost king with the bloodline and a sword skill, and then you can leave. Unless you also have a daughter, you can write a love line or something.